Hey guys! so this is an edited version of the story.
Loneliness, Neglect, Hate and Vulnerable
Naruto Uzumaki Namikaze...no just Naruto, Naruto though was young felt all these feelings and he hated it, he had never given up even though he was glared at and chased even beaten a few times during the times when he was walking around the streets of Konoha.
Now you may be asking where is his family and why are they not helping him then?
Well...though a family is supposed to care and love for their child and protect them from dangers, his family had done the exact opposite to him. While they were loving and caring towards his sisters, he was ignored, brushed off like a pest when he was the oldest of his siblings.
Naruto had hair that was a brilliant shade of gold, as if it had been kissed by the sun itself, with red and black streaks running through it that have it at a almost fiery appearance, on both cheeks were three whisker marks adorned on the lightly tanned skin on his face he also had sky blue eyes not unlike his father, while Narumi and Tatsumi, his sisters, both had crimson red hair, but the difference was that Narumi also had sky blue eyes while Tatsumi had violet eyes was the youngest by being born a years later. Naruto was only born a few minutes earlier than Narumi who was eleven though Tatsumi was only five, their parents were none other than Kushina Uzumaki and Minato Namikaze
Minato Namikaze earned his Moniker 'The Yellow Flash' due to his famous technique, the Hiraishin no jutsu/Flying thunder god technique, which managed to end the third shinobi war, he was also known as the 'Yondaime hokage'. Kushina Uzumaki was however dubbed the 'Red Hot Habanero' by her peers, though on the battlefield she was known as the 'Red Death' and was known by her fearsome prowess in Kenjutsu, Fuinjutsu and, one of her trademark abilities, the ability to form chains using her chakra that could even restrain a creature as mighty as a Bijuu.
Now why would a child of two of the strongest shinobi be treated as such? The reason was simple it being that his sister Narumi held the power of the Kyuubi while Tatsumi was able to form the famous Chakra chains, as such he who was without either of this powers and was deemed weak was left to be the third-wheel of the family.
During the birth of Naruto and Narumi, the Kyuubi no Kitsune had apparently attacked 'Official' version of the story was that the 'Yondaime hokage' summoned the Shinigami to seal the Kyuubi's power into Narumi while the soul was sealed into Naruto, and because he was the 'Child of prophecy' the Shinigami left him alive. Due to that version of the story, Naruto was soon known as the 'Kyuubi Brat' while Narumi was the 'Hero' that saved them.
However the Unofficial and True version of the story was that instead of the Shinigami leaving him alive, Minato switched with a Kage Bunshin which contained a quarter of his Soul and thus deceived the Shinigami under a loophole which was the fact that she would only take a soul in exchange for the summoning, however it was never specified how much of a soul had to be taken. Therefore deceiving the Shinigami into leaving him alive. This version was gotten from the Kyuubi after a certain incident...
(Flashback)[7 years old Naruto]
Naruto was determined, he wanted his parents to care for him for once and the only way it was possible was to show them something that would surprise them, so he looked through the library in his father's office and found a scroll for the Shunshin no jutsu/Body flicker technique he immediately set out to learn it, he had already unlocked his Chakra during a moment of panic during one of his beatings from the village and though he had not much control over it, he had large amounts of it so he believed it would be fine.
According the scroll, the Shunshin no jutsu/Body flicker technique is accomplished by using Chakra to temporarily vitalize his body and move at extreme speeds, the amount of Chakra used is based on the distance so as long as he doesn't go too far it should be alright.
He had been spent 3 hours trying to learn the Jutsu and was finally able to move a few meters from his location, he immediately went to find his parents who was in the living room enjoying their day off, he went up to them and told them,''Hey Mom! Dad! can I show you something real quick?''
Both Kushina and Minato decided to for once allow him to show them what he wanted to since they had the day off and had nothing on for the moment, both of them nodded and waited for him to show them. However what they didn't expect was for Naruto to charge up his Chakra which they didn't know he had and used the Shunshin no jutsu of all things!
Naruto was happy he had showed his parents the Jutsu now they should at least praise him for it right? However to his shock and slight anger, Kushina had went right up to him and rear her hand back and slapped him, she looked to be angry but why? before he could think on it further her next sentence had explained it,'' HOW DARE YOU STEAL A JUTSU FROM US, WE HAD GIVEN YOU EVERYTHING YET YOU DARED TO STEAL FROM US?''
