Hmmm... questions so far. ^_^ This is not an indication of your progress in the fic. If you're not in here, that doesn't mean anything, either. I'm just clearing things up. :)
Talentless: Why are Devlin's eyes so strange? Is this a part of his mutation, or just random genetic unlikeliness? (Okay, so technically that -is- a mutation, but...you know what I mean, I hope.) Umm... and if he "totally accepts" what he is... why should he have problems? What sort? If he's bi, does he prefer guys over girls?
Ace: What tribe is Nikki from? What part of the country? Was she raised on a reservation? Um, a character flaw is something that's -not- good about her. For example, Lee's lack of ambition. Nikki, no matter how wonderful she is, is not perfect, right? What's her bad habits? Darker bits of her personality? Anything at all?
Dark Matter: 6' 0" and 80 lbs is a bit of a stretch. Even my brother, who is quite tall and skinny, is still at least over a hundred. Darien'd be literally a human skeleton. It's just... not feasible. Please explain it, or else change his weight to something that wouldn't end up killing him! :)
Loki: Again... red eyes just aren't natural. Is Relm albino, or is this a part of her mutation? Does Lexi psychically connect with the computer, or does it... attach to her somehow? (Sorry, I just don't quite understand that bit ;).
WolfWing: Does Jess avoid people outside of other mutants? Tails and wings are kind of obvious. -.- How big are the tail and wings? Can they be hidden, say, beneath a huge overcoat? Does she attempt to cover her appearance up?
Toma0708: Again... Alex's weight just isn't realistic. Okay, not as extreme as 80 lbs, but... Is she anorexic, or is this part of her mutation?
krazychibikatastrophe: Just out of curiosity, what sort of experiments? Painful, nasty ones that would give her a lasting fear of something, or just innocuous things she hated anyway?
One last question -- does anyone, anyone at all, think their character is a leader type? Not necessarily be an official leader, 'cos I don't think the group would have 'em, but someone bossy enough to try and take charge?
Talentless: Why are Devlin's eyes so strange? Is this a part of his mutation, or just random genetic unlikeliness? (Okay, so technically that -is- a mutation, but...you know what I mean, I hope.) Umm... and if he "totally accepts" what he is... why should he have problems? What sort? If he's bi, does he prefer guys over girls?
Ace: What tribe is Nikki from? What part of the country? Was she raised on a reservation? Um, a character flaw is something that's -not- good about her. For example, Lee's lack of ambition. Nikki, no matter how wonderful she is, is not perfect, right? What's her bad habits? Darker bits of her personality? Anything at all?
Dark Matter: 6' 0" and 80 lbs is a bit of a stretch. Even my brother, who is quite tall and skinny, is still at least over a hundred. Darien'd be literally a human skeleton. It's just... not feasible. Please explain it, or else change his weight to something that wouldn't end up killing him! :)
Loki: Again... red eyes just aren't natural. Is Relm albino, or is this a part of her mutation? Does Lexi psychically connect with the computer, or does it... attach to her somehow? (Sorry, I just don't quite understand that bit ;).
WolfWing: Does Jess avoid people outside of other mutants? Tails and wings are kind of obvious. -.- How big are the tail and wings? Can they be hidden, say, beneath a huge overcoat? Does she attempt to cover her appearance up?
Toma0708: Again... Alex's weight just isn't realistic. Okay, not as extreme as 80 lbs, but... Is she anorexic, or is this part of her mutation?
krazychibikatastrophe: Just out of curiosity, what sort of experiments? Painful, nasty ones that would give her a lasting fear of something, or just innocuous things she hated anyway?
One last question -- does anyone, anyone at all, think their character is a leader type? Not necessarily be an official leader, 'cos I don't think the group would have 'em, but someone bossy enough to try and take charge?
