A/N: Not ok i edited this like 7 times to make it better....send a message if u want the original

to see how bad it sounds, And it's really, really short. just so you know, the chapter name has nothing to do

with anything. my friend said i should put it on here,

And idk why i did the whole water thing but i couldn't think of any other way to wake him up

at the time so dont say its bad because water got through his suit ok?

hey, I know I'm not very good at writing and all but on my stories I'm just letting my imagination flow onto paper then onto the PC.

none of my stories will have to actually do something with the halo time line and stuff. i don't write a Lot but i thought it would be a good idea to write out what i want on

here because i love halo.... this is the website's motto.... "unleash your imagination" So stop sending me crap about how my stories don't go with what halo's time line is or whatever.

Chapter 2,

Do what your Daddy says

The Chief stands in a room with Cortana's hologram.

"So you think that's a good reason to wake me up?"

EEERRRRRKKKK!!!!

"What the hell???"

Suddenly the ship jerks and the Chief hits the floor, knocked out cold. The Frigate was being pulled in by Onyx's Atmosphere.

"Chief! Get up!"

Cortana realizes that he doesn't budge and sets off the fire alarm. Cold water spurts from the ceiling on to the Chief. Some water seeps through his armor and wakes him up.

"Awwww, my head."

"Chief yank me, Now!"

He pulls the tiny chip from the computer and puts it into the back of his helmet.

"What's going on?"

"We are being pulled in by this planet. Hurry, find an escape pod and get off this ship before it blows."

"On it."