His father had a similar reaction,'' YOUR SISTERS SHOULD HAVE LEARNT IT BEFORE YOU, AFTER ALL YOU ARE BUT A WEAK CHILD, ONE WHO HAS NO POWER YOU DO NOT DESERVE IT UNLIKE YOUR SISTERS WHO WOULD BRING KONOHA TO THE TOP! NOW GO TO YOUR ROOM!''
Naruto however was furious,contrary to their words he never had anything, the only thing was a couple of clothes and that is all he ever gotten from them yet they had the audacity to say they had given him everything? it was simply unfair how his parents had treated him! He gave them both a glare that slightly shocked Kushina, while Minato simply ignored it. He then went to his room slamming the door close hard. He slowly started to cry unable to take the exhaustion and abuse of the day, he cried himself to sleep that night.
Little did he know that he was about to have a life-changing event.
Drip...
Drip...
Drip...
Naruto slowly opened his eyes to find himself in a...sewer? It was possible that those villagers had thrown him into a sewer,but how? he remembered himself being in his room at his house after all, however upon a closer look, he found that he was not only standing on water which he had not learn yet, though the place did seem to emit a familiar feeling, he then found himself walking towards a location that was seemingly unknown to him.
Eventually he reached a set bars that looks exactly like a cage except it was extremely large and had a 'Seal' on the gate, then suddenly a large red eyes opened and stared at him for a moment before speaking...
''Hmm it seems my jailor has decided to pay me a visit'',the being said before snarling at him and walking forward showing itself to be the Kyuubi no Kitsune.
''...you..are..the Kyuubi?...'' questioned Naruto
''Of course ningen, I am the great Queen of Makai! The Kyuubi no kitsune!'' the Kyuubi said with a demonic voice while her tails swung wildly behind her in an intimidating manner
''So you really were sealed in me...though when you're in a cage like this i don't know how to see you as a Queen...'' the boy said in a somewhat mocking tone
''Of course I was sealed, why else would I be in a sewer like this!? Now, Tell me why exactly are you here? Have you come to steal my power and knowledge like all those before you had tried..hmm? Tell me!'' the Kyuubi seemingly ignore the comment and went on to question the boy with a somewhat angered look on the fox's face
''Well...First where is this place? Why did you attack Konoha in the first place though it is not like I mind though'' Naruto muttered the last bit in a soft tone.
However the fox with her acute hearing managed to hear it and was slightly confused since she had just recently woke up and was unable to know anything about her new container, the fox questioned curiously,''You are currently in your Mindscape, a place where both our souls are able to connect, and the reason i attacked Konoha? well who knows, it could be the fact that the place is annoying? or maybe its because I was freaking forced to attack it due to the hostile intent I felt while in a state of panic? Tch. Though why would you even want to destroy a place who most likely treated you like royalty due to me being sealed.''
''Well...thanks for answering the question I guess, as for your question...well why don't you look at my memories first?'' the boy stated
''Very well''the fox said and began searching through the past memories of it's container for the years it missed, after the memories played, she was somewhat surprised though inwardly she was slightly amused at the sight of humans attempting to hurt the container to get to her...it only furthered her belief that humans was utter fools.
''Hmm I suppose you did have a somewhat bad life though it doesn't really bother me that much,(well...I could try and manipulate him though its unlikely to work due to the life he already had and most likely is just going to get me chained again...I guess I could make a deal to ensure my survival at least, the Shinigami's seal might actually kill me if he dies..tch)hmm...would you be interested in making a deal?''
''What kind of deal are we talking about here?...'' Naruto asked skeptically
''Don't worry too much, the deal is simple, since you probably won't be able to free me as you would probably die from the amount of Yoki released and if you do die from it I would probably die too according to the seal, even though I am immortal i would rather not take the chance against the Shinigami. Tear off a small part of the seal and it would grant me access to your senses which will also give you slightly better senses and create a mental link, as for my end I'll grant you a higher healing rate and improve your body each time you train as well as grant you access to one tail of MY Yoki in case of emergencies, so feel free to go wild training...and as a bonus I'll tell you this ''The Shinigami's power does much more than keeping me sealed'' Whether you can find the answer to it will depend on you, so what do you think?'' The fox offered
''I guess...it does make sense that you would try to help me since I doubt you want to die, the deal is fine! Thanks...''Naruto filed the information on the Shinigami's power for later then floated up to the seal and pulled off a small portion of it and allowed the Yoki to seep through the cage and then he felt pain like he never did before and blacked out.
