Title: Neon Genesis Evangelion: 2nd Branch of NERV Story

Author/Writer: Malkin Rivera

Words from the Author:

I have been up all night and I'm not stopping just yet! Well, that depends if I pass out before I finish *Laughs*. Just like I said in the end of my previous episode, I would have the fighting scene in and some extra stuff. I will continue this for as long as I can. I don't do this for money, I do this because that's what I want to do, although I bet no one would ever pay me to do this. Anyway, now is the time for the continuation of this story and I hope you all enjoy it. Again, I must say that I do NOT own Neon Genesis Evangelion, but I wish I did.

Episode 2: The 1st Angel and Rivka's Rage

We join Rivka in her classroom as she and the rest of the class are taking a test. Rivka soon finishes her test before everyone else and just stares out the window that's to her left while sitting in the 4th desk of the last row that's next to the windows. There are 6 chairs in each row and there are only 4 rows in total.

Rivka continues to look out the window with her right hand placed on her right cheek to hold her head up while thinking, "I wonder how everything will work out with the angel. I'm not sure if I can beat it." She closes her eyes and thinks after softly laughing to herself, "It's amazing how I put up a strong front, and yet, I'm so nervous right now. I hope all that training I've gone through really helps." Rivka quietly sighs and then opens her eyes to look out the window again. "I remember the first day I saw my Eva. The day that I started training."

*Flashback: December 1, 2010*

The scene shows a younger Rivka standing in front of the cage with her eyes intently on a very incomplete Eva Unit 05. Meanwhile, there's a fairly young lady in a lab coat standing to the right of Rivka, but the lady's face isn't shown. This is all taking place in the 3rd Branch, which is located in Berlin since that's where Rivka and her Eva were at when she was little.

The lady speaks with a stern, commanding tone while gazing at Rivka. "Ms. Genster!"

Rivka hurriedly peers at the lady. "Huh? Oh, sorry... I wasn't really paying attention."

The lady sighs with her head lowered for a moment and then returns her attention back to Rivka. "It's alright. Just understand that what you're looking at is the future. It's your responsibility to protect everyone. Now, come with me. It's time for your sync test." She turns and starts to walk away from Rivka.

Rivka frowns and nods. "Yes, madam." She then follows the lady.

After that, Rivka gets in an entry plug and starts to take the synchronization test with everyone in the base observing her. The same female lab worker was also observing Rivka's performance while speaking to a male co-worker, whose face couldn't be seen either. The lady then speaks without diverting her eyes from the entry plug. "It's quite amazing. She has a sync ratio of 25% with no prior training and she's only 9 years old! It's like that child was made to be a pilot. Just think how great of a tool she'll become!" She maliciously smiles to herself.

The male co-worker responds with a firm tone while looking at the entry plug as well. "Ignoring that last part, I would have to agree with you on everything else. Although, what do her parents think about her piloting this monstrosity?"

The lady laughs again and says with an arrogant tone, "Her father is too busy with other affairs to be involved in her life, and her mother passed away years ago!" She laughs a little bit more and turns her head to gaze at him. "So, we won't hear any complaints from anyone!"

The male co-worker promptly states with concern in his voice. "That's very sad. By the look of it, she's going to grow-up to be a beautiful, young lady. No beautiful girl like that should live her life all by herself... Let alone have the fate of the world on her shoulders." The man's face is then revealed and its Major Valqua with sadness completely shadowing his face as he thinks to himself with his eyes locked onto Rivka's entry plug, "She doesn't deserve this."

The lady retorts with an even more arrogant tone. "She won't be alone. She has the Eva and that's all she will ever need. Anyway, I doubt she'll even live that long." She then cocks her head back and laughs in a maniacal way.

In the meantime, Rivka continues to sit in the entry plug as she's holding onto the controls and then mutters to herself while silently shedding tears with her eyes closed, "I don't want to do this. Why do I have to do this? Why does my daddy have to be so busy? Why did mommy have to die?" She suddenly yells out in a whisper, "I miss her so much! I wish someone out there actually cared about me! And not see me as just a tool!" She becomes very upset and continues to cry.

*End of Flashback*

Betty whispers to Rivka, "Hey, Rivka? Are you there?"

Rivka snaps out of her daydream while being a little startled and looks at Betty. "Huh? Oh... Hey, Betty."

Betty whispers with a bit of urgency. "Be quiet, Rivka! The test is still going on!"

