Here it is First chapter Second edit and it is so much better than my first version of it Enjoy.
CHAPTER 1
'Amu POV'
The shark tackled my side dragging me further into into the deep, blue, darkness of the ocean. Adding more wounds to my beaten body, the salt burning my previous and new wounds. The pressure of the ocean and the surprise of the shark took it's toll on my breathing, I gasped, filling my lungs with salty water. I struggled to get back to the surface by trying to punch and kick the shark, but the water slowing down my hits, so much for my super human power's, I thought s I felt my conciseness slipping away. I let my body go limp. This made the shark stop thinking I was dead. He began shaking me furiously like a dog would a toy. When it all stopped confusion and fear startled my heart making it leap. Blood surrounded me, I wasn't sure whose, I felt something grab me and pull me back up. As I was just beginning to see the sky, still stormy, I felt cold numbness drag me into darkness.
'Ikuto POV'
I whipped the blue hair out of my face as we broke surface. I stuck the knife I had used to stab the shark in my knife pouch while looking for me and my friend's, Kukai, boat lucky for me it was right in front of us. I yelled for the tan haired boy to come and get us out for fear that the shark may have brought some friends. Kukai came dashing out wit the rope. I looked at the dark haired girl who laid unconscious in my grip. It could have been from the low lighting that protruded from the small lamps we had that hung outside or ship and came on when things got to dark, but where her hair met her scalp looked like it was pink, as though she died it this black. The girl was undoubtedly beautiful with milky white skin that shined, but she was very bruised and cut up. Maybe from attack, but I couldn't be sure. I snapped out my thoughts as the rope fell down. I tied it to the girls waist and held on as Kukai pulled us up. When we got there the said tan haired man was panting, "Good god, you need to lose weight." I laughed, I was already so skinny my ribs were already practically showing. "What do you want me to look anorexic?" I said while untying the girl. I put on my serious face as I got a good look at her condition, "We need to get her to a hospital A.S.A.P." Kukai nodded in agreement as I worked to get the water out of her lungs.
'Amu POV'
I opened my eye's the water was gone, as a matter of fact I was dry, the pain in my body was gone, the stormy sky and even the shark. All I could see was white and bright lights. "S-so I'm dead." I heard a chuckle from the corner. "No and that's thanks to me." I sat up and soon regretted it. I stayed sitting up, staring at the handsome boy who had spoken, his blue hair and eye's reminding me of the ocean. He held up a large silver dagger the curve out on the blade, "Killed that shark before he killed you." The strange man said. He looked about the same age as me. "W-who are you?" he gently smiled at me. "I'm Ikuto 16-years-old. I'm new here so would you mind telling me your name." I frowned. "I-i'm Amu K-kahagi 16-years old. I'm attending Yohato high. What school are you going to?" I practically squeaked. "I'm going to the same school isn't that great?" I frowned even more now.
'Ikuto POV'
This girl, Amu, sounded terrified when she spoke and never seemed to smile. She closed her mind like she was deep in thought. "Get out." I was brought back by the anger in her voice. "Why?" I asked becoming angry with her tone and confused on why she was acting like this. I saw a tear run down her face "For your own good." she mumbled loud enough for me to hear. I sighed and stood up ready to go. "Fine, the doctor said you should be fine by the end of spring break. And don't bother thanking me for saving you." I finished as I walked out the door. If it wasn't for my stunning hearing I wouldn't have known this but when I was out the door she whispered "I didn't ask you to save me, I mean hell I jumped out of a 11 story building trying to kill my self.".
'AmuPOV'
The next day was silent, except the occasional nurse giving me food and pain killers. Even the doctor came in just to warn me the next time I try to commit suicide I'll be put under lock down. Not that I expected someone else to come see me all of my family were gone after all, and I have no friends. I could almost remember my mother who left me with 1,000 dollars to survive, before leaving with that pig of a rich man when I was only 10, he said to just give 20 dollars and if I couldn't survive with that who would care, but my mother wouldn't have it, while she was leaving me just for money, she still supposedly loved me. My father had long abandoned me and my mother. Wanting an education but not wanting to go into foster care, I found a place where as long as I payed the rent I could live without an adult and so I continued my education at my elementary school. Luckily the people who took me in felt as though I was their own daughter and let me stay their for free in till I was 14 and they died in a car accident. Old enough to get a job and tall enough to look 18 I got a fake I.D., a job at Public's, and rented a room in a motel. But at school things only worsened noticing how poor my clothes were cause I needed to save my money for important things they made fun of me calling me ugly and poor, soon verbal got physical, I couldn't take it anymore I had stood up for myself, I was instantly smacked, scratched, punched, even kicked. Not knowing my strength I hit them back but my hit sent them flying. That's when they started calling me Hulk and super freak. It still goes on, but I wont let that deprive me of my education. I even quite my job an public's and got a better paying job at a exotic dancing club... where you sing... dance... and remove a few pieces of clothing.
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