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When I woke up it was pouring rain and no one was home. i didn't feel like making anything so I grabbed some cookies and that how I got here on the couch watching spongebob.

Jacob came threw the door while pushing dad and sat down next to me. Dad turned off the tv and looked at me.

" Why are you guys looking at me like that ? "

Dad took a deep breath and said " Honey did you meet anyone new yesterday "

" Yeah... I met this dude named paul but he was really mean and yelled at me when I ran into him "

" And what did you do back " Jacob asked in a voice I never heard from him use before.

" I yelled back "

" What else " they both said together and they were starting to freak me out.

" I walked away" I said while looking at them like they had two heads.

They looked at each other and then looked at me with the same face Paul had when I walked away from him. Then dad started talking " I think that you should go see him and see what he has to say "

" Dad I don't even know him "

" Well I do and he's hurt that you ran away like that '' Jake said

" He yelled at me first "

" He just wants to say sorry for that "

" fine I'll go " I wasn't going to say this out loud but my heart stung ever since I yelled at Paul so I think that dick gave me hurt burn from yelling at him.

" He's at the beach "

And that is how I found myself on the beach. I couldn't find paul anywhere so I just sat down and watched the waves. I saw some surfers about to get in the water in wetsuits and I wished I was them. I've always loved surfing.

I felt as a warm body sat next to me I didn't need to look up to know it was Paul. It's just one of those things you just know because the burn in my chest wasn't there anymore.

I looked at him after about 30 minuets. He was already watching me. I looked into his almost black eyes and I looked at him high cheek bones sharp jaw and a killer smirk.

" Like what you see " he said while laughing

" Not as much as those surfers "

For some reason he started shaking and growling. Like what is this dude some weird freak that's gonna eat me. Why did dad and Jacob make me do this.

" Are you okay? Why are you shaking like that ? "

" I'm fine don't worry about it. I just came to say I'm sorry for the way I acted yesterday. It was uncalled for And I would really like to make it up to you by taking you out to dinner or lunch? "

" Did you just ask me out "

" If that's what you want it to be "

" Okay that was the worse sorry I have ever heard and no I don't want to go out with you you're like my bothers age and I'm 21 I could go to jail for that " I said walking away

" You can't if we don't do anything. And we won't well not if you don't want to."

" I can't ever deal with you now "

" please just think about it " Paul said and he looked so desperate and sad .

" Okay I'll think about it. Give me your number "

I gave him my phone and typed some stuff on it and gave it back. " Here I texted my cell to so I'll have yours if you get to shy to call me but don't worry the spirits put us together for a reason so I don't think you'll be shy at all " He said. What the hell did he mean spirits put us to get her for a reason.

We talked for a while after just getting to know each other. I heard another howl in the woods and he said he had to go to work. I drove back home and I swear that I saw a sliver horse running beside my car in the woods but who knows.

When I got home it was almost dark so I got in the shower, said goodnight to dad I was going to say goodnight to Jake but I couldn't find him I'll have to ask where he was in the morning. I crawled into bed and fell asleep.

well that was the end of chapter 2 so review