Well, I'm sure that last chapter sucked. I have no self-esteem. Also, I forgot to put in an in-story chapter title. I'll do that this time. Anyway, time for the annual going ons. Ons is intentional, not a misspelling. Anyway, The Pikmin have made it to the Hole of Beasts after fighting off the Bulborb hoards. Meanwhile, Whipahl continues try to convince the rest of the council to stop White Pikmin from being sent mainly on suicide missions. But Pinpul stops him at every attempt. Emperor Bulblax prepares to flee from the Bulblax Kingdom. Leading the Bug Alliance assault on the Bulblax Kingdom is the Segmented Crawbster. Also, the Black Ship has landed, along with 3 Dark Onions. Also, the following section dose not count as one of the 10 section. Plus, I noticed a typo in Chapter 1. Ignore it.
I don't own Pikmin. Pikmin is property of Nintendo. All names not in the games are my creations.
TPWAW
Chapter 2
Onslaught
The Pikmin had just broken through the first 3 sublevels, and were advancing to the 4th. "Those Violet Candypop Buds back there sure came in handy." General Redmin said as the army walked around. "We've got to find that damned hole." As they were looking, a Volatile Dweevil silently snuck behind them. A Yellow Pikmin turned around, saw it, and yelled "BOMB-ROCK CARRYING SPIDER MERCENARY! RUN!" The whole army started to run away. The Dweevil was close behind. It finally blew up, killing several Pikmin. "Crap." Redmin said. This is gonna help us die faster." They moved on.
Another meeting in the council room led to some... er… difficulties. "This is ridiculous!" Whipahl said. "Us White Pikmin are fast and immune to poison, and you just send us to our deaths!" "Listen, jackass." Pinpul said. "You guys could be immune to everything for all I care. But these damn things aren't giving us much of a damn choice." "Well those dose it!" Whipahl said. "I'll show you bitches just what a White Pikmin can do." He ran off. "Okay…" Yelnag said. "Next order of business." Redmo of the Red Pikmin said. "Deciding who to replace Whipahl on the council."
"These things are gonna kill us if we stay, my Emperor." Fireblax said. "No matter." Emperor Bulblax said. "I'm sure we WON'T die." "Why is that, my Emperor?" "Um… Well… You see…" Emperor Bulblax said, stuttering. "Forgive me, Emperor." Fireblax said. He saw a Female Sheargrub scout and crushed it. It's blood was smeared all over Fireblax's foot. "Damned Bug Alliance." He said. They both walked off to the water room. Emperor Bulblax put a box on his back and they both got in a Giant Pikmin Onion.
The Segmented Crawbster rolled over Bulborbs and fire spouts as if they weren't even there. His power was rarely matched. He had crushed entire armies without even breaking a sweat. He led his army of Snitchbugs, Blowhogs, and Groinks through the Bulblax Kingdom. He would roll over enemies and hazards, and his army would follow, finishing anything off that survived. He finally came to a stop when he was in front of the hole. It was too small for him. He did the same thing he did on the other floors. He rolled back into a ball and crashed into the wall, letting the rocks that fell open up the hole so he could fit. He and his army all went down to the final floor.
The two men were calling out Pikmin from the Dark Onions. These Pikmin, like their leaders, were also dark colors. "Is this army large enough?" The blue one asked. "Of course it is. We just have to get their attention. They'll send more men to stop us. That would give the stand alone army a better chance of taking The Valley of Repose." "Just like the master wanted." "Yes, dumbass. I knew that. It's only what we've had to do for our whole lives. Now gather the Nimkips. We gotta show them were in business." They whistled their Pikmin, which they called Nimkips, and went off to the battle field.
To be continued…
First I'd like to explain something from my first review. A light can be dark if it's a dark SHADE of a color. I think. Anyway, Redmin's army has almost made it to the end of the Hole of Beasts. So has the Segmented Crawbster in the Bulblax Kingdom. Whipahl left to parts unknown and apparently is going to be replaced. Emperor Bulblax and Fireblax have gotten into a giant Pikmin Onion to escape. Any guesses on what was in Emperor Bulblax's box? All guesses may be placed in a review. These men have Pikmin, too. But they call them "Nimkips". If you didn't notice, Nimkip is Pikmin spelled backwards. What dose this mean? All guesses are welcome. Suggestions are welcome, too.
