Hello there. I'm back. And angry as ever.

I have more reasons to hate on Nevermore, even though I'm technically not HATING... whatever.

Let's look at JP's characters for a moment, one by one, shall we?

Max: Oooooohhhh boy. This chick just sort of pissed me off. No, actually, JP's plan for her pissed me off.

Let's take a trip down memory lane and look at when Max met Ella. Ella was being bullied by some guys and Max beat them up. Why? Because she cares about the underdog, having been one herself. She can relate and wants to spare anyone that. Max found her Mom and half-sister because she cared.

Snap back to the future. World's ending, and everyone's dying, and Max is making out with Fang in a fucking tree. Where's all that fucking care now?

Speaking of everyone dying, let's go through all these plans JP had to kill off the population that never came through:

1) By-Half Plan: Reduce world's population by two. No-go

2) The Doomsday group: 99% No fucking go.

3) Eliminate everyone but like ten people. Yay!

Not.

JP has some serious decision issues. One prime example is the explanation about world ending above. And here's another:

His fucking characters.

Max: we've covered this.

Fang: silent. Then super chatty and hot and heavy with Max. cue silence. Whoops.

Iggy: Well, I don't know, because guess who fucking didn't write shit about him?

Gazzy: Ditto

Nudge: She changed so much. It's not even funny. She was sweet, innocent and friendly. What's she at the end? FUCKING VICIOUS. WANTING TO GET RID OF HER DAMN WINGS.

Angel: We'll get back to her.

Dylan: See previous chapter.

Ella: Good guy. Then bad guy. "But oh wait, the masses hated Ella as a bad guy," JP thinks to himself. "Let's pretend she was brainwashed! Yeah!" Good guy

Dr. M: Ditto

Jeb: screw Jeb JP just completely fucked up that character

Back to Angel.

What was supposed to be: She's supposed to be Max's baby, the little girl who's still sweet and innocent and cute as a bunny even though she's been through countless tortures.

Reality: A really twisted seven year old who is smarter and more vicious than any of the scientists that hunted them. She switched times so many times I lost count.

Once again, JP realized how he'd screwed up and decided if he made Angel all good again, everything would be happy.

Did I mention she's the Voice?

That was just messed up.

Oh, and the messages the Voice gives Nudge and Gazzy and Iggy? I just wanted to ask JP WHAT THE HELL HAPPENED? Note that moments after this is delivered, Fang comes back and they go off to have a private reunion. And you know who was the only one watching?

Right. The fucking creeper stalker Dylan.

Oh yes, and here's another bomb:

NiƱo Pierpoint? The rich millionaire that somehow the flock manages to contact every other second even though when Angel was lost there was no way to find her? Yeah. Totes believable, JP. Totes.

Reply to Reviews:

Ripped and Tattered: Tell me about it. I wanted to punch JP for the lame excuses of "conflict" he included. Like seriously, JP. PLEASE.

And someone must introduce me to this Good Lord of Pancakes. Sounds delicious (:

Rubymaxlover: I totally agree. Fang's immortality... Come now, JP. We're talking fiction, not impossible. And the whole bit where Max is "dead"... Didn't buy any of it. I actually skipped that part, to be honest.

Iggyswritergurl: I really want JP to write another series that focuses on Iggy, Nudge, Gazzy and Angel. I'm seriously considering emailing him and being like "WRITE."

Oncie's Sweetheart: Yes, yes, yes. JP screwed over his series. Everybody hates him. Am currently collecting chainsaw and matches. If he goes MIA, you know what happened.

Tune in soon... There's more to come. This is sort of turning into a rant on the entire series, I hope you guys don't mind. Adios, and thanks for the support guys!