Rivka urgently covers her mouth with mild panic showing. She then looks around to see if anyone heard her, uncovers her mouth and returns her attention to Betty while whispering, "I'm sorry... I completely zoned-out."

Betty shakes her head while smiling with her eyes shut and then looks at Rivka again. "Yeah, I can tell." A small amount of curiosity shows itself on Betty's person with her smile now gone. "What were you thinking about?"

Rivka sighs as she veers her eyes away from Betty to look to her left. "Just a little bit about the past. It's not really important."

Betty makes a concerned expression. "Are you sure you don't want to talk about it?"

Rivka nods her head without making eye contact with her best friend. "Yeah, I'm sure... Just don't worry about it."

Betty sighs. "Okay." She then looks back at her own paper.

The rest of the school day went fairly quick, while at the 2nd Branch, everyone's keeping track of the time that's steadily passing. Right now it's 12:35 PM and the clock is ticking away on multiple, different-sized monitors across the room. At the same time, the Commander and Sub-Commander are still scrambling for some more information on the fact that there's an angel heading towards them.

Commander Skylark brushes-off her navy-colored uniform while standing over her desk, which has multiple stacks of papers on it. "I can't believe that after all the hours spent on looking through private files, we couldn't find anything useful."

Sub-Commander Norwood sighs while standing next to her as he leans onto the desk with both hands placed on it. "Yeah, but at least we know that this will be our first opportunity to make a good mpression." He then gazes at her with a smirk.

Commander Skylark makes eye contact with Norwood with no change to her demeanor. "Of course you would say that. Let's just hope things go well." She refocuses on the papers that are in front of her. "Actually, come to think about it, we should try to find out who this other pilot is. That way we can know what to expect in case he or she does join us."

Sub-Commander Norwood nods in agreement. "'Good idea. That's the least we can do since we're looking around anyway."

They both smile at each other and continue their search. Meanwhile, time keeps going by and school ends for Rivka as she's walking out of the classroom. She then hears a commotion coming from the other classmates that are outside.

Rivka walks up to a male classmate with some curiosity showing. "Hey, what's going on?"

The male classmate turns to her and talks in a frantic manner. "I heard that there is a monster heading this way! My mom just told me! I'm getting out of here!" The boy quickly turns away and runs off.

A female classmate suddenly walks towards Rivka with her attention to the male classmate who's running away and says with an arrongant tone while being to Rivka's right, "What an idiot. If there was actually something to worry about, we would have been notified." She then looks at Rivka. "How stupid are guys, right?" The girl laughs while standing in a proud pose.

Then, out of nowhere, a female voice comes from the emergency speaker and says while a siren loudly goes off. "Attention, all civilians. Please head to the nearest shelter. The entire city is under level red alert. Please remain calm and just head towards the nearest shelter."

The female classmate hurriedly looks up while listening to the warning and then starts to freak out. "Oh, crap!" She quickly snaps her head towards Rivka. "Got to go! Bye!" The girl then runs off to the same direction that the male classmate had gone.

After seeing that, Rivka sighs, drops her head down and shakes it with her eyes closed. "Just great." She then slowly pulls her head back to look at the ceiling with a little concern appearing. "I got to get to my Eva and quick."

Betty shouts from a distance while waving at her best friend. "Rivka!"

Rivka looks at Betty out of the corner of her eyes while being a bit surprised for a moment and then rushes to her. "What is it, Betty?!"

Before Rivka could reach her, Betty motions to the blond-haired girl. "Come with me, Rivka! I'll get you to your Eva in no time!" She then turns and runs ahead of Rivka.

Rivka's becomes very quiet with confusion taking over while abruptly stopping and watches Betty run until she decides to yell out with concern, "Wait! How are you going to get me there?!"

Betty yells back at her while still running and looking at Rivka out of the corner of her right eye. "Just follow me!" She then turns her attention to look ahead of herself.

Rivka sighs again while lowering her head and mumbles, "Damn it." She then quickly pulls her head up and runs after Betty.

The blond-haired girl soon found out that she would have preferred running to HQ than getting a lift from Betty's brother. Rivka's currently in the front seat while Betty's in the back seat with Jonny, who is good friends with Betty's brother. They're traveling in a red Mustang Convertible, which happens to be Betty's brother's favorite type of car and sure liked driving fast in it.

