Well this is chap 1 hope it satisfies you and remembers statistically some of my chapters have to be bad when I first write them but you can tell me about spelling mistakes and plot holes so you know don't complain to yourself complain to me anyway without further adieu read and review ;^)
Punching Mist chapter one don't blame the prisoner
Or alternately the Geneva Convention.
Robins POV, Jump city, Titan Island…
It was a quiet day in jump city with no birds singing, no dogs barking and incidentally no explosions exploding and no gunshots this was quite important to Robin because as one of the local heroes he would just have to interfere if some super villain wanted to do what they liked no matter who got hurt. Or maybe today was the day the bank owner snapped and wanted to reduce the number of people who use his bank by lethal force to remove them from the local area, or even from existence or some homeless person trying to get some money the dangerous way by mugging someone (probably some smaller and weaker looking than them).
However it seemed that none of this was happening today or if it was they were being very quiet and no one had called the police (or screamed) yet. As Robin sat on the rocky beach and relaxed in the sun he heard a faint buzzing and his eyes shot open to see what the threat was he soon relaxed though as it was clearly his communicator vibrating on a nearby rock sighing at the lost day Robin flicked open his communicator and saw not a member of his team but his former mentor Batman as his brain compiled a list of reasons for Batman to have contacted him.
"Robin I need you at the watch tower, get your team and get here now" said the Dark Knight ending the communication before Robin could reply …
-Don't look at me I'm a just a linbrake-
Ravens POV, Watch tower, Space
Robin was tense to the average person there would be little to show this but to me he was an open book I am an empathy and so can tell how someone is really feeling though I try not to do so without permission but I was distracted by Beast boy being an idiot.
Suddenly Batman said from behind Beast boy "Good you're here now this will have to be quick unexpected events are causing problems" Beast boy screamed and fainted Batman continued without looking at him" You're going to search a government facility owned by a semi-independent organisation called the GIW they have been accused of inhumane practices and won't let anyone inside the facility."
"Why are we needed isn't this a matter for the FBI or CIA" I said now my heart had started beating again. Robin answered me "They are mostly considered crackpots since their job is to protect the world from ghosts but they have developed energy weapons way ahead of most scientists."
As I watched the two discussing week points I wondered what had caused the dynamic duo to split after all robin had not told us a lot about it simply saying "I don't want to talk about it" most of the time he was asked.
-Don't look at me I'm a just a linbrake-
Robin's POV, Outside the GIW HQ Nevada desert…
"…So that is the plan any questions" at this beast boy raised his hand and shouted "Are you nuts why would they even fall for that we'd need Batman or Superman to go in with us just to have a chance" Raven rolled her eyes and Cyborg looked like he wanted to kill beast boy for wasting time, after all his job wasn't hard all he had to d was distract the guards but he was worried about them thinking he was a ghost and kidnapping him so he had been trying to get a different part for the last fifteen minutes. "Look I know this is not easy but please just do it" I said for the seventh time.
Ten minutes later we had climbed into the air ducts while beast boy calmly (as nervous as hell) talked to the guards at the front door and dropped into the security room and stopped the automated alarm counter (with five seconds to go) before the whole base rushed to the top floor and ask them what they were doing. Just before we left Cyborg infected their computers and cameras with a virus that would stop them from seeing or hearing us and rushed to the elevator shaft without anyone seeing us just as beast boy who had left the guards (who were arguing about whether he was a ghost or not) ran meet us whispering "never ask me to do that again before stopping and pulling glowing green gunk out of his hair.
"Wow grass stain your radioactive now" Cyborg joked, beast boy muttered something that rhymed with glass bowl before climbing into the shaft with us and closing the climbed, flew and zip lined down the shaft until we reached the door for floor thirteen where the experiments and prisoners were meant to be and waited as Cy hacked the security cameras and put them on a loop when no one was walking about and then disabling the intercom's and elevator buttons before sneaking into the corridor and knocking out he guards.
