me: here is the first chapter of it and the disclaimer is still the same as any other
"tori would you be quiet" blaze told his best mate tori even though she was a girl they were inseprable
"no i wont just because i got jak2 before you doesnt mean you can tell me to be quiet" tori retorted
if you listened really carefully you could hear roller blades going really fast coming blaze's and tori's way
"hey blaze" tori asked
"yeah whats up"
"do you hear that"
"yeah i do...you dont think"
"yeah i think it is"
tori turned round and started running with blaze right behind her
"tori dont look back just run" blaze told her
"what do you think im doing" tori yelled
"BLAZE TORI WAIT UP WILL YOU!" a 14 year old girl who goes by the name of hannah with wild red hair wearing a boy t-shirt and combat trousers with matching boots ran up to them...more like skated into them and knocked them over "oops sorry about that" hannah apologised
"whatever lets go to my house and play jak2" blaze told tori and hannah as he ran off
"oi wait up will you" tori yelled as she sprinted after blaze with hannha right behind her
me: well here is the first proper chapter review and tell me how you would like them to be sucked into the jak world anyway seeya