As they make their way to the 2nd Branch HQ, Betty shouts at her brother while being very worried by his driving, "Max! Slow down! You're going to crash into something!"

Max confidently laughs as he pulls on the wheel, which makes the car weave around. "Don't worry, little sister! As long as Rivka's by my side, nothing bad can happen!"

A profound amount of irritation can be noted on Rivka's face as she yells at Max, "Don't make me throw up! I have to pilot an Eva really soon and it would really suck being sick before fighting a freaking angel!"

Max softly sighs while putting his head down for a moment and easing up on the speed. "That's harsh. I hope you treat me with more respect when we go out." He then looks at Rivka with a smart ass smile and winks.

Rivka grits her teeth and then screams, "Ahhhh!" She leans towards Max with pure anger arising with her left hand on the seat and other hand on the dashboard. "You're SO lucky that your sister is my best friend!" Rivka then grabs his head with both hands and makes him look at the road. "And pay attention, you idiot!"

Max laughs, makes Rivka let go of his head with a simple motion of his right arm and focuses on the road. "Really? That's sweet. Why don't you give me a kiss since you obviously want me so much?" He glances at Rivka while still smiling.

Rivka gets even more irritated while putting her hands down. "You're such an idiot! I wish I could just..." She tightly graps her head with both hands and screams out of annoyance. After that, Rivka puts her hands down to cross them together, plants her back against the seat and looks out the window with aggravation.

Having seen what just transpired, Jonny looks at Betty and softly says, "What the hell is up with Rivka? I thought Max and her are dating. So why are they fighting?"

Rivka overhears what Jonny had said and is completely surprised by it. After that, the blond-haired girl snaps her attention to Jonny with an intense amount of rage consuming her being. "What?! What did you say?! Who the hell told you that freaking lie?!"

Jonny hesitantly points at Max with his right hand. "Uhhh..."

Rivka immediately gives Max a death glare. "You son of a bitch!"

Max starts to laugh while looking at the road. "Oh come one, Rivka! Can't you take a joke?!"

Rivka grabs Max's right forearm with both hands and forcefully twists it backwards while still glaring at him.

Max screams out in pain while his right arm's being twisted. "Ouch! I guess not!"

As they swerve around due to Rivka's anger, they arrive at the 2nd Branch. Rivka hurriedly enters and leaves the others under the care of NERV Security. Betty sees her friend gradually walk out of sight and hopes for the best for her. Rivka goes to the locker room and puts on a dark green/brown-colored plugsuit while being kind of a military fashion, but without the common pattern that cameo clothing has. She then heads to her Eva and awaits orders as everybody in HQ prepare for the moment of truth.

Maj. Valqua talks to Rivka by using the intercom, which he does this by using a microphone that he's wearing on his collar, while his arms are crossed. "Rivka, Remember; Don't hesitate and once you face that angel, defeat it with all your might!" He says that last part with a lot of passion and enthusiams.

Rivka appears on the main screen from the entry plug while confidently smiling. "Right!" Her screen from the plug goes off and thinks to herself while taking deep breaths, "You can do this. Everyone's depending on you. Make them all proud."

Capt. Russell stands right next to his monitor with his hands in his pockets and eyes on Lt. Mina. "How do you think this is going to turn out? Do you actually believe that she'll pull it off?"

Lt. Mina sits in front of her monitor while analyzing the information on it. "Don't ask that. We should all know that Rivka will prevail and protect us."

Capt. Russell sighs without diverting his attention from Lt Mina. "It's kind of sad that we have to put all our hopes AND the hopes of the people of this city in the hands of a teenage girl."

Dr. Florence speaks while sitting on a chair that's located on the right side of one of the MAGI's with his eyes on the giant screen that now shows the angel. "I guess this is how things will have to be like. We have to depend on that girl for our survival."

Maj. Valqua smirks after hearing Dr. Florence's statement and softly says while standing between Capt. Russell and Lt. Mina, "I know you can do it, Rivka. I won't give up on you as long as you're willing to live and fight." He then shouts out while looking towards the screen that's to his right, which shows the cage that Unit 05's in. "Rivka, are you ready?!"

Rivka nods while tightly holding onto the Eva's controls. "Yes, sir!"

Maj. Valqua turns towards the main screen and shouts with a stern tone, "Launch Eva Unit 05!"

