AN: Not much to say here other than I hope you guys are enjoying the changes. Still trying to decide on who else will be in the harem but that will be solved later. By what means remains to be seen. It it is something I shall talk about with Kyram, who hasn't had a hand in these first chapters as they were easy fixes. He will however becoming more involved in the later chapters as the plot comes in and bigger changes are made.

For that I would like all of you to say thank you to Kyram for not only convincing me to even do this rewrite but also for offering his services to make this story even better!

Now onto the story!


Naruto had spent his first few days in the new world getting accustomed to the various new things like cars, cell phones, and all the things that came with this modern world. Learning about them and actually physically interacting with them in person were two totally different things.

Nonetheless he had taken it all in stride and through the use of henge and kage bunshin had managed to build himself quite the stash of money and using said currency he had purchased himself a good sized home where he planted dozens of plants in and around the property. He may have gotten used to this new world and all but he was still born a Konoha shinobi and a Sage and as such he needed to be surrounded by nature to feel at home.

Through his first few weeks in the new world he had encountered his fair share of devils and angels that wandered the city and called it home. Being a Sage and an Uzumaki had gifted him with a rather decent sensory ability. Nowhere on the level that Sasuke's teammate Karin, who he suspected was an Uzumaki, was but still it allowed him to sense people in his vicinity and using said ability he could feel the different beings around him.

He was easily able to sense the Devils and Angels as their energy compared to normal humans and such was vastly different and so was made easier to pick out of the crowds of the city.

What intrigued him were the interactions between the two factions. He wasn't surprised by the outright hate the majority of the two races had for each other but rather the tensing one did when encountering someone from the other faction, as if there was a loose cease fire of some sort barely being held together.

He became even more curious when he noticed not only a subset of Angels whose energy seemed closer to a Devil's than an Angel's, but also a vast amount of other creatures.

He questioned what had happened in this world's history to not only trigger this evolution, but also the amount of presence the other factions had. His own home world had of course had the Bijuu and even a few demons here and there but due to humans evolving to use Chakra the demon population was so small that they seemed more fairy tale than anything.

Though looking at the general human populace he could hazard a guess that due to humans seemingly occupying a lower spot on the food chain than they had in his world the need for higher tier creatures had allowed for the larger number of Devils, Angels, and other such creatures to coexist.

Being Naruto though meant that he still had questions that needed concrete answers. He highly doubted that any Devil or Angel would willingly share their knowledge with him due to the secrecy they seemed to have regarding humans.

He wasn't exactly altogether human himself but he wasn't a Devil or Angel either so he would have no luck with that.

Eventually he decided to get his answers the shinobi way.

He waited patiently and soon enough was able to catch a devil trying to attack and presumably eat a human.

The devil was easily handled and restrained using various seals that Naruto was well versed in using, allowing the human to escape whilst screaming in terror.

Unfortunately the arrogant thing refused to cooperate and Naruto wasn't exactly Ibiki or Anko when it came to interrogation, being a combat oriented Nin. Luckily Ibiki had taught him a jutsu for just such situations. It was a basterdized version of the Yamanaka clan's mind jutsu but it still worked effectively at getting what you wanted to know out of someone's mind. The chances of them surviving the justu without their mind melting into mush however weren't so high.

Knowing the Devil had no qualms eating humans made Naruto's decision to use the jutsu all the easier. Through it he was able to learn about the dark Angels who had "fallen" and even learned about The Great War that was waged between the three factions, culminating in the tense cease fire that was still currently in effect.

He also gained a rather interesting insight as to why there were so many Devils running around. It seemed that after the War the three factions had lost many of their numbers and so the Devils had come up with the Evil Piece system.

The system worked through Devil powered chess pieces that would reincarnate humans and other creatures into Devils who would then pledge their loyalty to a King and, along with others that the King had reincarnated, would fall under what was called a Peerage.

He was curious to know if the Angels and Fallen Angels had similar systems to bring up their numbers.

Naruto just shook his head at the information though. It seemed no matter what war was a constant, in every walk of life and every world. He could only sigh at his own jaded outlook. He couldn't be blamed for it though.

No matter what he would always disagree with Obito and Madara's train of thinking but he could definitely see why they had come to be how they were and why they had sought to complete the Moon of The Eye plan.

Living the life of a Jinchuuriki meant that he had been indoctrinated into the dark seedy underbelly of the human species at birth, something that followed him well into his teens and even now still had a hold on him.

It was partially because of his own jaded outlook that he had left his home world in the first place. He was indeed happy that a true sense of peace had come to his home, but that dark part of him nagged him every time he saw the smiling faces of some.

He had given his blood, sweat, tears, and innocence to those people. To the same people who were the cause of his horrid childhood. The same people who, even after he had saved them two times at the risk of his own life, would have sold him out to Akatsuki if it meant saving their own skin.

Sure they hailed him as their hero now but that voice in the back of his head always served to remind him that if he had failed he would have been crucified, blamed as the one responsible for the downfall of the world.

Not wishing to dwell on such unpleasant thoughts Naruto burned the corpse of the now long dead Devil with a minor Katon jutsu and decided to retire to his home.

