This story has been put on hold for a bit. . If you want to see my improved work, look to Peace is the Same as War. Also, I MAY be getting another dog, MAYBE two if I'm super lucky, so I will have less time to work on all my fanfics, so every one except for Peace is the Same as War is being postponed. Please understand. This will soon get a re-write with:
Corrected Mistakes
Slightly Different Storyline
Longer Chapters
Less run-on sentences
Grammar and punctuation checks
Advanced but not TOO HARD TO READ grammar
More detail and thrill
Clear detail, correct use of words, correction of mistakes like white instead of red (Embarrassing mistake made in I Stand Corrected)
Better story beginnings
Better understand of what I mean
Much more!