On cue, the Eva's launched with Rivka having to endure extreme pressure due to the launch as she and her Eva soon reach the surface. Rivka's a little shook-up at first, but keeps her composure and peers at the enemy that's a distance of about 5 miles away. Rivka gets her weapons ready while her Eva is leveled and puts on her targeting helmet that is to help her keep better track of the angel with her left hand. *Now, Eva Unit 05 is equipped with two cannons on its shoulders while holding a rifle in each hand. The difference between this Eva and the one that Mari pilots is the weapons. Also, that this Eva has a tank-like lower half instead of four legs, which seems pretty cool... Right? That was a rhetorical question. Aside that, the color's still the same, which is brown and green with random parts being white*

Rivka glares at the angel while being a bit irritated. "What the hell is it waiting for?! Why hasn't it attack me yet?!"

Maj. Valqua instantly appears on Rivka's right side screen. "Stay focus, Rivka. It might be up to something."

Rivka tightens her grip on the controls even more. "Right!" She then tries to calm herself down a little with her eyes shut and head lowered. "Just remain patient, Rivka. Let it make the first move. The one who makes the first move will usually make the first mistake." Rivka glares at the angel again and takes aim on it with both rifles.

1st Angel *Ligerel* randomly lets out a loud screech while fiercely glaring at Eva Unit 05.

Rivka's startled by the angel's sudden screech, but then relaxes and regains her composure. "Wow, didn't see that coming." She smirks with determination overtaking her expression. "But I'm going to take you down. You better bet your ass on it!" Rivka then starts to fire at the angel with both rifles.

Ligerel is quickly covered by smoke from the repetative launching of bullets, which results in it being unable to be seen. This upsets Rivka quite a bit as she's bent forward with her eyes widening. "What?! Damn it! I over-did it!"

Capt. Russell talks from his post with disappointment displayed. "It seems like our golden girl is having some trouble controlling herself."

Maj. Valqua's annoyance can't be hidden as he lightly grinds his teeth. "Rivka! Don't worry about it! Just stay calm and focus!"

Rivka lets out a big sigh with her eyes shut. "Easy for you to say... Oh, well... I might as well aim with the cannons. At least they will pack a bigger punch." She then opens her eyes as they widen immediately afterwards due to Rivka seeing that the angel had disappeared and causes her to frantically look around. "What the?! Where the hell is it?! Where is that damn angel?!"

Maj. Valqua shows up on Rivka's screen and shouts with an urgent tone while having uncrossed his arms to have them lowered to opposing sides, "Rivka, behind you!"

Rivka gasps and turns her head to gaze behind herself. "Huh?!"

Ligerel roars and jumps on Unit 05 while bitting the Eva's left shoulder with its saber-like teeth.

Rivka screams in pain with her right hand tightly grasping her shoulder as she lowers her head and grits her teeth. "You son of a bitch!" She then snaps her head to the left screen that shows the angel with anger rapidly arising. "I'm going to kill you!"

With that cry, Rivka starts to make Unit 05 move wildly, and as a result, the angel jumps off it. Rivka then takes aim with the cannons and yells out when the angel is in her sight, "I told you that I am going to kill you!" Unit 05 promptly fires two powerful blasts that were perfectly aimed at the angel, and at the moment of impact, a giant explosion was created.

Both Lt. Mina and Capt. Russell cheer from their posts while smiling and laughing.

In Maj. Valqua's case, he calmly speaks without taking his eyes off the giant screen. "Please be quiet. It's not over yet." He then points at the screen with his right hand as it's revealed that the angel's still alive.

After seeing that, both Lt. Mina and Capt. Russell look at each other while being in shock.

Dr. Florence joins into the conversation without leaving his seat. "I'm amazed that it took both of those cannons at once and survived." After saying that, the Doctor gets up and turns to make eye contact with the Commander from a distance. "What do you think about the situation?"

Commander Skylark stands behind a giant glass that makes up the wall of her office with her hands clenched into fists due to the irritation she's feeling while looking back at Florence. "We'll have to see how things turn out... And pray that God will help us."

In the meantime, Rivka maintains her focus on the angel that's still standing before her and then is overcome with immense frustration as she drops her head down. "Why... Why... Why..." She slowly lifts her head and fiercely glares at the angel. "Why.. Don't... You... DIE!" Unit 05 realeses a volley of shots towards the angel with both the rifles and cannons, but unfortunately, neither have any real effect as the Eva keeps on shooting until running out of ammo. This obviously causes Rivka to gasp with concern brimming while hurriedly pulling her body back.

