I have decided to redo my story,so here is the firsst chapter of my remake. Enjoy!

Kansas Guardian Pack:

Name: Human form: Wolf form:

Thoran(leader): Man in his late fourties light grey beard Large with white fur .

Convel (Second-in-command):Dark red hair;tall Dark red fur with two black paws

Joeseph: Elderly,is oldest Guardian in the pack Black and dark gray fur

Damien: Short black hair,a goatee and ice blue eyes Light grey and white fur

Adolph: Large man with dark brown hair Dark brown fur

Johnathan: Light blonde hair,brown eyes Dark gray fur

Bailey: Light brown hair,brown eyes Light brown fur that shines gold when light hits it

Darrel: African American, stocky,brown eyes Black fur,white paws and tail tip

Zeke: Red hair Brown fur with white spots over eyes

Accalia: Long blonde hair,blue eyes Light cream fur with a brown nose

Ayame: Short black hair,green eyes Pitch black fur

Tamaska: Light brown hair,heavy build White fur with one brown paw

Ulrich: Tall,long brunet hair Gray fur

Disclaimer:I do not own Suitelife,yet

Bailey was at her ceromonie to become a Guardian. Guardians protect all magical creatures and there was a pack for each state.
Bailey looked down off the stage. Their was her extended family in the front row,acting as normal as any family would,on an important day in a relatives lives. But that was the thing,they weren`t normal. In fact,no one in here was. They were all werewolves,or other magical creatures. She was up their with the other two apprentices,listening to their mentors bragging about how well they have trained,and why they deserved to become Guardians,the headmaster of the Guardians came carrying a box in his hands. Bailey felt her body quiver with excitement. That was the box that held the Guardian crystals,one which would be hers. The headmaster handed the box to the pack leader,Thoran,who opened it,and the three mentors pulled the necklaces out.

The first apprentice,Darrel,walked up to his mentor,Adolf. He put the crystal around Darrel`s neck,and Darrel stood straight up,
facing the audience. The next apprentice,Zeke,got up,and his mentor Johnathan reapeated what Darrel and Adolf had just done.
Finally,Bailey`s time came. She walked over to her mentor Joeseph,an elderly man,but had the fire of a young apprentice.

He put the crystal around her neck,and she felt her heart begin to race. This was the icon that showed all magical creatures that she was now an authoriative figure,that she woul fight for their rights until her last breath, she would stop the evil Shadowwariors, who were werewolves that stole and caused harm to others. He put the necklace around her neck,and Joeseph went to go stand by the other mentors ,she heard Thoran,the leader of her pack say,"Please welcome our newest Guardians. I know they will serve us with honor,and stay loyal." and with that, the crowd cheered. She looked around,and her eyes drifted over to the senoir Guardians.
She saw Damien,a werewolf with short black hair and a goatee. He stared at her with his pale blue eyes. 'No,they arent eyes,there more like chips of ice.' Bailey thought.

She stepped off the stage to her proud family. They all congradulated her,and she took out her portal key,and returned to her cabin on the S.S. Tipton. Bailey was happy she got out of their quickly. She needed to stay away from Damien for a while,just until everything blew off. She sat on her bed and thought about what had happened only three days ago.

Flashback:
Bailey was walking through Unicorn Ridge,trying to calm herself down. She was so excited because Joeseph had just told her she was going to be a Guardian,and her ceremony would be in just a few days,along with Darrel and Zeke. She was going down an old path which no one usually went down but she had been here hundreds of times before and she wasn`t scared.
Then,three familiar scents came to her nose. First was Damien, 'What`s he doing here?" she thought. The next scent was Convel`s,the Second-in-command of her pack. But the next scent sent chills up her spine. It was blood.

She knew that couldn`t be good. She followed the scent to a small clearing,and saw Damien and Convel in their wolf forms,locked in brutal battle. She crouched behind a bush,watching the two werewolves fight. She was about to speak up to end the battle,when Damien stopped fighting and held Convel down." You`ll never get away with it."
Convel said,struggling under the large gray and white wolf. "You really think killing me and becoming Second-in-comand will help you rule the Magical World?"
Convel asked."Yes,it is a small step,but still important."Damien told him.