As he left the alley that he had cornered the demon in, he felt three sets of eyes watching him. One a Devil, another an Angel, and the last one was of the Fallen Angels. The last two radiated power in such vast amounts that even when they they tried to suppress it, it was easily felt, though Fallen Angel dwarfed anything the Angel could put out.

The devil though was young yet still seemed to be relatively strong.

Wanting to have fun he looked up at where he knew they were and waved with a big stupid grin on his face, "Hi there!"

Naruto chuckled on the inside as he felt all three of them narrow their eyes in surprise at the action. "You know it's not polite to stalk people! Pretty sure that's illegal actually," and before they could react Naruto was gone in a crimson flash, the last thing they saw being a foxy grin.

I didn't sense anything from him…at all! Echoed the thoughts of the three "hidden" figures.

One was a well endowed and beautiful crimson haired teenage girl who wore what looked to be a school uniform of some sort. The other not far from her was a well dressed man with blonde bangs with the rest of his short messy hair colored black. The last was a handsome looking blond haired man garbed in a simple white robe with gold trimmings.


A few weeks later we find Naruto enjoying the peace of the neighborhood park. He had begun coming to the park regularly at night as, other than his own home, it was the only place that held enough nature for him to meditate properly. However today his normal meditation was interrupted by the appearance of three very unique signatures.

One was from the night that he had encountered that stray devil, and the other two were a Fallen Angel and a human with a rather odd power buried in him.

None of them were anywhere near strong enough to be considered a workout so he would just let things play out on their own. Naruto realized though that he wouldn't be able to return to meditating as the fallen angel released their power into the air. It wasn't anywhere close to those he was used to but still it was enough to irritate him. With a sigh he ran his hand through his long crimson locks and walked to see what all the commotion was about.

Naruto watched in interest as the Fallen attempted to skewer the human with her tainted light powers. What piqued his interest though was that the Devil was doing what he was doing and just watching it all happen.

He raised an eyebrow as the Fallen finally succeeded in making a human shish kabob and at that moment the Devil decided to intervene on the human's behalf. The human dying wasn't that shocking to him, having seen more than his fair share of death and even having been responsible for some of it, but what really caught his eye was the Devil.

She was, too say the least, a bombshell. The girl was his age, maybe a few years older, and already had curves bordering on a freaking Tsunade level.

Guess being a Devil has some perks, Naruto thought as he examined the female Devil.

What really caught his eye though was her vibrant red hair. He guessed it had something to do with his father or his Uzumaki heritage but he had always found girls with red hair more attractive.

Naruto raised an eyebrow as he heard the two females trade words, the Devil citing something about the Fallen being in her territory. He then saw the Fallen Angel launch an attack at the red haired beauty in a bout of anger over something that was said.

Naruto shrugged knowing his fellow red head could more than handle herself but some part of him still enjoyed playing the hero and with a crimson flash Naruto was gone.


One second Rias was prepared to defend herself and show the Fallen Angel why you don't mess with the Gremory family and the next the red haired guy from a few weeks ago was in front of her stopping the light spear with his index finger, his other hand in his pants pocket.

"Now I'm not really against violence but I am against unnecessary violence, especially when it involves such a beautiful girl," and with a simple move of his hand the light spear was thrust into the ground where it disintegrated.

He can't be a devil if he can touch a light spear and not feel any pain from it so that must mean he's either an Angel or another Fallen? But why would he save me? I'm positive he knows what I am so why? Questioned the still kneeling Rias. Her attention was then drawn to the "battle" at hand when the fallen angel huffed and summoned another light spear and charged at her fellow red-head.

Showing no signs of even trying Naruto moved his body slightly to the left and lifted up his foot where it would be level with the purple haired Fallen's face. A mere second later and the tainted angel was making out with the bottom of Naruto's sandals.

He had literally put no power into it, merely reinforcing his stance in a way that made it equivalent to the dark angel slamming into a concrete wall. With another sigh and his hands still in his pockets he spun and kicked the Fallen with enough force to send her flying through several trees, though that was nothing more than a love tap to him. Tsunade probably could've done the same with naught but a flick of her finger. He then turned to the kneeling red head behind him, "I know you could've handled her yourself but I kinda got a little bored just watching. Sorry for interrupting. I'll be off now," and Naruto turned and began to walk away.

"I'm sorry but who are you?" the still curious Rias asked. If he was human then she could have him join her peerage and if he was this strong as a human then he could possibly become near ultimate class and become a valuable asset to her Peerage.

Naruto turned his head and smiled his signature foxy grin, "Naruto Namikaze-Uzumaki at your service milady."

Rias blushed at both the formal greeting and the grin that just did something to her before nodding her head in return.

"Rias Gremory."

"Nice to meet you Rias Gremory, but as much as I would like to stay and get to know a beauty like yourself I really must get going," Naruto his best flirting voice.

Before Rias could even say anything Naruto was gone in a flash of red.

"Ara ara so who was foxy-kun buchou?" asked a curious buxom blue-ish black haired teen who appeared from a magic circle just behind Rias.

"Someone who could be very useful to have in my peerage Akeno," answered a still thinking Rias.