After seeing that, Maj. Valqua lightly slaps his forehead with his right hand. "Damn it!" He then lowers his hand to place it on his waist while maintaining his eyes locked onto the screen. "It seems like we underestimated the angel. Now we can't do anything to stop it when it comes to weapons."

Shock suddenly takes over Lt. Mina's expression as she's watching her monitor. "Major! Rivka's sync ratio is increasing and her A.T. Field is up! Sync ratio is nearing 80%!"

Maj. Valqua looks at Lt. Mina with a surprised look and then smiles. "So, she's finally getting serious." He looks at the giant screen again that's now showing Unit 05 and mutters, "Go get that bastard, Rivka."

Rivka passionately yells as she makes the Eva rush at the angel and charges right into it, which makes Ligerel crash into a 25 floor building. Unit 05 then backs up for a moment and starts to use both rifles to strike the angel. The attack quickly makes contact multiple times due to the angel's A.T. Field being neutralized by Unit 05's A.T. Field.

Ligerel continues to take some of the shots it's being given, but then is able to catch the riffle in Unit 05's left hand with its teeth and instantly destroys it. After that, the angel lunges towards Unit 05 and bites into it's left arm, which causes Rivka to scream out in pain. She then glares at the angel, has her Eva hit the angel with the other rifle and makes it lose its grip on Unit 05. This allows Rivka to swiftly get away from Ligerel while yelling out with frustration showing. "You freaking bastard! That really hurt!" She continues to stare at Ligerel while now overflowing with anger.

Then, without warning, Ligerel lunges at Unit 05 again while letting out a huge roar.

Rivka's briefly startled by the sudden attack, but with quick thinking and desparation, she throws her remaining rifle at it, which hits it right in the head. That was enough to stop it momentarily as Rivka contentedly laughs right after that while leaning forward with her hands firmly holding onto the controls. "Eat that, you piece of crap!"

Disappointment can be seen on Capt. Russell's face after witnessing Rivka's action and then looks at Maj. Valqua. "What the hell was that?! She actually threw her rifle at it?! What is she thinking?!"

Maj. Valqua smirks out of amusement. "I don't know. I guess she's just improvising since things aren't going so well."

Capt. Russell sighs with his head down a little while lightly shaking it. "Well, that's not going to do us any good." He then returns his attention to the Major. "How the hell will she beat it with cheap and childish tricks? Not to mention that she's still really pissed."

Maj. Valqua laughs with his arms crossed again while watching the main screen. "I don't think we have to worry about that." He turns to his left to stand sideways and looks up at the Commander with a confident smile. "We still have one more weapon left. We just need your permission to use it, Commander."

Commander Skylark contemplates to herself with some uncertainty being noted and then takes a deep breath after deciding on what to do. "If we must use it, then there's nothing that can be done about it." She lightly smiles back at the Major.

Maj. Valqua nods and then turns back to face the giant monitor. "I'll take that as a yes." He then suddenly appears on Rivka's right side screen again. "Rivka! Use the N2 Missiles and send that angel to hell!" Valqua promptly gives her a thumbs up with his right hand to show that it's really okay.

Rivka turns her gaze to him with a surprised expression and then smiles while nodding. "Got it!" She returns her attention to ahead of herself and pushes a red button that's on the inner side of both controls at the same time. Right after that, the Eva's chest-plate slowly opens up and reveals two N2 Missiles installed into it while the two cannons on her shoulders are mechanically moved to opposing sides of the Eva's torso. Unit 05 then quickly takes out both missiles and loads the cannons with them as the blond-haired girl takes aim.

Meanwhile, Ligerel roars once again and then runs towards the Eva with a fair amount of speed.

Rivka softly laughs at the sight of the enemy heading towards her. "This time you're going to die for sure. So goodbye, bitch!" Unit 05 fires and both N2 Missiles are launched with a stream of smoke behind it. Within mere seconds, both N2 Missiles hit the angel and a giant explosion immediately follows that ends up destroying 5 buildings as well as Ligerel.

While this occurs, Rivka watches the explosion while desperately holding onto the controls due to their being a shock-wave from the explosion as it gradually dies down. She then throws her hands up after seeing that the angel's defeated while happily yelling out, "Yes!"

Commander Skylark gives a sigh of relief and sits on her chair that's right behind her while looking through the glass. "I guess our last resort worked." She shouts out at everyone over the intercom with a composed tone, "Congratulations, everyone! We beat out first angel!" Skylark then smiles.

