A/N: I'm seriously surprised with the amount of Story Alerts I got from you guys. You really rock, and it means a lot you think it's a story worth following =)
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Loopy-loo-loo - Thank you. Jack is a funny cocky guy indeed, and in DW he is a bit more light than in Torchwood, so I tried to mix a little bit of both
Jack couldn't stop laughing "I love your dance moves."
"I got pretty good at it, didn't I?" The Doctor was doing his famous dance moves, pretty similar to the ones he did on Amy and Rory's wedding.
"That is a new move." River said all of the suddenly, "I had never seen that one."
The Doctor smiled "Maybe I can do it again later."
"Maybe you can." She smile and kissed him.
"Really?" Jack asked, trying to sound upset "Get a room."
"Oh we will." River teased him.
"You know what; I'm going to get a drink."
"Bring me one too."
Jack turned to the couple. "Just to her, I don't drink." The Doctor added.
As Jack left they started laughing. Since they had arrived to the party the had been teasing him.
"Ok we should stop now, sweetie."
"Oh, already?" The Doctor was a little disappointed.
"You will not believe who is in there at the bar Doctor." Jack was bringing the drinks and had a big smile on his face
"Hmm?"
"You."
"What?" River sounded excited.
"That is not possible." The Doctor said "The Paradox and all of that."
"Where?" River was trying to find him.
Jack kept smiling "It's not this you" he pointed to the Doctor "is the one before the regeneration." The Doctor was speechless, and River was excited as Jack pointed the man at the bar.
"That is really not possible." The Doctor said now in a more serious tone.
"I like that you." River said smiling. "Great hair."
"I know right?" Jack smiled
"Humpf...Is not that great."
"Doctor are you jealous of yourself?" Jack laughed
"You don't understand, I was never here, that can't be me."
"Is someone impersonating you my dear?"
"It can't be Doctor. He knew me, we was acting like you did on those days."
"What did you say to him Jack?" the Doctor's voice sounded really worried.
"I didn't say anything special to you. I didn't want to risk it, because all tha Paradox stuff."
"It's not ME Jack; there is no Paradox, just something really strange happening. We have to go back to the TARDIS to see if she picks anything, I'm not sure if I can use my sonic screw driver on him.
"I will talk to him." River said heading to the bar, leaving the Doctor talking to Jack, but mostly to himself, like he usually did.
"What did she said?" The Doctor turned to Jack.
"She is heading to the bar, to talk to the other you."
"NO!" The music stopped at the same time the Doctor's yelled, so every head turned to him. The Doctor moved behind Jack, just in time, making everybody believe it was Jack who had talked.
"I'm sorry." Jack used is most charming smiled "It's just…"
"My fault." River turned to them again. "I'm here sweetie, don't be so upset." She was talking to Jack but looking behind him, to try find the Doctor.
"Please don't stop the music because of us." The crowed smiled, thinking with had been a husband and wife problem, and the music began again. "What was that?" Jack whispered to the Doctor still behind him.
"Is he still at the bar?"
"What the hell was that?" River was upset
"He is not, he went away."
"Great job, now we don't know what was that." River nodded to the bar. "Why did you do that for?"
"Sorry huney." The Doctor smiled "I was worried that he recognized you too."
"So what?"
"Well that…"The Doctor was trying to find what to say, and suddenly Jack realized what had happened.
"We don't know what information of the Doctor that thing has."
"What if it knows you killed me? What are you doing here? We can't risk that."
"That is right." River recognized. "But he still saw us."
"Well yeah, but he didn't really saw your faces, just mine."
"We have to go to the TARDIS, let's go."
As they were heading to the TARDIS, Jack held the Doctor for a moment, letting River go ahead. "You were afraid…"
"He had the information about River's death. She can't know about it, you know that."
"What are you two whispering about?" River suddenly turned back.
"Spoilers."
"Let's just find the TARDIS ok?" Jack started to walk faster. "There it is." He pointed to an alley on the other side of the street.
"I could swear we hadn't left her there." River stated
"You know what? I'm not with a good feeling, is it me or we are being followed?"
"It's not you Doctor, I have that feeling since we left the the Gala at the Hotel."
"We are close now, sweetie, open it."
The Doctor snapped his fingers, and nothing happened. He snapped it again, but the door didn't open.
"Sweetie?"
"Doctor?"
"What? I'm trying…"
"It's getting close."River said turning her head to the street. Something was chasing them, they could all fill it.
"Rory, Amy." The Doctor started to knock on the door.
"Don't you have a key anymore?" Jack asked
"He doesn't but I do." River smiled "You gave me some time ago." She said looking to the Doctor.
"Did I?" The Doctor was suspicious.
"Well you left it on the TARDIS control panel, so I assumed it was for me".
Jack laughed "Seems fair enough."
"Yeah, yeah, just open it."
As River was going to put the key on the key hole, she felt the doors slide, and just opened them. She looked to the boys, "Maybe this is why it wasn't opening."
"My TARDIS, what happened?" The Doctor was in despair looking for an empty phone booth.
"Let's go, I do not like this." Jack grabbed River's hand, and they all started walking really fast, out of the alley.
"What is happening?" River was looking to the empty street they were in now.
"Do you know?" The Doctor grabbed a newspaper from the garbage bin "When I said we were going to visit Delaware on Florida in 1973?
"Yes. And we hand up here in London, just when I wanted to meet this Delaware guy."
"Looks like I was wrong in the year too." The Doctor showed them the newspaper
"May 1963" River read it.
"The police box…" Jack started
"For the first time the TARDIS is going to go unnoticed."
"Ok, so this time, we have really police boxes, that look exactly like the TARDIS, meaning that we basically lost the TARDIS." River said as they were walking back to the Hotel were the Party was being held.
"Pretty much." The Doctor stated.
"There is one thing, I don't get it."River suddenly stopped. "We didn't remember seeing any police box on the way to the Gala, we didn't change our way to the TARDIS, and I'm pretty sure we are now doing, the exact same path we did coming back here, so why do the streets look different?"
The Doctor looked around and using the sonic screwdriver tried to scan the place, Jack got close to them. "So?" He asked
The Doctor held River's hand. "Run"
They run towards the Hotel, but as the streets had changed, they found themselves stooping near a post office; they could swear it was the Hotel, 20 minutes ago.
"Where are we?" River asked, trying to find out some clue of what was happening.
"We are not alone."Jack said, turning around and pulling his gun at the same time as River did it.
A strange voice sounded
"Hello Dad."
A/N: So what you think? any theories about anything on this story? haha I would love to know it
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