This is an unfinished story, the first part is what I wrote, the second are notes to help me remember ideas and stuff for the story and the third part are challanges that I was going to put a few of after each chapter.
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In an ally in the slums of Konoha a man running in the rain as if the devil himself as after him, he turned his to look behind him and saw nothing but he didn't slow down and instead kept running.
He man finally came to a dead end where he collapsed onto the ground, breathing heavily he allowed a smile to appear on his face, he had done it, he had escaped the monster that was hunting him most likely in revenge for him helping in getting rid of the kyuubi-brat a year ago by using his position as a civilian council member which was later taken from him by that old fool of a hokage.
Then he heard it.
Footsteps, not loud stomping ones but the kind you can barely hear along with the sound of metal scratching against stone.
He looked towards the end of the ally as he got up from the ground hearing that the sound was getting closer.
But nothing was there.
The man looks at one of his pockets and grabbed a small knife he had in it and mentally cursed himself for voting not to waste shinobi by having them patrol the slums since they didn't matter back when he was on the council as he looked back towards to where the sound was coming from.
But nothing was there.
He closes his eyes and tries to stay calm after all he was no ordinary man, he was Bakamaru a former member of the council who surely would be returned to his rightful position once the other council members understands how important he is, right? He thinks as the sounds get louder in the ally making him look straight forward where the sound is coming from.
But nothing was there.
It isn't fair, why was he thrown of the council? He should have been rewarded for what he did but instead he was now forced to live here in the slums with all the revolting vermin that believes that they are just as much people as him HA! How sad it is that they would believe such nonsense, he then brings his hand up to get rid of the water in his eyes during which he freezes, the sounds had stopped so he looked at where they had previously come from.
But now there was something there.
It looked like a person, the size was that of an average six year old boy but he was hardly dressed like one, a bright red hooded jacket that is open at the front, exposing most of his tattoo-covered torso, black pants with a few pockets held up by a belt with multiple metal tags, his feet were bare save for the white bandages warped around them with the same kind also warped around his hands starting from the middle of his forearms hiding a bit of the tattoos there and stopping halfway up his fingers.(1)
He started to very slowly walk towards the man, while he was walking he placed one of his hands against one of the walls dragging it along the wall as he walked, this somehow made the metal scrapping against stone sound return despite him not having any kind of metal on his hands.
He never should have gone to that old lab where everyone was rumored to have been killed.
But what choice did he have he needed money since the filth living in the slums were too stupid to understand that they should follow his orders as he is of a higher social standing.
So if he could get some of the things in the supposed 'cursed' building and then sell them he would get the money he needed to start his climb out of the slums and back where he belongs.
After all those rumors about an evil ghost living in there couldn't have been real.
Ghosts aren't real so the people working in the building obviously died from something else like an experimental poison or something.
Same for those others that disappeared, they were killed by the same thing since the poison must not have had time to disperse before they went there a few days after everything went silent in there.
This was probably just some lowlife that was planning on robbing him, but while he was a civilian he had gone to the ninja academy as a child.
Sure he had failed since the teachers couldn't see the clear natural talent he had, or maybe they were bribed by the clans who wanted to make sure their members were not outdone by him.
But he got all of them back later on when he became a council member by cutting the academy's budget with the help of some other members who had also been treated unfairly by them.
Not to mention all other things he had help correct since they obviously were very wrong.
He had been at the top of the world, like a god even.
And then came the day when he helped finish what even the yondaime couldn't.
But did he get rewarded for his great and noble deed? No, instead he was kicked of the council.
Why? He should have been praised like the yondaime himself.
It was not fair, not only did his seat on the council get taken but almost all his money was taken to since the hokage didn't think he deserved the bonuses from the village treasury.
What's worse is that he even lost money that was to be given to the demon-brat as 'compensation' of all things like that monster deserves it.
Not that anyone will ever be able to find him since that weird doctor said he was taking the brat someplace where the hokage won't find him.
It was probably being used as a lab rat like the damn thing deserves so it is unlikely that he would ever see it again.
It was then a lightning bolt flashed across the sky illuminating the ally letting the man see the blue eyes and blond hair under the hood of the one just a few steps away from him.
The thundering sound of a second lightning bolt prevented anyone who could have been nearby from hearing the man's scream.
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Several Years Later.
Fourteen year old Namikaze Uzumaki Naruto was at the moment sitting in a nice looking coach inside a wooden room with only a few lights on a table keeping the darkness away.
He had his nose buried in a bingo book thinking about which one of them he should hunt down.
It wouldn't be the first time he had done something like that, in fact he has hunted and killed a good amount of people using what he had gained due to the hatred people has against the fox.
At that thought he remembered how he was kidnapped when he was five by a group of assholes and given to some scientist or something to be used as a test subject.
It was pure agony, DNA from different clans and animals not to mention several untested drugs and chemicals were injected into different parts of his body, add in the fact that the morons actually tried messing with the Kyuubi's seal and things were bound to go very wrong.
Or very right, after all they were trying to find ways to improve konoha's shinobis and they sure as hell succeeded in improving him during that one year he was with them.
His body, chakra and a few other things have been changed so he would become the ultimate hunter and a perfect predator.
To be honest Naruto actually feels some amount of gratitude for all the improvements done to him.
That of course didn't stop him from brutally killing everybody in the lab as well as those who helped put him there and take over the place, giving him a base of operation away from unwanted eyes since the hokage and council rarely turns their attention to the slums and as such has much less influence there and those living in the slums know better than to mess with the 'ghost' that lives in the old laboratory.