Sub-Commander Norwood smirks as he's been standing to the left of Skylark the entire time and says to everyone over the intercom, "That's it! You can all celebrate now!"

On cue, everyone shouts out with pure joy as Maj. Valqua watches them celebrate. "Hey! Let's not forget who actually went all the way and brought us victory!" He then turns his attention to the main image of the damaged Eva being brought back into the cage. "Good job, Rivka. We're all proud of you." Valqua smiles.

Rivka tries to regain some of her composure while bent forward with her hair mostly covering her face and smiles at the major's comment. "Damn... That was still a close one." She then rest her back onto the seat while cocking her head back. After that, the blond-haired girl stares at the darkness of the entry plug with a relieved smirk. "I'm lucky that the Eva is very resilient." She giggles a little.

Capt. Russell suddenly yells out to the others in HQ, "Finally! Some success!" He then laughs with confidence brimming. "Now all we have to do is just clean up, make our report and shout out that we are the best!"

Lt. Mina closes her eyes out of disbelief and then looks at him. "You make it sound like you're the one who beat the angel." She giggles.

Capt. Russell laughs again with his eyes on Lt. Mina. "It was a team effort! So, I technically did beat it!"

Dr. Florence looks at them and rolls his eyes. "Technically? Yeah, right." He smirks.

Maj. Valqua chuckles and then focuses his attention again to the main screen as it's still showing Unit 05. "Hey, Rivka!"

Rivka responds while getting out of the Eva's entry plug and makes a curious expression as she's looking up. "What?!"

Maj. Valqua smiles. "Let's go home! You look beat!" He chuckles again.

Rivka nods. "Of course! I'm tired! What do you expect?!" She then laughs and smiles with her eyes shut.

Content radiates from Maj. Valqua's person. "Good point. Since you're so tired, you should go get dressed and we'll head home!"

With that said, Rivka tries to rush so that she can go home and take a long hot bath, but Betty with Jonny and Max cut her off. At that moment, being tired was the last thing on her mind as Rivka and Betty hugged each other while Betty's obviously very relieved that her best friend is alright. The two boys watched quietly as Rivka and Betty were so happy to see each other, which Rivka actually thought it was a miracle that Max wasn't hitting on her for once. They soon all part ways for the rest of the evening as Rivka was taken home by Jerry, which this is what she calls him instead of Major when they are not in the 2nd Branch.

Rivka takes her well-deserved bath while Jerry prepares the food, and when she gets out of the bathroom, the blond-haired girl sits at the table as the two of them have dinner together. She then tilts her head to the left while staring at her plate with a hint of sadness being displayed. "Hey, Jerry?"

Jerry looks at her with a questionable expression. "What is it?"

Rivka replies while keeping her eyes on the plate. "Do you think I did a good job?" Tears then suddenly start to go down her face.

Jerry sees her crying and leans towards Rivka with a lot of concern showing. "Rivka... What's wrong?"

Rivka sobs while she keeps looking down and then tries to talk. "I was... So... Angry... I thought I was... Going to let... Myself... Be killed." She continues to cry while tightly clenching both hands together as they rest on the table.

Jerry gets up, walks around the right side of the table and kneels down next to Rivka so that he can hold her.

Rivka keeps crying while tightly hugging Jerry. "I just don't want to die..."

Jerry says softly while closing his eyes, "I know, Rivka... I know..."

*Scene Fades Into Black*

To Be Continued...

Brief Statement:

Yes, I know what you're thinking... Well... Probably. I left you with another cliffhanger, well get used to it because you will see a lot of it from me... Maybe. I'm going to explain why I made the difference for the Eva Unit 05. The reason is that it's kind of good to alter some things and also since there's no Mari in the original series, there's no real contradiction of the use of this Eva on something that's based on the original series. I don't know how episode 3 will be working out or even how long it will be since you can tell the difference from the first two episodes. Actually, I think this one is longer because there's less talking from me about my love for the original series and for the movies, which I think are awesome! *Laughs*

Character Description:

There's only one new character that I added because the other people who don't have an actual name aren't important.

Max Berra - Age 16, half American and half Belgium, tanned skin, weighs 155 and has a slight build (He's a jock for your information). He has straight, short dark brown hair that's always comb backwards, blue eyes and stands at 5'7"

That's it. Talk to you all later.