im back with another chapter il try to make it longer, but im bad at making realy long 1500 word chapters
oh ya Disclamer: I dont own avatar: the last airbender
the real reason for Aang being the comet will be revieled in one of the next few chapters
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on to the story
In the cell
Aang was in a depressed state, he did not know who he was. He did not know anything about his life. He did not know he was the Avatar.
He was in a dark damp jail cell with a dirty straw bed, a broken bench, and a rusted out toilet. The hall was narrow, and it stretched out in darkness with just a few torches to light the path for the guards, who stood silently waiting in the darkness always watching, making sure that nobody got out, and nothing came in. There was also a very large tapestry of the firenation bathed in the glowing firelight of the torches.
Aang was laying on the floor sullen and depressed. Trying to remember anything, anything at all of his former self, but to no avial. All he remembered was a giant explosion, but everything else seemed covered in a thick haze, where he was unable to notice anything, except some words to faint to listen to but still there. He soon gave up and waited for nothing.
On an unannounced signal a person walked up to his cell, and deposited a tray of food through a small slit at the bottom of the cold metal door. The food locked as if it had already had ben eaten but the former eater's body did not digest it well and it came out the wrong end then it fermented in a pile of rotted garbage(A/N wow i didn't know i could be that descriptive, i was just picturing my moms cooking). Aang grimaced when he saw the food and gagged when he had a wiff of the scent.
"You'd better eat it before it eats you," the server sneered.
Aang gulped, than held his nose and choked down the food finding its taste somehow worse than it appeared. He than found it working it's way out of his body, but he held it in there because it was all the nourishment he would get. he suddenly fell onto the hard surface and found himself drifting inevitably into a deep darkness.
Out of the darkness came someone, a female garbed in dark blue, with tanned skin and hazel eves. Her eyes were looking out into the darkness, seeing some kind of danger that Aang could not. She was shouting desperately " We need you, we need you..." her words faded into the darkness, than she did the same.
Aang faded from the dream and found himself uncomfortably sprawled on the floor, as of some torturer had positioned him to make him as sore as he could get. He arranged himself into a better position and sat in silence, pondering the dream, or maybe vision he had seen previously. He felt very strange, as if he had seen the person before, but every time he tried to remember if he had ever seen her the haze that blanketed over his memories hid everything from him. He felt worried about the girl.
A man walked down the hall , heading straight to Aang's cell than stopping to face him. He brought an aura of command with him and the walls seemed to shimmer with the power this man generated. his golden brown eves peaced through the darkness and ended on Aang. Although he could not see the mans face, Aang knew the man loathed him.He had an unquenchable ring of blazing fire around him.He departed into the darkness soon after, leaving Aang all alone.
Aang was suddenly tired, as if all his energy was suddenly gone. He laid down on the mattress and his mind departed from this world, the world of the awoken, into the world of the dreams. Infront of him has a man he knew that he had seen before, but could not remember where from.
"Whats happoned to you, my friend." he said.
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