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Chapter 2: Staring Dude 1 meets Staring Dude2

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Whoa that's so American!

Was Marlene's first thought entering the cafeteria.

It looked exactly like those cafeterias in teenage films, where you think, no that's cliché it can't be like that in reality.

But now she stood there, seeing this room, with the many tables and there were the popular people, (including Vanessa and her friends), the nerds, the gothics and so on.

OK I'm just going to pretend I'm not here and try to get to a table far far away in the corner and then…

"Hey Marlene, we're over here. Come on sit with us!"

Mr. Stare called from a table on the left and everyone turned to see who he yelled at.

So much for going unnoticed.

She felt like shoving the staring Creeps head in his mashed potatoes but she got distracted by one of friends ( are they ALL so huge?) staring at her too.

So she tried to get away as fast as she could and sat down on a table as far away as possible from the Staring Dudes + friends table.

Paul POV

I sat at lunch with the guys and Kim when Collin, Brady and Seth came through the door.

Looking waaay to excited on Collins side and laughing their asses of at Bradys and Seth' side.

"OK what happened? Just tell us so we can go on eating." Jared said, I could tell he was just as annoyed as I was.

Stupid physics test this morning.

When Seth explained how that new girl turned Collin down and practically ran away from him I couldn't keep myself from chuckling.

I'd have loved to see that.

"Hey Marlene, we're over here! Come on sit with us"

I heard Colling yell across the room and turned like anyone else to see who the new girl was.

And there she stood at the door looking thoroughly embarrassed and…

Beautiful, she looked unbelievable beautiful standing there at the door with her strawberry blonde hair going past her shoulders and looking a little messy like she had a lot to go through this morning already.

Thanks to my wolfsenses I could see her eyes over the distance I got lost in them, I've never seen such a bright and shiny green in my life.

I couldn't stop staring at her, it was like the whole world got blurry and just she stood there looking at me and making me want to run to her and give her anything she wants, I wanted to hold her and protect her.

After some moments I realized that finally it happened to me.

The center of my life was occupied by her and nothing had place in it anymore.

There was just this girl I haven't even met yet, taking all the place in my head and my heart.

Seths POV:

Seth looked over at the door and saw how embarrassed Marlene was so he wanted to stop Collin from doing even more harm, but when he turned he caught sight of Pauls face.

And he couldn't help but laugh and say:

"Man I don't think you have a chance with her, Collin."

While patting him on the shoulder.

"Wha? Nooooo!" Collin had seen Paul now too "That's so unfair! I've seen her first!"

The others had catched up now and were either congratulating Paul or laughing at Collins pissed expression.

Marlenes POV:

He didn't stop, Staring Dude 2 (how she now called the guy now staring at her) just looked at her all the time.

He didn't even try to cover it up, Marlene wouldn't have been surprised if his mouth would've just hung open.

A girl from the staring-table got up and walked over to her.

"Hey I'm Kim you're from Germany aren't you?"

No shit, Sherlock.

"Yes my name's Marlene, nice to meet you."

"You too." Kim smiled. " Hey do you want to come over to our table and sit with us? You can meet my boyfriend and the guys"

She offered and looked so open and friendly Marlene almost gave in but..

OK pro and contra.

Kim is sweet and nice as it seems, that's a plus and I wouldn't sit here alone like the loser I am.

But MAJOR minus are Staring Dude 1 and Staring Dude 2.

"Uhm thanks but I'll just stay here if it's ok just adjusting a little… Maybe I'll come sit with you tomorrow ok?"

Marlene didn't want to turn the nice Girl down but sitting near the Arnold Schwarzenegger-fanclub with their staring issues wasn't her favorite thing to do.

As Kim turned with a last smile and began to walk away she had an idea.

"Hey ehm Kim, can I ask you something?"

After a short nod she continued: "Sorry if I sound rude but what's with your friends and staring at me? I feel like if got "stare at me" written on my forehead or something.

Kim laughed at that but Marlenes attention got caught by Staring Dude 2 getting out of his haze and turning to Staring Dude 1 with a very angry expression on his face.

She could even imagine their conversation.

Staring Dude 2: "Hey you stared at her? She's my staring-thing!"

Staring Dude 1:" But I stared at her first so she's practically MY staring-thing!"

Staring Dude 2: "I don't care if you stared first! I'm bigger and older than you and I'm going to chew you up if you don't stop staring at her.

Staring Dude 1: "Fine."

Marlene laughed quietly at the conversation in her head and immediately the winning Staring Dudes eyes glued themselves to her again and he looked like he just got his favorite toy car for Christmas.

Weird. Again.

Ok chapter 2.

Sorry with the changes of view, I just wanted to show this moment from all perspectives.

I don't know if I'm going to continue writing it because I don't really get feedback on how my story is to read and I really don't want to write here all the time and nobody reads it because it's not good or anything :D

So review? Then there's going to be another chapter if not I'm going to have to tell this story to my cats :D