Naruto then noticed that it was time for the genin exams at the academy, so he put the book in his pocket and left the build dressed the same way he has been for the last several years.
He wasn't bothered on the way there, mostly because nobody would see him even if he walked right beside them thanks to one of two abilities he got when a large needle was jammed into his spine and injected him with an untested artificial bloodline DNA-strand which would have failed on its own but add in the other things in Naruto's body as well as the Kyuubi's chakra and it actually worked.
Now by sending chakra to one of his two hearts since he had at some point during his stay at the lab developed a second heart on the opposite side of his chest he can use one of the two abilities of the *Seitai seishin* which is what he has named that part of his power to go along with the *Genshi shuryō-sha chi*and his last still unnamed ability.
The ability he is using at the moment is the *Yūrei hada* which makes it close to impossible to detect him, it not only turn him invisible but also removes his scent and chakra signature, he can even chose what is affected like for example just making his chakra undetectable or maybe a kunai that he sent a bit chakra into, all in all it was a powerful stealth ability.
An ability that he has been using very well ever since he got it, stealing stuff, gathering blackmail, murder and other things have become much easier and rewarding.
Naruto arrived at the academy and sat down next to Hyuga Hinata and gave her a light poke to let her know he was there.
The reason for this is that Hinata is the only person Naruto truly cares about even if he sometimes has an odd way of showing it ever since he confronted her about stalking him when he was six.
Iruka and Mizuki entered the room and announced that the genin exams were now going to begin getting a 'yes sensei' from everyone except Naruto.
'Bored, bored, I am so fucking bored' Naruto mentally ranted as he sat there.
Of course that was mostly due to the fact that he wasn't taking the exams since he had already been given a headband from the hokage after proving he could be a ninja in private and had never taken a real class instead of just spying on them to learn.
After that everyone was brought outside for the shuriken and kunai throwing part of the exams, but go with the rookie nine got passing grades and jump to the taijutsu part were the students had to fight either Iruka or Mizuki from five minutes. But let's skip that part as well as the ninjutsu and go to the end of the exams when Iruka congratulated the ones who passed.
Afterwards Naruto told Hinata to meet him at the lab later so they could train together or something.
Until then however Naruto would be busy with something else due to what he had learned from a useful little friend.
Said friend was a small at the moment red chameleon sitting on Naruto's shoulder as he made his way to a storehouse owned by one of the elder councilmembers.
It turns out that one of the scientists working at the lab came into possession of the summoning contract after his brother returned from a mission during which he just found it laying on the ground (people rarely came near the castle in neck country so the summon eventually ran out of chakra) however he died on his next mission.
The scientist seeing as he was not a shinobi figured that he could still use the contract by putting it up for studying and experimentation, they did manage to link it to other kinds of lizards like Geckos, Thorny Devils and Komodo Dragons, something which greatly pissed said species off due to their own contracts being destroyed as a side effect because of some only one contract rule, luckily since Naruto killed the ones responsible he was allowed to summon them.
But enough about the summons.
Naruto breathed in and out a few time before he sent chakra to his second heart, activating the *Maboroshi no karada* causing him to sink into the floor, he then fell for a short while until he fell out of the ceiling of an underground corridor and stopped sending chakra to his second heart.
He then sat down against one of the walls to rest for a little.
The reason for this is that unlike the first ability which only takes a small amount of chakra to use, the second one not only takes a small bit more but also makes its heart beat faster and strains it which can cause a heart attack, hurting and weakening him for some time as well as prevents him from using that ability until his heart repairs itself and restarts thanks to his regeneration.
After a while Naruto got up and started to walk towards some place in the underground base, he knew where he was going since this wasn't the first time he had been here… in the ROOT headquarters.
As he walks along the corridors of the ROOT base he passes by Danzo who had a frown on his face, which is something he has had a lot since Naruto started to sneak in and mess things up.
One of those times ended up which Naruto getting a very useful toy.
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FLASHBACK: ABOUT SIX YEARS AGO.
''It is done Danzo-sama'' a ROOT medic-nin said as Danzo got up from the operation table.
Danzo then sent chakra into his new eye and.
BOOM! His newly implanted sharingan eye exploded inside his eye socket making Danzo fall to the ground.
All of the ROOT ninjas rushed to him all trying to help him.
Just leaving the base was Naruto who held up the eye of Uchiha Shisui and after looking at it for a few seconds put it a small green jar of preserving liquid which he then placed in a pocket.
And with that Naruto headed home happy that he spied on Danzo since of how much fun he can have with this eye should he ever need it.
Still he wasn't sure about taking out his own eye in order to transplant the sharingan despite how near useless his own eyes are at the moment.
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END OF FLASHBACK.
Naruto has been studying the sharingan since he got it trying to figure out what made it so different from the others that he 'collected' in the ROOT base.
Sadly Danzo survived the whole thing and became even more paranoid then he already was.
It was at that point Naruto arrived at his destination, ROOT's treasury.
At that moment Naruto's thoughts were just one word repeating itself for the next five minutes.
'Money, money, money, money, money, money, money'.
Danzo is not going to be happy when he finds out that someone stole so much of his money.
And after once again making Danzo's life hell Naruto went home.
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Naruto's Base.
Naruto arrived at the lab noticing the cloaked figure standing to whom he nodded and they both entered the building.
They eventually came to the wooden room with the coach that Naruto sat down in as the figure removed the cloak reveling herself to be Hinata.
However the way she was dressed under the cloak was not something most would think she would ever wear.
A short indigo colored skirt, a form fitting indigo top that showed of her body and around her neck was a dog collar with a heart shaped tag that said 'Naruto's pet: Hinata'.