A few minutes had passed before he woke up in his Mindscape after the pain he felt. ''So..I feel slightly stronger than before, I guess it worked, though I will try to find a way to free you eventually since you helped me this day.''
''Maybe you won't be as bad as other humans after all, though if we are going to have symbiotic relationship, I might as well show you my True form.'' After saying that Kyuubi started to glow and a flash of light which caused Naruto to shut his eyes in slight pain before opening them to reveal a sight which caused him to utter a quick,''Beautiful'' before blushing hard and looked away from the amazing sight.
Kyuubi was revealed to be a young woman who looked about 18 to 19 years had Orange/reddish hair that came down her mid back, flowing freely,while in the front was a Hime cut hair also had a nice tan to her skin, a button nose and nice lips that seem to be pouting naturally.
She wore a fire red kimono top with skin tight bottoms, she was also barefoot showing off her black with a tint of red toenails,She also had fox ears above her head which seemed to twitch occasionally and nine tails behind her swinging wildly, her crimson slit eyes seemed to glow as she stared into Naruto's sky blue eyes.
''Thank you for that compliment, It would be a good idea to get up now, it's already morning and I believe you had training to get to?'' giving a somewhat sadistic grin to Naruto, who upon finally realizing what she said and since it was his Mindscape, he thought of himself leaving and instantly disappeared.
(Flashback End)
It has been a few years since that day, Kyuubi and Naruto had gotten much closer, they started from a partners kind of relationship slowly to a brother and sister kind of relationship, which eventually led to them admitting to each other they had feelings for each other, though if it is love or not is still unknown as none of them had felt love before and was trying to understand it.
Kyuubi's real name was actually Naomi and she had told him it during one of their training sessions..which was where he learnt that Naomi was Really Sadistic on him, their training was mostly on using her Yoki to fight and Chakra control where he learnt from a group of genin team he found at one of the training grounds and finally Chakra manipulation which he learnt was somewhat similar to how Naomi manipulated her Yoki to cause earthquakes and tsunami with her tail though with her True/Hanyou form she could manipulate it better due to her having smaller size and can manipulate her Yoki to suit her needs more.
He had also learnt that instead of the usual Chakra chains he had Chakra threads which was actually much stronger and versatile compared to chains as it could be used to set up traps and use it without it being seen as it was impossible to see without a Doujutsu, he had already tested it out during one of his beatings, it was set as a trap at the entrance of an alley he entered, the moment a villager tried to enter it he was cut immediately but was still alive as a Hyuuga with the Byakugan activated had told them how to avoid it.
They had finally decided to leave the village this night after learning they had nothing left in the village though before doing so they had Blood clones which was gained from Kyuubi having knowledge of Mito Uzumaki-Senju and had them transformed (which was once again from Kyuubi's of a stronger Henge) into civilians to gather knowledge inside the village.
They had even copied down techniques from the forbidden sealing scroll of Konoha and also done so for both Kushina's and Minato's own techniques from their library, this would allow Naruto to further increase his skills in order to protect himself and free Kyuubi eventually.
They had to leave before being caught by ANBU Squads as even though he was strong and had Kyuubi's Yoki he was only Jounin level and low-kage level at best, even if he could beat a few ANBUs he was unable to beat a squad of them especially with their teamwork and experience.
They decided they would either travel to Kumo as Jinchuriki(which was what was called a human sacrifice which had a Bijuu sealed within them) was welcome there or perhaps recruit others in order to form their own village where they could have peace instead of being wary of danger in Konoha.
The Journey of a Jinchuriki and his Demon Queen the Kyuubi no Kitsune would start tonight!
So this is chapter two, though I wanted to show more scenes I wasn't really sure how to write it...so if I ever figured it out i would most likely add it in...Please Review so i can know the opinion on what to improve on and Favorite if you like it. Especially give opinions on people you want in the Harem, though i'm kinda bad at writing Harem stories ._. and if you want Kushina(I really like her lol) to be forgiven?