(Twilight isn't mine )

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I love this pretty rave girl chapter 2

Bpov (should I do anyone else's?)

After the awkwardly happy drive home, I spent the rest of the afternoon unpacking. Luckily I had my own mini fridge with freezer were I was able to hide my glow sticks my closet on the hand was going to be hard to hide. (Bella is scared what Emmet will say if he ever find out she raved so she is keeping it a secret like in Arizona) I mean when your closet is half full of bright, neon, UV, glow in the dark, fluffy items it's kind of hard not to notice.

After making my room look somewhat mine I turned on my computer to see if there were any parties/raves going on in driving distance. After tons of searching I finally found a 'secret' (yeah cause it such a secret when you post in on the internet) underground rave about half an hour away from forks tonight from 11 to probly when the drunk and the high teens wake up and leave. (I just thought that was hella funny, aren't I lame?)

"BELLS IM HOME" Emmet yelled slamming the front door behind him. I wrote down the address then quickly shut my computer before Emmet came bouncing up the stairs and see's it.

Just as I expected he marched up the stairs, and burst into my room.

"Hey Emmet" I casually said.

"Hey is it alright if my friends come over, the ones from lunch today?" he seemed nervous asking me this it was kind of funny to see a huge bear like Emmet nervous , he looked like he could kick anyone's ass how could he be nervous of his little sisters answer?

"Ya sure Em I don't really care, go ahead." Just as I said that two cars parked in the driveway and four beautiful people walked out heading towards the house. I looked at Emmet he just smiled and ran out of the room and me chasing him all the way to door.

(WOOOW major writers block at this point)

He opened the door and I realized I never really payed attention to what they looked like. The first to come in was a short pixie girl, very excited to be here she was practically bouncing up and down, with her was a calm blonde haired boy. Next was Rosalie, she was very beautiful and serious which made her perfect for Emmet they balanced each other out. Finally the most gorgeous man walked through the entry way he was tall lean with unnatural bronze hair.

"Bella this is Alice" he pointed to the pixie "next to her is jasper, Rosalie and Edward" so Edward was his name, it was old fashioned but fit him perfect.

We all decided to move to the hang out room which contained video games, giant TV, etc

"Ok sooo were all spending the night, except Edward he's being a butt and not staying" She said sticking her tong out at him. "Apparently he has to leave at 10"

Great hopefully they will be asleep by then so I can change then sneak out to go to that underground rave. If not ill have to make an excuse. Maybe I could say I wasn't feeling good go to my room and sneak out? Its good thing I'm way better at lying now.

"So what do you guys want to do?" asked Emmet

"Ooh lets watch a movie!" Alice practically yelled.

So that's what we did we watched three movies the first about some vampire falling in love with a human, transformers then harry potter. Then Alice, me and Rosalie just watched the boys play some video games. At 9 Edward left saying he had stuff to do and he would see everyone tomorrow.

At nine thirty I told everyone I wasn't feeling well and I will be in my room the rest of the night. I walked up the stairs into my room and locked the door. I walked into my closet and picked out my favorite was a blue cyber type top a white skirt black fishnet tights, blue fluffy leg warmers, blue , black and white cyberlox ( a type of tube falls.) and last a paitr of goggles! By then it was 9:38 , so I grabbed the truck keys( it's not the rusty old truck it's a new one) and the key to my door so I could lock it up so no one would notice me gone. I walked out the door grabbing a couple glow sticks on the way out. Quietly I walked down the stairs to see that the game room was shut and surprisingly quit.

I walked into the garage and got into the truck and started it, hopefully no one heard it. Or notice the missing truck.

The drive was pretty short and when I got there I could see it was just an old parking garage but was perfect. You could hear the music probly all the way down the road. Most were teen from the area of Seattle, Port Angeles, etc. When I got inside you could see people dancing everywhere and the DJ was on a higher platform so the music would eco in the usually empty garage. Most of the people were just in neon colors with some fishnet, only few when all out like I was.

Tons of people were looking at me probly never seen me before and was wondering who I was. Tons of guys tried to get me to dance with I did for some but they weren't very good dancer most people were jumping up and down, swaying or doing random moves. By the second hour I had to go find something to drink I found some guys who were passing out beer in cans so I knew they couldn't of fucked with them.

I stayed and had a couple drink with the guys. They seemed really nice actually and said they would keep contact with me to tell me when to net rave was.

the dj was playing some all right music but wasnt the stuff i was used to. I told the guys id be right back after a couple of dances. i walked right up to the djand asked him to play some skrillex. seemed like everyone was joined the dance floor in a neon body to body grinding session.

from afar i noticed someone alone leaning against the cold stone wall. when i finally got close enough i noticed they had the same bronze hair as edward. when i got closer he looked up and i knew just by looking in the emerald eyes it was him. he finally noticed me when i whent up to him and grabbed his hand pulling him to the dance floor. when i got a better look at him i noticed he was wearing a plain black fishnet shirt with nothing underneath and a simple pair of shuffle pants with goggles in his hair. after a couple of songs we both whent outside to get some fresh air, from the swetting bodies and smokey air.

"Nice moves" he said

"Thanks you to."

"Here" he handed me a drink

"And how do I know this isn't poisoned" I faked shock.

"Oh it is and when you're done with it I'll have my way with you" he laughed, I popped open the can and started drinking he did the same with his.

"So what's your name? I'm Edward."

"Isa" I didn't want anyone knowing my real name here at least not yet.

"Well nice to meet ya" he shook my hand and left.

I opened my hand and there was a piece of paper with his name and number in it.

OK so i did re write the chapter :) i actually like this