Hinata got on the coach and crawled over to Naruto on all four and laid her head in his lap, put one arm around his waist, snuggled up to him and closed her eyes with a smile as he started to stroke her hair.
She knew that if her father ever found out she acted like this he would be furious but she can't bring herself to care, Naruto didn't care what clan she was from or if she was the heritress those were just nice little bonuses, he liked her, cared for her and acknowledged her and she didn't need to do much more than do the same for him.
Sure the master and pet thing was a bit weird at first but she actually enjoys it now, they also have done things like visit towns outside of Konoha to go on dates like boyfriend and girlfriend.
''Hey! Weren't you going to train?'' came the demonic voice of the kyuubi.
'I don't feel like it anymore' Naruto answered the demon.
''Okaybut I need to talk to you about your problem'' Kyuubi told him.
'Problem?'
''Yes problem or have you forgotten that your eyes are almost completely blind unless you send a shitload of chakra into them due to those scientists removing and actually hollowing out most of the insides of them'' Kyuubi clarified making a frown appear on Naruto's face since he was conscious when it happened.
'What about it?' Naruto asked.
''I have found a way to not only fix your eyes but also make them better than normal ones'' Kyuubi told him with a smirk.
'That's great… what to you want in return?' Naruto asked knowing the fox will want something as payment just like with almost everything he does for Naruto.
That was the reason why he never tried to break the seal after it was altered by the scientists, in the seal he has all the food and space he could ever want unlike in the real world where he can barely take a short walk without stepping on a village and would have to eat everyone in it to get a halfway decent meal.
''I want… Bacon'' Kyuubi answered.
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''…''
'Bacon? Seriously you could ask for almost anything and you want bacon?' Naruto asked getting the mental image of the fox drooling while nodding.
Naruto couldn't help but wonder if this really was the bloodthirsty monster that all of Konoha was so afraid of.
He is dressed like Gunzi/Gunji from Togainu No Chi.
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*Seitai seishin* Living Spirit.
*Genshi shuryō-sha chi* Primal hunter's blood.
*Yūrei hada* Ghost Skin.
*Maboroshi no karada* Phantom Body.
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NOTES AND IDEAS.
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In this story Naruto will be based on Gunzi a bit mostly in terms of clothing.
At the age five Naruto was taken by a kyuubi-hater and used as a lab rat for a year before he broke free and killed everybody in the lab.
The kyuubi-hater was some guy who got denied of starting a research and development group which he would be the head of.
Naruto had several things changed about him both by the people at the lab and kyuubi.
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His Eyes: While still blue are now slit like a cat or fox and has two sharingan tomoes in them one on either side of the slits, this is a result of several experiments to give him some kind of doujutsu but was not finished since Naruto killed them all, the eyes are nearly blind actually since more the half their mass was removed, however Kyuubi altered them so that they could absorb three eyes each to fix that as well as gain the absorbed eyes abilities, Naruto later gets his hands on six sharingans one of which is Shisui's, he then using the lab injects one with Shisui's Sharingan DNA turning it to a kind of copy of his, the then did the same the others using Itachi's and Sasuke's DNA and after forcing Sasuke's into Mangekyo mode somehow he has three pairs of Mangekyos to absorb.
This in turns gives them the power to turn into Rinnegans, he can chose if both eyes change or just one, his path are Edo summons since not only does he get powerful bodies but they have the edo regeneration ability as well and the kunai the seals are tied to are made from the chakra receiver metal also the seals give them a greater range, Human path: Mu, Hell path: Nidaime Mizukage, Preta path: Sandaime Raikage, Asura path: Sandaime Kazekage, Animal path: Nidaime Hokage and Deva path Shodaime Hokage.
Also along with the three standard mangekyo jutsu he has three more Shisui's unique genjutsu which he can only use one time before it needs to recharge for a year,
one that lets him devourer someone (like Tiir Rumibul from LOLH) and gain all their skills and abilities along with heal damage and get a power boost but the abilities and skills only lasts for a short while five to ten minutes and the power boost a little longer afterward that they disappear, however he can permanently gain the abilities and skills this however costs one of his eyes and even if he gets replacements this can only be done twice, (Hidan is lunch)
the last one lets him use Izanagi three times each week.
Naruto has one extra sharingan implanted just above his left ankle in the event that he really needs to use the Izanagi, and two on his right ankle to permanently gain the abilities he devoured.
His Body: Has been altered mostly by injecting different kinds of human or animal DNA as well as several untested chemicals and drugs, Naruto has developed a second heart on the other side of his chest with a second blood circulation system connected to it, the skeleton is similar to that of a bird but while much lighter than normal it is still three times denser than a normal skeleton, his muscles mostly becomes denser instead of bigger as they get stronger so he won't lose any speed or agility as they grow, has a much better immune system, he heals faster, his senses are far beyond that of a human's as he can hear as good as a bat, smell as good as most nin-dogs and can feel vibrations from the ground like a snake( if he puts his hands down or walks bear footed), balance of a cat and so on, he also has a subconscious control of them making them ignore things that would overwhelm them, and finally has control of his aura and pheromones which lets him for example give of the feel that he is the alpha of the pack or a superior predator, he can also use pheromones to affect others like making them hot and horny or give of a feel that they are already taken.
His Chakra System: Is a Hyuga's worst nightmare since not only does his normal system have a hundred more chakra points, it also has a second smaller system that makes it look like all of Naruto's organs, muscles and bones are covered by blue nets to a Byakkugan user, this gives his chakra control a boost and gives him an advantage against genjutsu but not immunity.
