Me: Hi peoples new update hope you enjoy
Charlotte: Am I…
Me: Yes you're at the end of this part. My next story may involve Sontarans but I'm not fully sure.
Charlotte: At least I'm in it this time.
Me: WILL YOU SHUT UP ABOUT WETHER YOU'RE IN THE STORY OR NOT YOU BAKA SAN!!!!!!!!!!!! Sorry for yelling peoples she can get annoying… not really, I think that she's cu…oops.
Charlotte: Steel hand of doom coming out.
Me: HELP ME!!!!!!!!!!
Lizzie: Enjoy reading.
Suddenly the Pyrovile shot a blast straight at me and the Doctor and there was no way to escape…
Chapter 1 Life or Death
The heat from the flame was intense. I cowered in fear as the blaze got closer and closer. The Doctor whipped out his sonic screwdriver and aimed it at the fire. Suddenly the fire hit an invisible barrier. "Are we safe?" I asked the Doctor.
"Not for long, a soon the barrier will disappear," the Doctor replied. Suddenly I had a fantastic idea. I saw a fire alarm activator on the wall. I smashed the glass with my shoe as I kicked it. A very loud noise erupted all around the building. The sprinklers on the ceiling activated.
As the water showered down on us the Pyrovile screeched in pain. The magma on the Pyroviles body started to go out. Soon afterwards its whole body was just rock. Finally the fires in its eyes burned out. Suddenly the legs of the Pyrovile started to crack. Then its whole body started to crack and then the Pyrovile collapsed into a lump of rock.
However there was a down side. All of the rock collapsed…onto me. "NO!!!!!!!" the Doctor screamed. He started to frantically remove rocks from the mountain of the remains of the Pyrovile. I coughed and spluttered. I was alive at least.
Chapter 2 Activation of the ozone sparks
In the TARDIS me and the Doctor were frantically thinking. "What would the Pyrovile want with the earth now?" the Doctor asked rhetorically. Suddenly it dawned on me.
"Earlier when we first came here you said that the Pyroviles planet was stolen. Maybe they want to make this planet their home instead," I replied.
"It's impossible though I got their planet back to its rightful place in the universe." He answered back.
"But what if they don't know," I replied ignoring the doubt in his voice.
"You've got a point," he answered.
Meanwhile at the Vesuvius building Max was in his office. A Pyrovile was stood in front of his desk screeching at Max for his failure. "I'm sorry Pyrovile master but they escaped," Max was pleading. The Pyrovile roared and somehow Max understood it. "But the ozone sparks aren't fully ready for the powerful process, we never know the process could wipe us out as well," he Replied. The Pyrovile roared again this time threatening Max afterwards.
"Fine I'll do it," he pleaded "just don't kill me." Max opened a secret compartment in the wall behind him. "Activate the ozone sparks," Max ordered the alien computer in the compartment. "Ozone activating earth domination in 5 minutes..."
Chapter 3 5 Minutes
The Doctor jumped up and ran over to the TARDIS computer. "The TARDIS is picking up a signal. Transmitting signal to the sonic screwdriver NOW!!!!" the Doctor shouted. TRANSMITION COMPLETE appeared on the computer screen. "Lovely jubbly now just press the button and…" the Doctor said to himself. "Earth domination in 5 minutes," played out o the sonic screwdriver. "Oh no," I blurted out.
Chapter 4 Race against time
"C'mon TARDIS hurry up DON'T behave badly now," the Doctor shouted at his ship. The TARDIS whirred to life. Sparks were flying everywhere. "What's the Pyroviles plan?" I asked.
"The ozone activates, burns everything down, the heat from the ozone forms magma and the particle of volcanic rock grow and are joined together by the magma forming more Pyroviles. They live a life on this planet without humans altogether their just using Max (like that's a surprise)," the Doctor replied in a very shouty way.
Finally we landed in the Vesuvius building. "C'mon we've got to find the main computer that's controlling the ozone," the Doctor shouted at me.
"ALRIGHT I'M COMING!!!!!!!!!" I yelled back.
"You won't make it there though muahahahahahahaaaaaaaaaaaa!!!!!!!!!" Max laughed evilly.
"Max the Pyrovile are using you. They're not going to let you live," I shouted.
"Is this true?" Max asked.
However the Pyrovile didn't answer. Instead it turned to face Max and blasted a jet of roaring fire at him. A scream of death erupted from Max's mouth. Suddenly it was over. Max had been roasted alive. All that was left of him was a pile of scorched ashes. Whilst the Pyrovile was distracted we ran past him and headed for Max's office. However it didn't take long for the Pyrovile to notice. He shot a tongue of flame towards us. We got in just in time and the flames disappeared. The ground was shaking. It felt like an earthquake. But instead it was the Pyrovile walking towards us. The Doctor pulled out his sonic screwdriver ready to fuse the computer. But it was too late. The Pyrovile was at the door ready to toast us once and for all.
I snatched the sonic screwdriver out of the Doctors hand aimed it at the computer and pressed the button. "Earth domination in 1 min…" the Computer froze. "Run," the Doctor said. We ran as fast as we could the Pyrovile not far behind. But we were too fast. We reached the TARDIS and left just in time.
At the Vesuvius building. Pyrovile screeched in fury as their plans were ruined. Then suddenly…KABOOM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! There was a massive explosion.
Chapter 5 The beginning of a once in a lifetime experience
We arrived at the exact moment I left school. "So kid you did good," said the Doctor "what's your name?"
"Andrew but I prefer Andy," I replied.
Right at that moment my best friends Charlotte and Lizzie walked past. "Hey you two come here," I ordered them.
"Are these your friends?" the Doctor asked.
"Well der!!!!!!!!!" I replied sarcastically.
"Well then Andy do you and your friends want to travel with me in the TARDIS? 2 he asked yet another question.
"YES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" Me, Charlotte and Lizzie shouted. We all stepped into the TARDIS.
"Right then where to?"
Me: Yes I've finished my first story.
Charlotte: And I
Me and Lizzie: Was in it yes we know
Lizzie: More stories will be coming and remember to please review
Join The Doctor, Andy, Lizzie and Charlotte in 'The Phantom Cyberman' coming soon to Fanfiction.
