Here is another one. Didn't really change anything except towards the ending.
Come Back
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I hate the pristine white of the halls and rooms.
The continues beeping of the monitors telling me that one more life is hanging in the balance.
That still smell of something.
I'm sitting by her bedside and I can only wait.
Wait for the doctors to tell me her condition.
Wait for them to say her chances.
Sweet kami I hate this.
I couldn't stand it when my mother was here and even less that she is.
"Wake up."
"Mina-chan, please wake up."
I swallow the lump in my throat.
All that blood…
It wouldn't stop.
I laid my head down next to hers inhaling her sweet scent.
"Minako. Come on. Wake up. If you do we can go anywhere you want. I swear you can drag me to go sing."
This is the worst. It feels like talking to a wall.
Heh
Maybe we are both like walls. Hard headed and stubborn.
But I need you.
"Minako, come back." I beg.
I feel the tears drop again.
But I'm too tired you hide them.
I won't hide them. Not this time.
Even as two fall hitting her cheek.
"Come back Minako. I'm here waiting."
I clasp her hand in my own holding tight when I feel a slight squeezing of my hand and I know she-somewhere inside-hears me.