His Chakra: His wind affinity has been enhanced and due to having a good amount of it sent into him during all the experimenting he has a strong affinity for lightning, also later it turns out that he has a dormant affinity for yin-yang.
His Ghost Abilities: Are the result of a flawed half-finished artificial kekkei genkai being injected into him and then mutated by the Kyuubi, There are two different abilities which are activated by sending chakra to one of his two hearts,
The first ability is Yūrei hada (ghost skin) that makes it so he can't be seen even by doujutsu, his scent can't be smelt, his chakra can't be seen or felt even by doujutsu and even the sounds he makes are somewhat muted if he wants them to be, Naruto can control what about him is affected such as just his chakra system to freak out hyugas also if Naruto is close enough to something he can use this ability on that as well,. Naruto often makes his claws, chakra covered items or even jutsu invisible.
The second is Maboroshi no karada (phantom body) which makes his body intangible similar to Madara, strangely enough when this ability is used the shadow fades away after a second or two, when using this he can chose if he is affected by gravity or not and can therefor use his chakra to fly also if Naruto is touching something then he can make that intangible as well, the weakness of this ability is that when it is used the second heart that it is connected to starts to beat faster and is put under strain during that time as well as a short while after so if overused will cause a heart attack which will hurt and weaken him and stop him from using that ability until the heart recovers.
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The Claws: They are special seals on them that lets them store poisons, drugs and other things inside of them that will coat the claws when the user wants, also Naruto never takes them of after all does a lion go anywhere without its claws.
The Strings: They are razor-sharp high quality chakra conductive ninja wire that Naruto usually makes invisible and use to trap and/or cut apart his targets.
The Hood: Is nothing special except it is self-repairing and cleaning.
The Tattoos: Are a bunch of attempts to places seals on him but failed thanks to Kyuubi who changed their appearance and purpose so now they prevent any seals to be placed on Naruto without his permission, the ones on his arms are linked to his summoning contract/s.
The Lab: Is where Naruto lives and such, he also does his own experiments there, for example he had somehow gotten his hands on several sharingans so he does things to them to maybe unlock mangekyos.
Naruto has a summoning contract for different kinds of lizards and can add other reptile-like being to it so he will most likely challenge summons like Manda the snake, The salamander boss and other and if they lose their contracts are added to the one he has, the ultimate summon might be included.
Hinata gets the Shodaime Mizukage's contract for Aquatic creatures (fish, whales, sharks, rays, jellyfish, clams, squids, crabs and so on with the boss being the Kraken from Titan)or a contract for arachnids(spiders and scorpions) if so then Naruto also gets the aquatic one.
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Naruto is somewhat insane now a bit like Gunzi and one of the few who he listens to is Hinata who he is in a strange relationship with as he often calls her his pet which she enjoys.
He also has a bit of a predator and law of nature complex, this makes it so that he greatly despises rapists (due to him feeling that rape goes against the laws of nature since when animals mate they all do things to prove themselves to their partners and so) and people like Gato whom he views as parasites which he considers the lowest and most unnecessary life forms in the world.
Naruto also has a habit of using phrases and the like that hints to his ability to devourer others such as ''you look good enough to eat'' ''well don't you seem absolutely delicious'' and so on.
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CHALLANGES.
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CHALLENGE: SACRIFICE.
Danzo was never one to admit he was wrong unless he truly believed it himself and this was one of those times.
After the Kyuubi attack the Sandaime made a few mistakes due to being blined by either grief over his dead wife or of faith in the people of Konoha.
The two most noticeable being that he told the village of the Kyuubi being sealed in Naruto, He gave the civilian council more power in belief that it would lighten his own burden.
Mistakes that Danzo believed could of use to him since he could use the people's anger and fear of Kyuubi to weaken Sarutobi's standing in the village and that he could manipulate the civilians to gain more power in the council.
He was such a fool, he wanted to be Hokage but lost sight of the more important things about being one.
A Hokage must be really to sometimes make great sacrifices even his own life, Danzo only sacrifices others.
Also he viewed all those around his as pieces of a game, expendable pawns meant to protect the king that he believed the Hokage to be.
But he was wrong, he understands that now, the Hokage is the most powerful piece, the queen but in the end the Hokage is a piece that sometimes needs to be sacrificed to protect the true king, the king from which all other pieces comes from.
The true king is the next generation, they are the once who will grow up and become new pieces in the game to replace the old ones.
Danzo now understands , many of his ways would have destroyed Konoha but now he plans to do his best to fix his mistakes and push Konoha to greatness.
Starting with preparing what will in time become the most powerful piece in the game, the one who will become Hokage… Naruto.
Danzo is well aware of the potential the boy has, the son of the Minato and Kushina, host of the Kyuubi, it is easy to see that he would become great, even more so now that Danzo won't allow his growth to be stunted.
Danzo has managed to halt some of the people's anger at the fox so that they won't attack the boy as well as done his best to take away much of the civilian council's power and return it to the Hokage position.
As for Naruto himself Danzo has been preparing the boy by delivering scrolls and the like to his apartment either with words of encouragement and advise on how to get people to like him or training schedules and low level jutsu.
Yes Naruto was going to be a great Hokage as the boy already showed to be willing the get hurt to do was he thinks is right as Danzo had seen when the boy fought three old kid who were picking on the Hyuga heritress.
And Danzo had already made sure the boy would have a few aces in hole.
After having his own scientists and medic-nins study what Orochimaru had done to his arm they were able to do something similar to Naruto.
Of course Danzo ordered them to make sure it wouldn't look like his arm, instead the cells of the Shodaime could be seen as a green vine like tattoo that started on his back and then spread out to his shoulders, arms, hands and collarbone with ten red berries appearing at random place on the vine.
