I did get one comment on Percy being OOC and that is to be expect. Annabeth may become OOC later as well. But, the only reason is because i have written a complete 227 page book that creates Percy's half-sister from her point of view and I am used to her point of view and how she sees people. Thanks to all the people who comment i got some great critisism.

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Percy came out of the bathroom hallway minutes later trying to sort through his thoughts. I circled in an out between my campers giving pointers. I even help Randy a bit, but I think that was more of a jealousy angle I was trying to work. It worked. Randy got a stern look from Percy and then a hand motion that said "You, me, sparring, now." Randy got quite a tough match there.

Jason walked up to me keeping a close eye on the sparring match that already had Randy sweating bullets. I watched as Randy tried to fight back, but Percy practically had him on his knees. I couldn't help but notice the way his muscles glinted in the sun covered in a tiny layer of sweat. Perfection.

The fierce look in his eye scared me, but I had seen it before. I wanted him to wrap his arms around me and pull me into a long loving kiss. Jason elbowed me "accidently" as he came back for a stab. "Ouch" I muttered not really noticing.

Randy stumbled away from the sparring match over to the water cooler. The others took that as break time and stopped their matches. Percy walked over to the cooler and got a cup of water from Julia. He drank about half and then poured the rest on top of his head.

I watched as he straightened up and sat down on a bench a bit away from the thirsty group. He gave me one of those looks that said, "Who can last longer?"

"I will" I mouthed to him.

He made kissy faces at me and I felt like I should have walked over and stabbed him in the head with my dagger with an attempt to deflate that huge head of his. Stupid hero boys think they're all that. To bad this one was.

He was nice in a way that makes you want to be right there in the glow of his smile. He was deep; even though I gave him a lot of bull, he truly was someone you could go to for help. He was wise in his own special air-headed way. He was handsome that was for sure. Ever since we had started going out the gym had turned into his favorite weekend spot other then sneaking into my dormitory. My roommates thought it was so dangerous. As seniors in high school this coming school year it would be fun. My mom knew; if she approved was one of those questions you are glad aren't answered.

Our sword lesson, if that's what you want to call it ended with me disarming Jason and sending his sword up to the second row of the stadium seats. We filed out in our cabins and Percy tried to stop me on the way out so we could talk privately, but I ignored him.

Hey, I wasn't trying to be evil, but with him you had to come up with different things to get what you wanted since you couldn't just slit his throat. His cabin struggled to catch up with him as he stayed right on the flanks of my cabin.

"Annabeth, come on lets talk about this." He shouted over my brothers and sisters reaching me.

"I only want to talk about one thing Perseus Jackson." I said it as if there was no relationship except for business partners. It's harder then it sounds.

"Very well Annabeth Chase. But, I am not coming to you wise girl you have to come to me." His voice faded out a bit as he stopped and waited for me to realize he was being serious.

But, as soon as he had called me wise girl I had stopped in my tracks. My cabin split around me walking back into their cabin. Randy and little Julia headed back toward the Poseidon cabin. Julia was skipping; Randy was limping.

I was spun around by rough callused swordsman hands. His hands clamped down on my upper arm as he stared at me trying to see if I were being serious. I could tell he was really trying because he got that little crinkles between his brows that always made me giggle.

I smile fought at the edge of my lips, but I kept it back.

"Come one Annie." There it was; that sweet little nickname he only used when he was either really sorry, or trying to get his way. Predictable little Percy.

"No, I told you the deal. No information no affection." I said curtly.

"Please, Annie, I just don't want to hurt you."

"Hurt me?" I rolled my eyes and released my arms from his grasp. "The only thing hurting me is you keeping secrets from me."

"This will hurt worse I promise." He said hanging his head a bit.

"Percy," I said lifting his head with my index finger to look me in the eyes. "know that I love you," There I said it. "but this can't work if you won't trust me to know things like this."

"Ok," he said removing my hand from under his chin and twining his fingers between mine like perfect puzzle pieces. "my father wanted me to take the place of his son."

"We got to that part." My eyes said move on; what's next.

