Hi! It's me, Frostcloud. I've decided to write a book about some of my favorite warriors at the mall. The setting takes place when Firepaw was still an apprentice. After you've read this chapter, please review it. It helps alot! That way I can add more of what you liek into the story. If you have any ideas, make sure to let me know! Enjoy!

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Chapter 1: Bluestar's Present

Firepaw -Yawns and wakes up.-

Graypaw: "Firepaw! You've been sleeping for ages! Have you forgotten that Bluestar's birthday is tomorrow? She won't be happy if you forgot to get her a present!"

Firepaw: Jolts upward in frenzy. "What? Oh no, I forgot! Would you come with me to the mall to help me pick something out?"

Graypaw: "Why not? I also have to get something for her, don't I? Come on; let's ask if anybody else wants to come."

Firepaw: "Thanks! Dustpaw, Ravenpaw, Sandpaw, would any of you like to come shopping for a present for Bluestar?

Sandpaw, Ravenpaw, and Dustpaw: Yes!

Ravenpaw: "When are we going?"

Graypaw: "Now!"

Dustpaw: "Fine with me."

Sandpaw: "Same Here!"

Firepaw: "Then let's go! Make sure not to wake anybody up in camp…"

-everybody pads quietly out of the apprentices den.-

Firepaw: -hissing quietly- "Dustpaw, watch out for that stick!"

-too late, Dustpaw steps on the stick causing a loud crack-

Bluestar: "And where do you think you're going so early in the morning without your mentors?"

-everybody freezes-

Firepaw: "Um… well, uh, we figured we should start hunting for the elders while the prey was still active…"

Tigerclaw: --growling "Don't lie."

Graypaw: "Well… we actually wanted to go to the mall…"

Tigerclaw: "And what would be the point in that?"

Sandpaw: "Er, I wanted to look at the latest fashions! And they were going to go to the candy shop…" (she made that up on the spot)

Mousefur: "Um, what's a mall?"

Tigerclaw: "It's a place with lots of stores. But don't ask what it's like inside. I've never actually been in one."

Bluestar: "If that's the case, Sandpaw, Tigerclaw, Mousefur, and I going to come with you to keep an eye on all of you." (she's actually just making an excuse to go herself)

Mousefur: -begins to purr-

Tigerclaw: -pretends to look bored, yet really he's probably the most excited of them all-

-Spottedleaf appears out of nowhere.-

Spottedleaf: "May I join you?"

Bluestar: "Of course!"

-all of them leave for the mall-

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So, what do you think? Sorry it's a kind of short chapter, but there wasn't really anything else I could add on. The next chapter will be about Sandpaw. Thanks for reading! The second chapter should be up by tomorrow night and if not by them Saturday. Bye! -Frostcloud