The berries were in fact sharingans sealed into the boy's body and in one of the eye sockets was the Mangekyo sharingan of Uchiha Suishi, or at least one of them as Danzo had only managed to get one but luckily he managed to place a special fuin jutsu on the other so should Naruto even look into that eye then it will be absorbed into the one he has increasing its power.
Best part is that Naruto's eye will always look like its normal blue even when he uses it.
BANG!
Danzo took one last look at the sleeping boy before leaving as the Sandaime entered one of Orochimaru's old labs to rescue Naruto after learning that the boy was missing.
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Powerful Naruto with Danzo's abilities, NaruHina or NaruHinaHarem.
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CHALLENGE: BLOOD OF JERRO. Naruto and Neverwinter nights crossover.
Five year old Naruto opened his eyes and looked around the room that he was in wondering how he got there as the last thing he remembered was getting beaten in an ally by a mob of civilians.
''Ah it would seem that he has awakened'' said a voice from the doorway.
Naruto turned towards it and saw a strange 'man' with grayish blue skin, black hair and yellow slit eyes, dressed in blue robes.
''W-who are you'' Naruto asked him.
''You may call me Mephasm and the reason you are here is due to me taking the first steps of fulfilling my end of a deal that I made long ago with one of your ancestors'' Mephasm answered.
He then proceeded to tell Naruto how one of his ancestors from a time long before the sage of six paths or the time when all the planes were almost completely cutoff from all each other so that this one was the only one that could still access the others with the use of magic from someone native to it.
And that thanks to a magic circle connected to him specifically he was able to summon himself in order to take any descendants of the one he made a deal with to this place that was buried under the Hokage Mountain and contained power and knowledge now long lost to the world.
This place was once known as Ammon Jerro's haven, a place filled with all kinds of things and can grant great power to the master of it, which in this case is Naruto as he is the last descendant of Mephasm's contracts partner and Thria who was created by him with a ritual that fused all the females that traveled with the legendary shard-bearer into one in an attempt to bring them back with a ritual after their deaths.
Here Naruto could learn all kinds of arcane secrets, control the place with his will, summon demons and the like to be imprisoned and used as power sources and so much more, add the fact that there is lots of different items such as bags of holding and the silver sword just makes it even better.
Mephasm would be his mentor and teacher for ten years after which his part of the bargain is done and he will return to his own plane.
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Powerful, badass magic using Naruto. NaruHina or Naruharem with Hinata in it.
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CHALLENGE: A SNAKE'S CREATION.
He had won, the battle at the valley of the end was over, Sasuke was unconscious and could be brought back to Konoha.
''Kukuku I guess Sasuke wasn't everything people said he was'' Came the voice of Orochimaru as snakes tied themselves around Naruto.
''O-orochimaru what are you doing here?'' Naruto demanded angrily.
''Simply making sure my investment pays off'' the snake man answered with a mocking smile before frowning.
''And from what I just saw it would seem that I have made a bad one, I mean honestly I'm well aware of the difference in the training of you two'' Orochimaru said as he reached down and placed his hand on Sasuke's curse mark which starts to glow.
''You were never given a proper education at any point in your life from the orphanage where they gave you an old dictionary from which you somehow had to learn how to read by yourself and the ninja academy where most of the teachers sabotaged you more than taught you to those two idiots where one only cared about Sasuke and the other about his 'research' and therefore never truly acted like a teacher should'' Orochimaru said with barely concealed disgust, especially since one of the idiots held the same title as him.
''Sasuke on the other hand was given everything, training from a young age, special extra lessons during the academy, clan scrolls to learn from and of course a teacher who focused completely on him, so when the two of you fought it was obvious that he would win, right?'' Orochimaru said as he removed his hand which was now holding a pyramid shaped purple crystal away from Sasuke's now mark free neck.
He then kicked the unconscious Sasuke most likely breaking a rib or two.
''WRONG! This stupid little shit must be mentally retarded or something since even those with no talent at all would have done better than him if they were given that kind of training and my curse mark and to think people are actually saying that he is the next genius shinobi on par with Itachi and even myself HA!, no, no ,no Naruto it is clear that the one with real talent is you, which is why I'll be switching who my investment is'' Orochimaru says as he pockets the crystal as another Orochimaru appears and hands him another crystal which he pockets before turning into mud.
Before Orochimaru could say anything else a figure shoot out of the forest and down the valley.
''Kukuku well, well if it isn't little Kakashi come to save your students?'' Orochimaru asked mockingly.
Kakashi just glared at him before looking over a Sasuke.
''What did you do to Sasuke'' He demanded to know.
''Oh why are you asking me when it was young Naruto that beat him (Kakashi snorts in disbelief) but any way what are you going to do? After all you can't possibly think that you can escape me while carrying two other meaning you will either have to abandon one of them or risk your life and fight me'' the snake sannin told the scarecrow.
Kakashi didn't hesitate for a second and threw a smoke bomb which once the smoke was gone showed that both he and Sasuke where nowhere to be seen.
Naruto just starred at where his sensei had been, not even noticing that Orochimaru's snakes had lifted him of the ground and were now following the sannin.
Nobody saw that Rock Lee and Gaara had seen and heard the whole thing since they arrived just as Sasuke got knocked out.
As for Orochimaru he was happy as a kid in a candy store, after all turning the curse marks into crystal form made them completely absorb the wearer's bloodline as well as half their chakra capacity and muscle mass, unfortunately when giving the marks to someone else so that they will be able to use the bloodline as if it was their own by having them eat the crystal always results in them dying from the strain.
