Chapter one

Rain blew into the apprentices den and splashed Bluepaw's fur waking her up. Darn I was just being made deputy. She thought and then looked outsidde. " It's morning already?!" She nudged the sleeping she-cat next to her. " Wake up Ravenpaw! Come on. It's our first day as apprentices and I don't want to be late!" She mewed. " Uhh... go awaay I'm a medicine cat apprentice so... SO THAT MEANES YOU NEED TO WAKE UP NOW SO WE CAN START COLLECTING NEW HERBS!" A brisked voiced old she-cat said gruffly. "Amberfang! I'm ready let's go!" Ravenpaw jumped from her nest and followed her mentor out of the dark den. How come she listenes to her and not mo me? she thought misrably as she heaved herself out of her nest towards the slippery entrance of the cave. " Bluepaw! Youre late. We are supposed to go on a hunting patrol!" A pale gray she-cat called to her from across the clearing. " Coming Mistyfur!" She yowled back. "You should at least be able to catch a sparrow this time." Mistyfur mewed as Bluepaw approached her mentor. "Yeah Bluepaw. You should be able to catch somthing this time." A cream colored she cat smirked. " Oh shut up Acornpaw." Bluepaw hissed. "We all know that you stole my catch last time." Acornpaw looked fakely hurt. " I did no such thing. It looked like it was going to get away so I caught it for you." She said cooly. "Yeah right I'm sure you did." snarled Blupaw as she stalked off to join Mistyfur, leaving Acornpaw sitting there looking smug.

"Whew I'm beat!" Excaimed Bluepaw as she sat down beside Ravenpaw with a vole. "How did your hunting go?" Ravenpaw asked. "Great! I caught 2 sparrows and a water vole!" Bluepaw mewed happily. " Sounds like fun!" Ravenpaw exlcaimed wistfully. "If you want I could ask Mistyfur." Bluepaw suggested. "Awesome!" "Kay, ill go now." Bluepaw mewed as she raced off looking for Mistyfur. " Bluepaw? Where are you going?" A voice sounded from behind her. " I'm just going to find Mistyfur Lilyfall." Bluepaw replied. "Okay, But bring some fresh kill for the elders after." "Okay, see you later then." Bluepaw replied. As she made her way towards the elders den she spotted Mistfur.This is my chance to ask her to go hunting! She thought as she started running towards Mistyfur. "Mistyfur! Can I go hunting with- She was cut off by tripping over a tree root and falling into the raging river below. "Bluepaw!" She heard someone sream before her head was pulled below the water. As she was trying to swim up for air she started to feel weak. I need to go up for air. She thought and put all her strength into her last push, luckily she managed to get up ang sink her claws into a nearby small tree branch. Starclan save me! She screamed in her mind as her head swirled with ideas on how to get herself out of the river. " Bluepaw! Grab on quick!" She heard Lilyfall's voice and saw a branch she had stuck out for her. " Let yourself go! If you don't catch the branch ill get you myself!" She yowled. As Bluepaw let go of the tree she found herself yet again being pulled under the raging current then everything went black.

finally done! This really isn't as easy as it looks! BTW every chapter i'm switching POV's.

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- Smokeyfeb1