"What makes you think Thoran will even choose you?" Convell snarled."Your nothing but a low life greedy bastard!"

"I am the ideal choice."Damien said,staying icily calm and, without another word,he sunk his teeth into Convel`s neck,and within seconds,he went limp.
Bailey couldn`t believe her eyes. Then, Damien turned into human form,and Bailey heard a beeping noise. Damien pulled out a small box,and a hologram appeared.
A man appeared on the hologram. She recognized the man as Ray Jones, the headmaster of the Shadowwarriors.

"Is the deed done?"she heard Jones ask.

"Yes,phase one of our plan is complete." Damien said with a devious smile. "Phase two will comence as soon as I become Second-in-command."

"And on November twenty-first,we will attack the Guardians at the meeting they have every full moon, and make them obey us right?" Jones asked.

"Yes,and we`ll make all the worthless mortals our slaves."Damien replied. When he said mortals,Bailey imediately thought of her friends on the SS. Tipton.
She gulped,she had to find a way to stop him. Damien dismissed Jones and the hologram went away. Bailey got up to run off when he heard a voice say, "Going somewhere Bailey?" Bailey`s blood turnd to ice. She turned around and saw Damien staring at her with pure hatred and fury.

"N-no where."Bailey stammered.

" You didn`t see or hear anything,got that?"Damien said.

"I got it." Bailey said nervously.

"Good, for a second, I thought I was going to have to kill you."Damien told her. "But if you do say anything, I will have to kill you."

Bailey just nodded. Damien walked past her,gave her one more stare,and walked away.

End Flashback:
Bailey looked at her new crystal. She didn`t know what to do. But she did know she wasn`t going to let him get away with it.
'What should I do?' Bailey thought. 'A loyal Guardian would tell some one. But, a smart one would take matters into their own hands.'
She decided to be the loyal Guardian. She opened up her portal key and she was standing outside of the HQ for the Kansas Guardian Pack.
She walked in,and Guardians were walking toward the meeting room. She walked up to Zeke. "What`s going on?" she asked.

"Didn`t you hear? Thoran is going to apoint the new Second-in-comand."the boy said.

"Who is it?" Bailey asked,fearing to hear the one she kept thinking.

"What else do you not know? It`s Damien." he replied.

Bailey froze. She ran to the meeting room where everyone else was,and Thoran and Damien were standing on the stage. Then Thoran began speaking.
"Due to the mysterious death of our beloved and loyal Second-in-command Convel Norris,we need to apoint a new one. Damien has offered,and he is a brave,strong and loyal -"
Bailey cringed when he said loyal-"Guardian,so he shall be the new Second-in-command." And the pack cheered,all except for her. Bailey couldn`t believe it.

After the ceremony,she walked up to Joeseph and Thoran who were in a quiet conversation.

"I need to tell you both something...alone." Bailey told them.

They both looked at eachother. "Okay,come into my office." Thoran said. When they got into Thoran`s office,Joeseph asked what she needed to tell them.

"Damien is up to something bad."she began.

Thoran and Joeseph looked at eachother,then Thoran asked,"What kind of bad thing?"

"He`s going to take over the world and inslave the mortals,and make you obey him."she told them,almost yelling.

"Look,Damien is very loyal and has been for ten years."Thoran said.

Bailey turned to her former mentor."You believe me don`t you?"

"I`m sorry,but are you sure it wasn`t just a misunderstanding?"he said.

Bailey felt her anger and frustration rising "Fine,don`t believe me."she said as she left the office.

'I guess i`m on my own.' she thought. Little did she know that Damien had been ease dropping."You better watch out girl." he quietly said. "Keep your eyes open and your ears pricked,you never know what might be around the corner."

Well, what did you think? I would love some constructive criticism so,please,please,please review!