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Normal P.O.V.
"Ok here's your stop Sakura." Hinata said as she put the car in park. Sakura jumped out and motioned for Tenten to come with her. Tenten sighed and pulled her backpack out of the car before she slammed it shut. Walking up the stairs Tenten noticed that this was a higher end apartment than hers.
As Sakura opened up the door she said, "My room is down that hall, so just drop your things on the bed or something…" Tenten nodded and looked at all the nice things, and how clean it looked. It was nothing like her apartment.
Reaching Sakura's room Tenten saw a bunch of pictures of many different people. "Hey did you get lost?" Sakura yelled from the doorway.
"Nope just looking at all of your stuff." Tenten said meeting her at the door. "It's a nice place."
"Thanks, mostly my parents live in the apartment above their business…" Sakura said. "So I usually have the place to myself most of the time."
"Oh." Tenten said and walked out of the apartment and to the car. As she opened the car door she heard Neji say, "I like her a bit." And froze, and then grinned.
"So who do you like?" she asked, sliding into the car. Neji looked at her and gave a "Hn". "Nobody you know."
"Ah." Her face fell as she put her seatbelt on. If only I knew her, I would hook them up! Somebody needs to melt his icy-ass. She thought. Hinata looked back at the slightly hurt face and smiled.
"Next stop, shopping district." Hinata said and shifted the car into drive.
Inserting spiffy time forwarding…
With a black fabric with sliver shurikens on it for the skirt in one bag, Tenten Hinata, Ino and Sakura walked into a store that obviously was mainly for Kimono's. Neji stayed outside, people watching.
The different kimonos were on mannequins that lined the store. There was a catalog that was in between each dress that had even more dresses in them. But there was one dress that stopped Tenten in her tracks. (Even though I said kimono, it's going to be a regular dress, because the kimono have other stuff that you have to have with it and such. But for those who do know how it should look like, there will be similarities…I guess...)
It was a bit of a formfitting dress. Dark blue was the background color, but it was the design that made her stop and stare. It was two dragons that started at the bottom of the dress and criss-crossed their way from the front to the back and to the front again, ending onto the long sleeves. The dragons were a light milky white purple color.
"I FOUND IT!!" Tenten yelled and the girls came running. All of them stared at it.
"It's so pretty." Ino and Sakura said at the same time.
"The white is like my eyes." Compared Hinata. Tenten put a hand on her shoulder and turned her around, also making her be next to the dress. A few seconds later a sales lady with long purple hair came up to the group.
"Can I help you girls?" She asked. They all nodded. Tenten pointed at the dress.
"You can tell me that's in my size."
"If it's not, your out of luck. That's the last one we have." Said the lady, who's nametag read, "Luna." (YAY IM IN MY STORY!!)
"The last one?" Sakura said.
"The very last." Luna said and took out a keychain. Motioning for them to move aside she inserted a key into a lock and twisted. Red lines flashed and Luna climbed up onto the display. Carefully she took off the dress and got off the platform. "This way." She turned and led them to the changing rooms. Taking out another key she opened up a room and gave the dress to Tenten.
"May I ask why it was protected by lasers?" inquired Ino.
"It's the last because it is the original." Luna said like "Of course the sky is blue".
"What?" asked the three girls. Tenten opened up the door with wide eyes.
"It…fits…" She said slowly. Luna came over and tugged at it and fussed.
"Well I'll be damned. Its perfect." Luna said as she put her hands on her hips. "You're one lucky girl. Many girls have come and it didn't fit right. But it fits on you." She shook her head and muttered, "I'll be damned."
Tenten looked at herself in the mirror again, turning this way and that to see it.
"We are not looking anymore." Said Sakura.
"It fits your personality too. Fiery and beautiful." Complemented Ino
"It fits only you so far. Its too perfect to pass up." Hinata said. "And don't worry about the price. Its my treat."
"Ok...Thanks Hinata." Tenten said and went back into the dressing room to change back into regular clothes. Luna came over with the price tag, which made Sakura and Ino's jaw drop. Hinata shrugged and signed it.
"Did you even look at the price?" Sakura asked.
"Yes. I have a lot left over, so don't worry." Hinata said as Tenten got out of the room with the dress over her arm. Luna came over and held her arms out her Tenten to give her the dress so that she could put it in a box for her.