"He wants me to take place of his son who was killed in war."

"There were no sons of Poseidon killed in the war. Believe me I would know." I said looking at him again.

"No Annabeth." His voice was stern for split second and then softened again, "He had a son down at his castle with him, the heir to his throne." I still didn't quite understand. I probably looked like an idiot. "Annabeth," he grabbed my face between his hands holding it there. "he wants me to beimmortal. He wants me to go live with him."

"Oh" is all could get out. I wasn't sure what to say.

He just looked at my eyes trying to read me, but I wasn't one for being like an open book, especially, when I was having a bad day. "Annabeth?" he asked. Just staring.

"I need to, uh, get ready for today's brunch." I turned away not sure what to say after he dropped his hands from my face.

Jason had everyone going for me as I grabbed my pillow and stared at the wall. I bet no one had ever noticed that there were pictures in the grains of the ceiling. Jason came up and sat down next to me as if it didn't need to be explained it was just pain.

Now no one knows because we kept it between us, but Jason and I are full brother and sister twins. But, we got separated when I ran away. He came later just before the war. Lucky him, right?

He opened his arms as an open invitation. I buried my face in his chest and just started to cry. He rubbed my back tenderly as I ruined his shirt. I hoped I had put on waterproof eyeliner.

"He is going to leave me… just like everyone else in my life. Except for you Jason." I sobbed into his collar.

Footsteps trampled up the stairs until they were at the top stopping in their tracks at the sight of me crying. "Annabeth?" Lexi. "You, uh, have a visitor down stairs."

Jason said automatically, "Don't you see Lexi, she isn't in the…"

"No, I'm fine." I said whipping the tears from under my eyes.

"Ok" Lexi said skipping back down the stairs. The silly perky new comer all ways happy until reality hits.

Larger deliberate foot steps made their way up the stairs. Jason stood and it made me think the visitor was important. I looked up and there he was. It was the Seaweed Brain himself. But he was different. He had a on a collared shirt and a jacket. No, not his ratty nasty black one, but I nice navy blue sports jacket. It was one that you would use for special occasions.

"I was thinking. Its time you met the parents." He said as if we were engaged. "My mom is having a nice dinner party and I got a new car waiting on the curb. Do you want to come?" he wondered holding up a garment bag. "Don't worry, my mom picked it out."

I giggled a bit, but I got up and took the garment back and my makeup bag to the bathroom. "How long have you been planning this?" I shouted out to him.

"Uh, since camp started actually, I hadn't gotten the news yet." He bellowed back.

I mumbled another intelligent sounding, "Oh" quietly to myself. The dress was a beautiful pink dress. It cut just above the knee and had a nicely cut waist. It fit perfectly. How did he know?

"Aphrodite helped with the dress some too." Percy bellowed once more. It made more sense then.

I made my eye shadow a bit darker and fixed some smeared eyeliner. I looked pretty good for a girl who had been crying five minutes ago. I twirled each curl a bit to make it a bit deeper of a curl and then decided it was time to step out.

"You look… wow" He stuttered.

"That's real intelligent and deep there Seaweed Brain."

"Sorry, my brain isn't… wow."

"So, Percy why are we leaving so early for a dinner party?" I wondered.

"Well," he said still staring at me in my new dress. "my mom wants us to get there early so we can all visit with her and Paul. And, well, my mom decided to move on me. It's a house warming party with like four other people."

"Great" I said still recovering from the crying.

"We can go out if you want." He said suddenly aware of my halfhearted excitement.

"No, no, but, you said the parents. Is your father going to be there?"

"Yes, he is going to be their. I got an Iris message from him this morning." He said realizing the problem.

"It's all good." I said. "Let's just go."

He led me out of the cabin's back door and through the trees. I realized too late that I was barefoot as we ran through the trees toward the boundaries. The border came near and there was a group of harpies circled around the car. Percy continued to approach it. I slowed down knowing that harpies would have no problem with breaking our necks and then eating us.

