Thanks to Lucky-loyal-girl and her review I was able to see mistakes that I am making while writing a story.

My chapters will be far more longer thannow. Only downside is that it will take me more time to write them. I am little short on time because I develop web pages for a lot of people. I will write a chapter once in a week.Tell me down in the reviews what do you think. This story...The Wolverine...the new chapter comes around Thursday this following week.See ya' soon and happy writing!