Hi,
I just finished correcting my mistakes of chapter 1!
Enjoy !
Just-love-nyc
Nobody POV
"Let's go hunting" Carlisle said.
"Yippiie, finally a girls day" Alice yelled.
"Yeah right, little sis" Emmett said.
"C'mon guys let's just go" said Edward.
They were relying on their senses, searching the air around them, when Edward smelled something. The scent was overwhelming.
He blurred in a hunting speed.
He couldn't think, otherwise he would have realized that there was something special about the scent.
When he stopped running he heard someone crying.
That's when he saw her. She was the most beautiful girl what he'd ever seen.
Even if she was little, he kinda felt like he had to protect her. He hadn't realised that Emmett, Jasper and Carlisle had also arrived.
"Don't hurt her" Carlisle said.
Why would I hurt her, she was the most beautiful creature I've ever seen
"Do you smell it too?" Emmett asked.
"Yeah, there is something special about that girl" Jasper said
"Let's go find her parents, Edward you stay here, if you can handle it".
"Who do you think I am" Edward answered.
And so he stayed with the beautiful little girl.
After a few minutes Edward asked the girl for her name.
"My name is Isabella, sir" the girl said "Do you know where my mommy is?"
"No, I don't, but my family is looking for her, how long have you been here?"
"I don't know, one moment she was here, and the other moment she was gone"
"How old are you" Edward asked.
She started counting on her fingers "four" she said "what's your name and how old are you?"
"My name is Edward and I'm seventeen"
"You're much older than me" she laughed.
"Do you remember what the name of your mommy is and where your house is?"
"No, I don't remember anything" she started sobbing and tears fell down the ground.
"Hey, don't cry, it's fine" Edward said "but you don't remember anything, Isabella?" he wouldn't make her cry again, but he had to ask.
This time she started laughing
"you can call me Bella, just like my mommy"
"Sure, Bella"
Then Carlisle, Jasper and Emmett came back. "We couldn't find anything" Carlisle said "we have to take her with us"
"Fine" Edward said.
He turned back to Bella.
"Bella, we're going to take you with us"
She started laughing "really?"
"Yes, c'mon" then he took her in his arms and she held him tight.
In human speed it will take hours Jasper thought.
"Bella do you trust me?"
"Yes"
"Okay, then close your eyes and open them when I say so.
"Okay"
EPOV
When we came home Alice was already bouncing on her seat.
"Open your eyes Bella" I said and she opened her eyes.
"Let me see her, let me see her, let me see her!" Alice yelled and she came to us.
She tried to take Bella over from me, but Bella kept her arms tight around me. She wouldn't let go of me.
"Oh c'mon Bella, I'm Edward's sister, please come to me, all I want to do is play with you, please trust me"
Then Bella looked at me and I smiled at her. She let go of me and went to Alice. Alice and Bella were having so much fun that Bella didn't see Rosalie.
BPOV
Everything was new for me. When I was in the forest I was alone and a few minutes later there were 4 beautiful men.
One of them came to me and asked my name.
After a while I knew that his name was Edward.
He asked me if I trusted him and I said I did, and then he asked me if I wanted to go with them, 'cause they would take care of me, until they found my parents.
I really trusted him, because he was so sweet to me.
When I came at their home, there was a girl who was bouncing in her seat and she tried to take me away from Edward.
When she said that I could trust her and that she was Edwards sister I looked at Edward.
He smiled at me and so I trusted Alice and let go of him.
When I was playing with Alice I hadn't noticed that there was somebody behind me. So when I turned around to call for Edward, I hit something and fell down.
Edward immediately took me from the ground when I started crying.
He tried to sooth me and I stopped crying.
Then I saw the person I hit and she was so beautiful that I thought that she was an angel.
Then she came to me and gave me a hug
"I'm so sorry" she said "I'm so so so so sorry, Bella"
"How do you know my name and what is your name?" I asked.
"Oh sorry, I knew it because I heard your name and my name is Rosalie." she said.
"You're really beautiful" I said to her.
"Thank you, but you are to"
And I immediately knew that she would be one of my best friends, together with Alice.
I hope it's a bit better as before ;P
Corrected chapter 2 will be up soon && please review ;)
Just-love-nyc