By the Kyuubi would never allow that to happen to its host and since the marks can't be destroyed without a great deal of effort there is only one other option, make the host gain the mark and bloodline.
''Kukuku soon perfection will be in my grasp, isn't that wonderful Moku-kun?'' Orochimaru asks as he stands in his laboratory.
''(sobs) P-please, I ha-hav-have done as you asked, I've mad(coughs blood)made as many jutsu as I can for this elements and written them down now please make me normal like everybody else'' Was the pain filled pleas of that appeared to be cross between a man and a tree as most of his skin was like a tree and his feet and legs were rooted into the ground.
Sighting Orochimaru placed his hand against the mark on his forehead that looked like three chain links.
''Fool I said that I would remove the mokuton from you, I never said anything else'' the sannin said as life faded from the one who had a stronger affinity for mokuton then the shodaime hokage but lived a life of pain due to never having what it took to control it.
Orochmaru then held up the crystals for the Heaven, Earth and Hell curse marks as he looked at the blonde ninja glaring at him, yes once he has been trained enough then the fox will be temporarily suppressed so that he can take over and gain a body with infinite chakra, a healing factor and three bloodlines it would be… perfect.
Naruto for his part was just thinking three things.
Pretend that the bloodline transfer made him lose his memories except for basics like talking and reading as well as ninja related skills and jutsu.
Train and learn all you can until the time is right.
And when the time comes… kill Orochimaru.
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Powerful badass Naruto, NaruHarem preferably with Hinata in it.
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CHALLENGE: BHAAL IS WHO?. Look up the Forgotten Realms Wiki if you need info or pictures.
The outer void, a place unreachable, unseen and unknown to all the beings of the forgotten realms even the gods… well except for one, Bhaal the Lord of Murder.
In fact it was there he could be found ever since his 'death'.
Yeah right, like it would actually be possible to murder the god of murder, fools all of them.
Everyone believes that Cyric is an actual god, that is far from the truth as he is simply channeling Bhaal's power and divinity, it somewhat sad Cyric thinks he rules when in reality he is nothing but a puppet, the Sphere of Strife just as the Portfolios of Deception, Illusion, Intrigue, Lies and Murder are not truly his as the moment Bhaal wishes it they shall abandon Cyric and go to him along with everything else from the very last drop of power to the ownership of The Supreme Throne.
Not only that but a very large amount of power will come from other sources.
Even now Bhaal was absorbing an incredible amount of divine essence that was gathered from the 'Bhaalspawn crisis' as it was called, how easy it was to gain so much power… not to mention fun since he got to impregnate so many females and who doesn't like the more pleasurable part of that?
True it was annoying how they all tried to take each other's essence in order to gain godhood and take their 'dead' father's place but in the end it didn't matter since the bhaalspawn that became the last one standing chose to free himself from it all and making all of the essence 'disappear' which sent it all back to Bhaal who got more than he had given since it had grown while in the bhaalspawns.
And Cyric was not the only one whom Bhaal had an unseen hold on since he had made sure to 'fix' his portfolios to act like a virus of sort, whenever they ended up in another deity's possession they would spread and infect them so that their godhood, portfolios, domains, dominions and everything else would be taken from them as soon as Bhaal wanted it and since he had infected a few other gods without them knowing such as Myrkul back before Kelemvor became the new god of the dead and Azuth the Lord of Spells before his fall into hell, once the time was right there was not going to be anyone with the power to stop him.
And the gods weren't the only once Bhaal had put his attention to after all he had once been a mortal and if he can rise to godhood then why can't others.
So chipping of one hundred pieces of his soul to be born as mortals in the world felt like a good idea and it turned out to be just that as one stopped the plague in Neverwinter and defeated the old ones while another battled from the quiet and snowy Hilltop to the eight hell itself and forcing the arch-devil Mephistopheles into servitude by learning his true name.
The soul pieces would fuse with him taking all they had gained with them.
But until the time was right he would have to wait and then he would give all of the realms a shock they won't soon forget and prepare a few things for something that has been in his heart, mind and soul long before he became a god, before he even became Bhaal.
He would never forget it, how he was betrayed and executed for doing his duty, how the woman who had become like a mother to him was overruled by the arrogant and corrupt, how a white eyed angel with indigo hair confessed her love for him and how he had so many unfinished things that he had yet to do.
Yeah it really sucked.
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Oh! And what a wonderful surprise it looks like he had finished absorbing all the essence and that means that it was time.
An elven druid who had saved Neverwinter from a horrible plague as well as an invasion of lizard men suddenly stood up as his eyes glowed for a moment after which he smiled and disappeared in a flash of light.
In hell a human wizard whose eyes glowed for a bit told the arch-devil Mephistopheles to come and kneel before him and not resist what he is going to do and since he had not choice the arch-devil just kneeled there as he was absorbed by the wizard who then disappeared in a flash of light.
At a keep a tiefling rouge was resting after stopping the king of shadows when his eyes glowed and he started laughing as he disappeared in a flash of light.
Similar things happened to several other people in different places across all the planes.
As for the gods, well…
Cyric was glaring at the handful of deities that had confronted him as soon as he left his dominion in which he was locked away after murdering the goddess of magic Mystra unknowingly letting Bhaal absorb her power and the like using Cyric as a link.
''FOOLS! DO YOU ALL ACUTALLY THINK YOU CAN STOP ME, ME! THE ONE TRUE GOD, I WILL KILL YOU ALL FOR EVEN THINKING YOU CA-GHAAAAAA!'' Cyric suddenly screamed in pain as energy just exploded out of him and formed a large orb a couple feet away.