Raven then walked to a window for the room to the right of the elevator and gasping then silently motioning for the team to come see what she had saw which was …
WARNING THE FOLLOWING SIGHT's WAS TOO HORRIBLE TO DISCUSS! WHAT YOU WANT TO HEAR THEM! WELL TUFF I'M RUBBISH AT WRITING SCARY THINGS SO JUST USE YOUR OWN IMAGINATION.
-Don't look at me I'm a just a linbrake-
Cyborg's POV, GIW HQ, Nevada desert, Twenty minutes later…
"…looked like a monkey with green fur slept with a brick wall and then their baby slept with a half decomposed cow that was their kid" (told you I could not write scary things but I never said anything about gross) "how many rooms left" said Beast boy who was looking greener than usual and had thrown up twice "Only one I replied felling just as bad "we had split up and each taken one side of the floor except Starfire who was to guard the elevators and provide help for us if needed. As we entered we saw this room was different there was no weapons' or scalpels ,no green blood or scientists who claimed to be innocent of the evils done on this floor to well perhaps not humans but beings who could still feel pain and fear but instead the was only a large steam punk machine next two computers , a thick seven foot wide by four foot tall bulletproof glass panel in the wall with a faint transparent green glow and a metal door that looked at least a foot thick walking up to the glass beast boy suddenly shouted "there's a kid in there" a quickly ran to the glass and saw that there was a person inside but not a normal one his hair was white his skin was pale and when he opened his eyes they were a glowing green like the stuff in beast boys hair then he spoke in a voice filled with so much saddens and pain I nearly cried "well have you come to torture me make me your weapon or just look at the worlds weirdest freak" before he ran up to the glass and started to smash his fists into it hard as he did this I realised two things :
One the glass was tinted so he probably couldn't see anything more than two shadows.
And two he was bleeding from many wounds on his body.
Looking closer I saw he was wearing black jeans with dozens of cuts which had green blood dripping out if them ,black boots with Dark Gray laces and soles ,a dark gray shirt with rips every where and a black Gray trench coat with no sleeves and a dark gray and black logo of the letters DP and finally metal armour on his right shoulder and metal gauntlets on his hands one dark gray and black the outer a strange colour a mix or dark green and dark gray. Told beast boy to call the others while I tried to deactivated the force field which had started to shock him and was increasing its strength every time he hit he glass rushing to finish before he killed himself as Starfire charged in , looked at the boy who was slowing down and ran to the door and to pull it open before getting shocked herself .Seconds later Raven and Robin arrived looked at Starfire who had fallen to the floor and ran to her to see if she was hurt then I was in and turned the force field off and started to work on the door s password glancing at the boy I saw he had gone to the corner and was crouched down.
-Don't look at me I'm a just a linbrake-
Phantom's POV, GIW HQ, Nevada desert
This was my chance I knew that there was only ten guards on my floor, on duty today I knew that my plan would work they would not stop me not now it was just so simple it was ether brilliant or crazy. The glass was strong ten inches thick and though it was strong I had been hitting certain points on the glass for two months they had punished me but it was done the glass now had a, visible to my enhanced vision octagon shaped weak point with chips in the corners and two small chips between each corner and a crack in the center they were going to replace it soon but they weren't rushing because of the ghost shield running along all the walls of my cell what they had not thought about was that because I was half ghost the shield had to work on humans and so turned off when the door opened the shield had to deactivate as soon as this door opened I was going to get out and …
Clunk the door slammed open but I barely looked instead I ran for the glass and jumped crashing feet first into the octagon before hitting the wall on the other side without stopping I flipped out the door to this room and ran down the corridor half way there before even the fits gasp had stopped I reached the door and saw an unconscious guard near it confused but determined I bolted to the doors of the lift and turned intangible before flying up the shaft and out the top hearing shouts behind me and turning to the front door I was nearly there when the doors slam open first behind me the in front of me speeding up turned intangible again nearly and got outside felling the sun on my face before something grabbed me …
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