Hi everybody! Since no one told me that my writing sucked, I decided to post an other chapter. So, this one is even shorter than the last one, and I don't like it as much. But still, I found the idea rather funny, so there it is!

I hope you like it!


In Double

Carlisle PoV

Winter was coming. Edward had destroyed his coat the last time we hunted. It was impossible not to bring attention on yourself when you walk around in the snow with only a shirt. And that meant shopping. We didn't enjoy it that much.

The saleswoman nearly had a heart attack when she saw us go in her store. From the corner of my eye, I saw Edward roll his eyes.

While going further in the store, we crossed a very pretty young woman, well, for a human, that is. But I noticed that she was wearing only one sock… Curious…

I wouldn't have paid her much attention if Edward didn't turned around when she passed us, with a hypnotized look. No! It wasn't the time to lose control! We were in public! A horror movie's scene wasn't the best thing to happen in the middle of a store, in the middle of the day. I gripped his shoulder to restrain him, should he try to go for her throat. But he just stared after her, eyes intense with concentration, fascinated.

Then another theory came to me. Love at first sigh, maybe?

"Don't be ridiculous, Carlisle" Edward said with a roll of his eyes, breaking his concentration while the girl went out of the store.

"There would be nothing wrong with that, you know?"

He sent me a very skeptical look.

I sighed. Twenty years old, it was a little young to not believe in love, already.

"No, in fact, this girl is schizophrenic" Edward said, ignoring my last thoughts.

I sent him a startled glance.

"I swear! It really took me by surprise, but she hears voices in her head. It was so weird…"

There is someone who shouldn't talk! I couldn't help to think.

"Hey! I heard that!"

"It's my point!"


(Let me know, please, if I do a lot of mistakes. English is not my first language, so I would like to know if it shows in my writing. If you could just tell me if my English is good enough to write stories it would be wonderful! Or you can just tell me if you liked it or not...)

I have another chapter in store, so maybe I'll post it soon. (I just have to translate it... so it could happen sooner if I have a lot of reviews, because I would be more motivated to do it...)

I hope you liked it!