Disclaimer: I don't anything within this story except Hiroku, the story plot, Rayne and Hisoka (there at the end). I will say that this story follows the Gundam Seed storyline and has direct quotes, but I added to them by bringing in an OC, so many of the episodes are word for word but then my character Hiroku comes in. So enjoy…and read and review please!
Chapter 1:
2 years later
Four boys stood at attention as they waited for their commander to confront them on what he had called them here for. Each boy had a different expression plastered on their face. One boy's face held no emotion what-so-ever. This boy had dark blue hair and emerald green eyes, his name is Athrun Zala. The next boy had a very sad expression on his child-like face. He had green hair and light brown gentle eyes, much too innocent looking for the military, his name is Nicol Amalfi. The third boy had a contemplating look on his tanned face. He had blonde hair and amethyst eyes, his name is Dearka Elsman. The last, but certainly not least boy was one with a scowl displayed on his fine featured face. This boy has strikingly fierce looking sapphire eyes and silver hair that came down to his chin. His name is Yzak Jule.
Finally their commander, Rau Le Creuset, floated into the room earning salutes from the four boys. He floated over to his desk and took a seat on his white leather chair. He turned his computer monitor on and when the screen came up, on it was displayed the profile of girl.
"I know that you boys are upset with what happened on Heliopilis. But its time to move on and finish our mission. Now I realize that no one can replace our lost comrade Rusty, but I think that his replacement will be just as good." Creuset said all along having a smirk on his masked face.
"A replacement sir?" Nicol questioned.
"Yes, she will be here any minute now." Creuset answered.
"Rusty's replacement is a GIRL!" yelled Yzak.
"Hmm…this could be very interesting." Stated Dearka with a smirk.
"Yes, now I expect you to be respectful to her. From what I have heard from the Academy, she has a temper to match if not surpass Yzak's." Creuset ordered in a firm but gentle voice.
"As if!" Yzak scowled crossing his arms.
"Sir, the new recruit has just arrived. Do you want me to send her in?" Creuset's secretary asked.
"Yes…please."
No sooner was there a knock on the door. Creuset gave the person that had knocked permission to enter. The sliding door slid open and in floated a girl of about 5'5 in height with light green eyes that occasionally flashed with gold, her hair was jet black with silver tips and spiky bangs that hung in her face, it was left down to reach her mid back. She was wearing the same uniform as the boys only with a skirt instead of pants and her jacket came to her hips. The girl immediately saluted her commander.
Ahh…this should be interesting… Creuset thought as he was about to introduce the boys to their new teammate.
"Welcome to the Versalius. I will start by introducing your teammates to you. This is Athrun Zala, Nicol Amalfi, Dearka Elsman and Yzak Jule."
The girl looked over her new teammates and contemplated exactly what she had just gotten herself into.
Great…I get to spend my time with stuck rich boys. And I'm sure the skirt I'm wearing and being in a flight suite will leave nothing but imagination in their minds…ugh!
"Now I shall introduce you boys to your new teammate. But first…Athrun since you have the quickest hand when it comes to going for your gun, after Rusty of course since no one is faster than he was, yet anyways, I want you to go over to that corner and stand with your back to us."
Athrun did as he was told but still had a puzzled look on his face. He stopped in the corner with his back to everyone in the room and waited for further orders.
"Now will you please stand right here?" Commander Creuset said to the girl.
She did as she was told and also waited for further orders.
"Now when I count to three, Athrun I want you to draw your gun and point it at her." Creuset commanded. He made certain not to mention her name yet.
"What is the Commander doing?" Yzak questioned.
"Who knows" answered Dearka.
"One…two…three."
As soon as Athrun and the girl heard three come out of the Commanders mouth they drew their guns. When Athrun turned around and pointed his gun at her, he was looking down the barrel of her gun. All the boys in the room were completely stunned at how fast she was. As Athrun was looking at the girl in front of him he saw the most puzzling sight.
