um hi yeah i messed up a few things like acidentaly puting some wrong name therw out the whole first chapter here are the real names : Nobrac's real name is salfur : boncar's real name is phosph(short for Phosphorus and the "be" at the part where Brio's talking about the sideafects of the vortex

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chapter 2 12 mounths of pain

[insanity island,1996,11:00 am]

narater:the next day after Carbon's escape he awoke in side of a small tent he sat up and hit his head on a suport beam of the tent.

Carbon:ow.

Narater:he whent out side the tent to see a beautiful fox witch doctor....lady.
???:well your finaly awake.

Carbon:yeah......um....who are you.

???:huh you sure like to get to the point,(sigh) my name is tatonya, ta-ton-ya.

Carbon:right nice to meet you you mis. Tatonya,my name is.....um,i don't have one.

Tatonya:then let me come up with one..........ummmmm

Carbon:....

Tatonya:i think you should come up with one,not me. i mean it is YOUR name.

Carbon:ok.(she is so beautiful)

Tatonya:I know i am.

CArbon:HUH?!?!? you can read minds?!?!?

Tatonya:No but i knew you wheir thinking that is was beautiful How your wondering,just guessing i guess.

Carbon:haha funny.

Narater:next to the tent on the other side of a boulder just three feet away from the tent was crash bandicoot awakeing from unconsousness as he starts his adventure.

later that day Tatonya perpared Carbon for his adventure witch is vary long and well last almost a life time.

Tatonya:ok do you have everything i gave you for your first steps in life

Carbon:thanks.

Tatonya:bye!

Carbon:bye!!

Narater:after Carbon walked for what seamed 100 miles of walking he had nearly lost it until....he did.
mean while at Neo cortex's lab of evil gizmos and lil tinkering tools of mass distrucktion and doom,cortex is thinking of a plan of how to catch the two bandicoots.

Neo:hhuummmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm-
r dna Brio:stop that annoying "mmmmmmm"ing

Neo:right,now lets see we got two bandicoots on th lose we have a add mis-shapened one in our position.

Brio:well first what we need to do is learn all about the esacped bandicoots.

Neo:no that retarded....i got it, we need to learn all about the escaped bandicoots first.
and i have the perfect plan.

[later that day]

narater: carbon had stumbuled and i really mean that into a factory like area, he looked around for stuff he could use to keep him alive, as he searched he found a small tribal cookie jar......tribal cookie jar!?!?! Who writes this sh-....wha...this is only rated "T" ah sorry anyway, for some vary....vary odd reason he thought the jar would be useful,
then as he looked at it in vary child like amazement two vary poorly disguised robots came up to carbon and said...

Poorly disguised robot#1 : hello vary dumb mutation please give us a sample of your D.N.A. so we can take to to complate our mission to be friend you and take some of your D.N.A. so he can learn all about you so he can kill you.

Carbon:Huh..oh sure here.

Poorly disguised robot#2: foolish mutation give us your D.N.A or we will....wait do you just say we can have of you D.N.A?

carbon:yeah,here, now let me stair at this really cool JAR.

poorly disguised robot#1: um.....ok, please place it in the tiny thin glass thing.

narater:carbon put some off his hair in the small thin glass thing,then the poorly disguised robots leave.

Poorly disguised robot#2:wow good thing we got the one cotex thinks is a moron.

Poorly disgused robot#1: yeah i feel bad for the smart one whos gonna get his ass handed to him by the death bots.

[meanwhile]

death bot#1: Surender the D.N.A. into the small thin glass thing.

CRash:nehga?

Death bot#2: man this this guy must be some actor, he seems like he's really the moron.

Death bot#1: dude i think your right.

Death bot#2: oh sh-

[back at cortex labs]

poorly disguised robot# we are back and it was easyer then you could ever pixilate.

Death bot#1: you gave us the wrong guy we got the moron,but it does not matter we got the D.N.A

Cortex:ok...........anywho put the two small thin D.N.A. filled glass things in the computer.

Narater: the two poorly disguised robot start unscrewing the bolts of the computer to put the D.N.A. in the computer atleast untill the death bots stoped them and put the D.N.A. in the computer the proper way.

Neo:lets learn all about these mutants.

Brio: ill get the popcorn!

Neo : ill get the drinks!

Narater:after the popcorn and drinks were ready and eveyone got cozy Cortex hit play while brio took a sip of his drink,after 2 hours of what was like a amimal planet artical about every bit of info on the bandicoot race and carbon and crash.
it starts to talk about what elemant make up them.

person on Screen:crash bandicoot is made of the normal elements a bandicoot would normaly hold and human D.N.A. and 50% of the elemant of Selenium.

Coetex: HUH!?!??

person on screen:carbon bandicoot is also made up of bandicoot and human D.N.A but is 50.11119% of the element OF Carbon.

cortex:WHA?!?!?

person on screen this in afect in bodys carbon with powers over the elemant of carbon and other elements and also many frightful powers

, did you hear that.

Brio:[sound of a thumb poping out of brios mouth]huh?

Cortex: [face of disgust]eeh.

TO BE CONTINUED.

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sorry it took so long but i have alot of other things i do and i had to work on my science for this story cause i'm really fallowing the rules of the elements.