And Cyric wasn't the only one had to have everything sucked out of him, several other gods just had all their power and the like explode out of them and fly off towards and fuse with the orb.
The orb then cracked and shattered with a bright light which when faded revealed a young man who looked to be about eighteen years old or so with golden yellow sun kissed hair, eyes so blue they would make the sky and sea green with envy and a body to kill for with perfect muscles and the like but not like a body builder and more like a runner and swimmer and the one thing that stood out the most was the mark of Bhaal right on top of his heart… something that was easy to see since he was completely naked much to the secret pleasure of the female deities.
The blond man turned towards Cyric who was just about to scream 'impossible' and without giving him a chance to do so snapped his fingers causing Cyric to explode into a mass of blood and bones.
Turing back to all the other gods he spread his arms wide.
''What's with the silent treatment? I mean why aren't you all cheering? After all as you can see, Bhaal is back!'' He said with a smile.
'OH Shit' was all the other gods could think.
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With a flash Bhaal appeared standing in front of a large bridge in a world far beyond to reaches of any being from the forgotten realms… not that there would be any left that could try getting here since before leaving Bhaal took care of any being of just below demi-god level power and above along with getting something to wear and a few other items.
'Hmm despite having been so many years for me only three years at the most have passed here' Bhaal thought as he looked around and saw the name of the bridge, The great Naruto Bridge.
'… HOLY CRAP I HAVE A BRIDGE NAMED AFTER ME!'
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So yeah Naruto is Bhaal, who somehow ended off in that world with most if not all his memories after his death from being executed due to the corrupt overruling Tsunade… However if you wish you can make it so he dies from Sasuke's chidori at the valley of the end.
Powerful and Badass to the extreme Naruto, NaruHina.
However to prevent him from being too powerful when facing enemies he can't walk around as a god and instead needs to create a mortal avatar to do that for him, the avatar will still be very powerful and look just like him also if killed Naruto can just make a new one since his real self is on a higher plane of existence.
Some of the Items Naruto brings with him.
Gem of Divinity: Contains the divine essence of Tiamat the Dragon Queen and Lolth the Queen of Spiders, the gems also has the essence of the two non-deities Glasya Princess of Hell, Lord of the Sixth Hell as well as Aribeth de Tylmarande.
Naruto plans to give this to Hinata and once she eats it she shall gain godhood as well as most of their power, skills, forms and so on.
Gem of Youth: Contains the essence of several famous and /or powerful female elves.
Naruto plans to give this to Tsunade so that she would not only gain more power but also eternal youth so she can be the immortal high priestess of the Ninja world's new gods.
Bhaal's Wish Coin: A simple gold coin with the mark of Bhaal on both sides, by flipping it the spell 'wish' is cast but be careful since if you're not Bhaal then he will know when you use it, what you wished and can cancel or influence how your wish is granted. This can only be used once a day.
A fun toy at the most to Bhaal since he is a god, but he often flips it even if he is not using it for some reason.
Bhaal's Blade: A powerful weapon despite not really having any special abilities except for being able to change into any kind of blade weapon and unbreakable, it is made from close to every kind of metal in the Forgotten Realms.
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CHALLENGE: DOUJUTSU MASTER.
Not sure how to write this one like the others so I'll just write it like this.
Naruto meets Kyuubi at some point between age six and becoming a gennin.
Kyuubi tells him that he won't accept a weak host and that all other biju have given their hosts different abilities and since Kyuubi is the greatest and most awesome of them all he shall give Naruto something that will be almost worthy of the incredible Kyuubi. (Yeah… the fox has a really big ego).
What Naruto gets is multiple doujutsu, he can have two different kinds at the same time, one in each eye.
Also Naruto can choose which of his doujutsu are passed on to his children by having that one selected (not active) when he impregnates the mother and if he has two selected at the same time there is a fifty percent chance of either not counting if the mother also has a doujutsu.
Naruto's doujutsu, what they look like and what they do.
Sharingan: It doesn't have the mangekyo at first but Naruto can copy a mangekyo he sees and then he can use it three times after which he must recopy one but NOT the eternal mangekyo he can't copy that for some reason.
Ideas on which girl/s should be the mother/s of the children with this doujutsu: Mikoto Uchiha, Hana Inuzuka, Tsume Inuzuka, Samui.
Byakkugan. Ideas on which girl/s should be the mother/s of the children with this doujutsu: Hinata, Hanabi, fem Haku, Hotaru.
Rinnegan. Ideas on which girl/s should be the mother/s of the children with this doujutsu: Konan, Koyuki, Sāra or Sāra's daughter, Toki, Shion.
Aigan (Love eye): The iris is pink, the whites of the eyes are a brighter shape of pink and the pupil is heart shaped with a red trim around it, It lets the user see the auras of living creatures letting the user know their emotions from looking at them; the eye can be used to suppress negative emotions and amplify positive ones and by making eye contact the user can either look into the targets mind and find out what they love or want the most, or put the target in a Tsukuyomi like genjutsu where they get everything they want and forget everything else never wanting to leave.
Ideas on which girl/s should be the mother/s of the children with this doujutsu: Ino, Fūka, Fubuki.
Hankyōgan (Echo eye): The whole eye is green except for the pupil that is light green and sends out a light green ripple outwards every five seconds or so; the eye can send out special undetectable chakra pulses with will act just like a bat's echolocation, these pulses also tells how much chakra things have and what kind it is, finally by making eye contact the user can mess with the target's senses and chakra control for a short while.