This Naruto person was powerful, much more powerful than he let on. It scared her to think that he may well be on the level of ultimate class already. For that brief second where he flashed away she had been able to catch a glimpse of his power and what she saw was unbelievable.

Akeno then pointed at the human Rias had resurrected as one of her pawns, "Ara ara, what about Issei-san buchou?"

"Hmm? Oh him? Take him back to his home. He'll be fine and we'll have Kiba bring him to us tomorrow during school," Rias replied waving her hand nonchalantly. She was interested in the sacred gear Issei had but Naruto had caught her attention more than the pervert.


"This is…odd to say the least," a confused but still calm Naruto spoke aloud to himself.

Whenever he used the Hiraishin he would sense two titanic energies for the briefest of moments while he was in the "in-between". He had used the jutsu many times in his world and all he could see when using it was an almost endless void of inky blackness.

The jutsu was a Jikukan (Time-space) jutsu and worked by using the user's chakra to literally create a hole in the universe. Once outside of the mortal realm you would then create another hole that would lead you to wherever it was that you were aiming to go. Due to the difference in how time flowed in this void realm the technique seemed to be an almost instantaneous teleportation.

The markers his father used were a focal point for his chakra so that way he wouldn't get lost in the jumps between the realms and end up inside a volcano on the other side of the world. However Naruto had been able to use the special chakra that was the Uzumaki bloodline to eliminate the need for a marker. He still needed a focal point yes but with as dense as Uzumaki chakra was he could do much the same as his mother had and turn it into physical chains. Using the chakra chains he would make a sort of handrail to the place he wanted to be and simply follow the chakra chain to its end.

However his curiosity had been piqued when he saw that the void realm he was using to do the jumps housed two massive energies. Using his mastery of the jutsu he made the first whole into the void realm and then never made the second whole leaving him inside the void.

This world's "in between" was what had made him blink in curiosity.

It reminded him of what Jiraiya had described to him that one time on their training trip that one of his "spies" (cough Hookers cough) had slipped him something called LSD.

There were various odd and brightly colored orbs floating about and there was a sense of endlessness to it. On top of that the whole place was a bleeding mixture of iridescent colors that would have disoriented many.

He sensed that other than him there were the two other massive sources of energy and both came rather close to his own power level maybe even having more energy than he himself did. Knowing this a grin of excitement spread across his face.

To catch either of the two being's attention he flared his chakra making the ground on which he stood crack. With his grin still on his face he felt the two massive sources of energy begin to quickly move towards him. It didn't take long for him to see one of the sources of energy as it was a massive red dragon. He quirked his eyebrow as he saw that the other energy source was what appeared to a preteen dressed in a gothic loli costume of some sort.

The massive dragon grumbled in questioning, "What are you doing here human?"

"Well you see I've been looking for someone strong enough to spar with and I happened to feel your power so I thought 'why the hell not' and here we are," spoke the cheeky red-head.

"Hmm you have not yet been disintegrated by the Gap. Interesting," Red mumbled in thought.

Great Red narrowed his eyes however when he felt just how much power this "human" was letting out. The boy didn't look to be trying which meant the vast amount of energy coming from him was excess energy. That alone was impressive as the excess alone was equal to what most higher tier Devils had in their whole bodies.

"You are no mere human are you? I can not smell the scent of Devil or Angel from you at all. What are you? No human can possibly be this strong."

Naruto smirked as he got into the beginning stance for his Odokemono no Shikata (Way of the Joker). By relaxing all the muscles in his body he prepared himself for anything his opponent threw at him while not telegraphing his own moves.

"Nothing special. Just a wandering Sage is all," Naruto grinned.

"A Sage? I've never encountered a Sage such as yourself, but you intrigue me. Fine we will….spar."

Great Red then released a massive roar to signify that he was battle ready.

Ophis was shocked as she could see that Red was going to actually take the teen seriously. What interested her even more was that she didn't doubt that this…Sage could very well take on Red. If he could win was an entirely different matter. Only the combined power of the Four Satans or the Four Seraphs was enough for herself or Great Red to do more than just swat them aside and even then it required only a portion of their true power.

This being however was a mystery. He looked and seemed human for the most part but he radiated a power that easily matched her own and Great Red's. Let's see just how strong you really are Mr. Sage.

Luckily we're in an endless void and don't have to worry about getting others involved or property damage which means I can really let loose!Naruto thought as he let his hold on his chakra go. He normally had to hold down a lot of his power just so that he wouldn't poison or kill people with the amount of nature chakra and pure chakra that "leaked" out of him.

"Guess I'll start us off then! Futon: Odama Rasenshurkien! (Wind Style: Big Ball Spiraling Shuriken)" and with nary a thought Naruto's now signature move formed in his right hand dwarfing Naruto himself. With a toss the massive shuriken made of wind was sent on a direct path towards Great Red, destroying the ground underneath it as it sped towards its target.


AN: Hope you guys are liking the changes I'm making. First two chapters done! The plot and what not will be coming in don't worry. The first few chapters will be staying relatively the same as they were good starting points. I'd say from Chapter 3 onwards is when you guys will notice bigger changes.

Until the next chapter yall!

PEACE OUT