She look's like the spitten image of Rusty when he points a gun at someone. Only the hair and eyes are different.
"I win" she said in slow soft voice with a smirk.
Sounds like him too…
"Wow…" Dearka whispered in awe.
"That was amazing!" Nicol stated.
"Hmph…" was all Yzak had to say. But after Yzak took a while to observe the scene in front of him he noticed the same thing that Athrun did, in how this girl looked, acted and sounded so much like their late comrade.
She looks good with a gun, don't yea think? Whatever…though I have to agree…no stop it Jule, this is not the time or place!
"Very impressive, you are just as good if not better than your brother. You have exceeded my expectations…Miss Mackenzie." Creuset said, knowing that, that would raise some questions from the boys in the room.
"Mackenzie…as in relation to Rusty Mackenzie?" Nicol asked.
"Why yes, she is Rusty's twin sister." The commander smirked.
"No way…Rusty never told us he had sister." Athrun stated.
"Cause you never asked." Stated the girl with an attitude because of the ignorance of these 'Elites' that were to be her comrades.
"So what is your name little missy?" Dearka asked in the smoothest voice he had. 'Little missy' would be dubbed her nickname.
"Hiroku Mackenzie." She didn't mind with the nickname, she had been called worse.
"Well now that the introductions are finished let us adjourn to the hanger so I can present Miss Mackenzie with a gift that your father wanted you to have." Commander Creuset said putting a hand on Hiroku's shoulder.
"My father…?" she said in a far off voice.
"Yes…well let us get moving then."They all floated down to the hanger and saw a huge machine under a blue tarp. The machine was just as big as the G weapons.
"Your father Miss Mackenzie was saving this machine for you if your brother never received it. He had a spy steal the plans for the sixth G weapon that was never made to give it to your brother, but when he came to me I had other plans with him to take one of the other five. Your father knew that sooner or later you would join the military and wanted you to have this." Creuset said. Once he was finished speaking some of the mechanics took the tarp off.
"Holy shit!" Dearka stated.
"Wow…that mobile suit is amazing!" Nicol whispered.
"…" Athrun just stared in awe.
"Ha…nothing so great about that." Yzak said with crossed arms.
"You really are a bastard aren't you?" Hiroku said to the silver haired boy. But it was more of statement than an actual question.
"Why you…" Yzak growled and started to come at the girl with his fist. Just before he was about ready to hit her in her cheek she caught his hand and in a very tight grip.
"It's not nice to hit girls…asshole. Do it again and this gun I have in your stomach will be loaded and I won't have to worry about you trying to hit me again." She said with a death glare and in a low voice near his ear.
Yzak had unintentionally shivered and had widened his eyes for a split second and then glared right back the girl and wrenched his wrist away from her hand.
Damn…when did she pull her gun? If anything she is more threatening than Rusty when it come to firearms. And I have never had someone threaten me openly like that. And since when do I shudder when someone whispers in my ear…? Maybe because she is a hot girl and you liked it! Oh what do you know…just leave me alone!
Yzak tuned back in to the current scene in time to see Hiroku enter her new gold, silver and black mobile suit called the GATX206 Galaxy. This machine was equipped with two beam saber swords, some long and short range missiles, but its signature feature was the sniper gun that it had which would shoot lasers but also missiles, and it was silent. This was a machine clearly made for a hardcore sniper.
Hiroku was going to show her new commander how good exactly she was in a mobile suit with fake GINNS. The commander and the boys went back to the bridge to see how she did. On the way there Yzak still couldn't stop thinking about her and how he felt when she spoke to him in his ear.
Dammit! I'm acting like hormonally run teenager. But aren't you? Of course not! Not get outta my head I'm finished talking with you!
Ok! Here's the deal…I'm going to post two chapters at a time every week…probably on Fridays. That also depends on how many reviews I get…cause obviously if people don't like my story then what's the point of posting it right? Well see you all next week! And wait…I almost forgot…review please! Thanks!