"Have a nice day." Luna said while the girls left the store. Neji got up from leaning against the window and faced them.
"You only got one thing?" Neji said, looking at the bag.
"Yea it's so pretty! It has-" Tenten was cut short by Sakura's hand.
"This is a MASQURADE! You don't just go around randomly telling what you're going to be wearing to guys! Then they would know that its you!" Sakura scolded.
"Meh…true." Tenten said and put the smaller bag with her fabric into the one with the dress. (I don't feel like going from shop to shop for all of them…so I'm going to go to when they get back to Sakura's house.)
At the end of the shopping trip Tenten seemed to have all of her outfit, except for the mask. She had ballet slipper shoes the same blue as her dress, an appointment for her nails and hair (Sakura and Ino forced her into that one) a white handbag with a barely visible silver dragon on it.
"All I need is a mask." Tenten said, as she looked at all her things. (The other girls go their stuff too but I don't want to reveal it just yet)
"Well, we can go look again after school tomorrow." Sakura said from the couch.
"Its not like we went and looked in every store that we could have." Ino said, sipping her soda in the chair to Tenten's right.
Signing Tenten got up, gathered up her things and put them in Sakura's room. She came out and Hinata clicked off the phone.
"Pizza should be here in about 40 minutes." She informed them and sat down on the couch next to Sakura. All three of them nodded and Tenten found a seat on the chair armrest that Ino was sitting in.
All of them stayed quiet until Sakura burst out with. "Let's play truth or dare!"
"You start then." Ino said.
"Um…Tenten, truth or dare?"
"Yea pick on the new girl…Truth." Tenten teased while folding her arms.
"Whose Hotter, Sasuke or Neji?" Sakura asked with a grin. All eyes turned to Tenten.
"I'd take stoic over emo any day shit…Ino truth or dare?" Tenten said without hesitation and turned to Ino.
"Umm…Dare!" She yelled.
"When the pizza comes, dare you to kiss the person who brings it, ON THE LIPS." Tenten tapped her finger to get the point across.
"What if it's a girl?" She asked.
"You got to do it anyway." Tenten grinned evilly while Sakura clapped. Ino fumed and looked at Hinata, who gulped.
"Truth or dare Hinata." Ino said.
"Truth."
"Most embarrassing moment."
"Well…it would have to be when Naruto-kun caught me during my training." They all stared at her and she blushed, fiddling with her fingers. "Thing is though, I was naked."
Then they all started to laugh. "BUT! It was dark so he couldn't see that it was me. But he talked about her during the mission."
Sakura snapped her fingers and said, "Damn I want to tell him that it was you."
"NO!" yelled the usually quiet Hinata. They all stared at her. "I want to tell him myself." They all nodded and the doorbell rang.
The three girls started to laugh while Ino went and answered the door. She opened the door to a model hot guy (just think of a super hot guy).
"Hey, umm…. you're total is 26 dollars." He said in a super geeky voice (Now think if the geekest guy in your school voice, then put it in the hot boys mouth. Freaky right?) Ino almost gagged, took the pizza, gave him the money and tip. Then grabbed his shirt and gave him a kiss on the lips for a few seconds, then pushed him away then slammed the door.
"DON'T YOU EVER TELL ANYBODY ABOUT THAT!!!" she yelled through the door while the other three girls almost died with laughter.
3 scary movies later Hinata left to go back to the Hyuuga compound, without making sure that she had a few kunais on her. The other 3 girls circled up and talked for a while until they all fell asleep, one by one.
Tenten woke up in the middle of the night and went to the window and gazed out onto the full moon. I wish I could see this with my family again. Or be with Glare...still dont know who that bastard is. She sat down on a chair that was close to the window and fell asleep in the chair.
Authors note;
hopefully that isn't to short for you guys. And I want to know if
you can picture the dress well, I tried really hard to get the
picture out of my head and into this fic…well, flame me, complement
me, its still a review….and do you like how this is set up? 2 chapters one day? its beacuse i like alot of detail and i dont think many people like to read 10 page one chapter fanfictions...well, until next time! oh...and did you guys guess who SilentWhiteGlare is? lol...although you all might know already...