"Thanks ladies" Percy said politely and then dropped a couple of golden drachmas into the leader's hand. They scattered into the woods almost instantly as I got closer.

The car was nice. A luxury car no doubt. A racing blue covered the body of a Toyota FT-HS Hybrid. Ok, so I know a little bit about cars. I did my time with the mechanics of designing considering that was Jason's favorite studies. This car was in his top five. I hopped into the passenger side and sat down a bit more relax then before. There were a pair of silver heels on the floor board where me feet were and I slipped them on.

"Aphrodite picked those out. My mom and Aphrodite think I am in capable of the dress to shoe ratio. I think that's what they call it." He said sliding into the driver's seat.

The engine roared to life and I jumped a little. A chuckle hidden by a cough came from Percy and he got a punch in the arm. He pulled off the curb and I saw Chiron canter up to the boundaries as we vanished from out of sight. Chiron ran next to us until the woods ended and he had to go back.

Percy's hand reached across the center console and pulled my hand from my side. I let him pull my hand into his, but I didn't say anything. His hand that was on the steering wheel was very precise as we wined our way out of the state.

"Ok, now it's your turn. Please talk" Percy begged as we drove past the state line of Pennsylvania.

"How long is the drive?" I wondered not really caring. Truth be told, it was nice to get away from camp.

"Eight hours, with my driving style I cut half an hour off." He said as if it was one of those questions that meant something.

I slipped the heels off my feet and pulled my legs up to my body. I tilted my head downward and pretend I was really interested in my dresses hem line. The road ahead was long and boring, and so far it seemed as if the silence would make it that much longer.

"Hey mom," I heard Percy say. I hadn't even realized his phone had ringed when I looked up. He had a nice looking phone pressed to his ear talking. It was then I also realized that he had let go of my hand. I was losing it. "No, we are on our way right now. We left at ten…. Yeah, we will get there about six… No, I'm not driving recklessly… Of course she is with me… He what?" A worried tone filled his voice as he asked as if the person that was referred to as he was going to get it. "No, I'm still coming… I miss you too… Yea, love you too, bye." He clicked the phone off and placed it back in his pocket.

"What was that?" I asked worried considering his knuckles were turning white from his tight grip on the wheel.

"Nothing" he said curtly.

"Oh come on Percy" I said reaching over to touch his arm.

He looked over at me and then seemed to relax a little. "My dad paid my mom a visit. She knows everything." I knew what it meant immediately and sunk back into my chair. "Please, don't do this to me now. I need your help getting through this."

"Ok" I said taking hold of his hand again.

His hands were in a cold sweat. I put my other hand on top of his and leaned my head on top of his shoulder. He turned my way a bit and kissed the top of my head. He hit the accelerator a little and we took off escaping a lady that was riding our bumper.

"You know I still haven't gotten a good kiss from you all day." He complained while zooming in and out of traffic.

"That's your fault. All you had to do was tell me yesterday." I pointed out.

"You wouldn't let me finish yesterday!" He said with an appalled tone. I blushed a little and hoped he wouldn't see, but of course he did. "Saw that, cars have rearview mirrors remember."

"You are supposed to position those so you can see the cars behind you!" I said trying to get the attention away from me.

"I have two other mirrors. Plus, I got distracted trying to fix the last one."

Blush

He chuckled a bit to himself. I reached up and turned the rearview mirror so that I could see his eyes. He had lines right next to his eyes which meant he was smiling. The car slowed a bit as he realized why I had moved the rearview mirror and he moved it back to facing me.

"Why?" I wondered pleadingly.

"Hey, you can see me while I'm driving. I can't see you. The mirror is all I've got."

Blush

"I love when your cheeks turn pink. It reminds me oh those flowers I gave you on Valentine's Day."

"The pink roses or your two lips?" I wondered. That had been a good Valentine's Day.

"The roses" he assured me.

I kind of nodded, but I was beginning to doze off.

"Take a nap. Time will pass faster if you do." He said taking his hand away from mine and wrapping it around me. I used his side as a pillow and his arm was my blanket. I eventually dozed off completely at comfort.


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