Ideas on which girl/s should be the mother/s of the children with this doujutsu: Haruna, Guren, Temari, Kagerō, Isaribi.
Chiyugan (Healing eye): The iris white and has a red cross on it; the lets the user see into people sort of like an x-ray but the user can chose things like seeing blood veins, chakra veins and the organ but not the muscles or bones, it also has microscopic vision, and finally by sending large amounts of chakra to the eyes they start to create special silver tears that have healing powers so strong that with just twenty drops a limb can be regenerated.
Ideas on which girl/s should be the mother/s of the children with this doujutsu: Amaru, Shizune, Tsunade, Karin.
Yamigan (Darkness eye): The whole eye is completely black; the eye creates a field that completely blocks out light, sound, smell and chakra sensing also, on the inside it is impossible to see, hear, smell anything or sense chakra, the user of the eye however is not affected by any of this, also the field is not a genjutsu and more like a space-time jutsu with is why things like summoning and other space-time jutsu doesn't work in there.
Ideas on which girl/s should be the mother/s of the children with this doujutsu: Suzumebachi, Kin, Tenten, Sasame.
Gensōgan (Illusion eye): the iris is constantly changing color as are the whites of the eye and the pupil; the eye lets the user detect, copy and break any genjutsu with little to no problem, the eye also let the user cast genjutsu with their eyes or reverse any genjutsu cast on them back at the caster with ease, finally with time, training, experience and a very strong desire to protect something or someone the wielder this eye can gain the ability to use Tsukuyomi, Kotoamatsukami and Izanagi but they will not only cost a good deal of chakra but each time one is used a bit of color disappears from the eye and once all the colors are gone leaving behind a pure grey eye none of eyes abilities can be used and it becomes no different than any other eye.
Ideas on which girl/s should be the mother/s of the children with this doujutsu: Kurenai, Yakumo, Tayuya.
Higan (Fire eye): The whites are orange, the iris red and the pupil yellow and the whole eye glows a bit; the eye can switch between normal vision and heat vision, also the user can ignite things with bursts of flames just by looking at them, the strength of the bursts depend on the amount of chakra used for it, finally it has a second level were the red of the eye turn black and lets the wielder use Amaterasu, this level can be obtained when something or someone truly precious to the user either is taken or is about to be taken from him or her.
Ideas on which girl/s should be the mother/s of the children with this doujutsu: Kurotsuchi, Hokuto, Mei, Karui.
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Powerful, doujutsu naruto, NaruHarem… BIG harem.
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CHALLENGE: SILVER CLOCK.
''Honestly you morons just don't give up do you?'' the yellow haired person rhetorically asked the four kumo shinobi who were trying to sneak away from Konoha after they exited the Hyuga clan home with the younger daughter of the clan head in a bag.
''I mean why are you so obsessed with the byakkugan? Sure it is useful and all that but even if you managed to steal it there would be a good chance of starting the next great war as a result, causing hundreds of lives to be lost during which little Hanabi would most likely either be retrieved or killed before she was old enough to have kids making the whole thing be for nothing on kumo's part'' the blond said as a weapon suddenly appeared in his hand.
The kumo-nins said nothing and pulled out their own weapons and watched the blond ready to strike.
The blond was of average height for his age, had golden yellow blond hair that went down to his shoulders, wore gray pants and white shirt but what stood out the most were his eyes and weapon.
His eyes had silver irises and the whites were blue (think Aizen's eyes shortly before Gin betrayed him but the purple is replaced with blue) and his weapon was a silver dagger that had been polished to the point that it was like a mirror.
The leader of the group was about to attack but before he even managed to twitch a muscle the blond who we all know is Naruto shoot forward with such speed only a trail of light from his dagger reflecting the moonlight was seen, as Naruto reappeared in the middle of the group the head of the leader fell off.
The remaining three tried to jump away but only the one holding the bag managed to do so as the other two froze in place as four flashes of silvery and whitish blue light flashed around them and Naruto after which they literally fell to pieces.
The last kumo-nin pulled the unconscious Hanabi from the bag and held a kunai near her throat.
Naruto simply let out a sight and gave the man a look that said 'you are an idiot' before turning around and walked off… with Hanabi under his arm, the kumo-nin stood there frozen in shock at what he was seeing before snapping out of it and took a step forward… and died as he split vertically in two.
Naruto after dropping Hanabi off and getting a thank you kiss from Hinata who then fainted went home to rest.
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In this story Naruto will have time manipulating abilities as a result of Minato using space-time jutsu so much that his body started to slightly adapt to it and then passing that on to Naruto who had that part evolved due to Kyuubi's chakra.
Naruto will have enhanced senses and reflexes as well as a healing factor and strong immune system from just being Kyuubi's host but he will also have his own time abilities and they are:
Eyes of Future, Past and Present: With one eye Naruto can see five seconds into the future while still being able to see the present, with the other eye he can see the past of objects to see who has had them from the point when they were made to when Naruto used this ability on them.
Broken Hourglass: Slows down time, can even slow it down to a complete stop, will drain chakra during that time, the slower time has been made the more chakra it will cost also the slower time is the harder it is for the user to breathe due to the air being stopped as well.
Reversal: Manipulates the time of an injury reversing its time to before it existed erasing it, this can be done both to himself and to others. (Can't bring back the dead since even if the body is fixed there is no soul). This ability automatically affects Naruto aging when he stops or slows time so he won't grow older when using them.
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Watch Hellsing OVA and look how Luke Valentine moves and fights to get a good idea of how Naruto looks when he fights also the dagger that Naruto has looks like the one Luke uses.
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Powerful Naruto, NaruHina or NaruHinaHarem.
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