Chapter 2 – Bleed Out Disclaimer – Shakugan no Shana (Season 3 especially) and GTA (IV) does not belong to me. I only make this for fun, and not to take their respective copyrights.
"TAKE THIS!"
The monster collapsed. A red-haired girl, with burning eyes, and wearing black coat, walked to the only moving man. "You're dead now. You're no longer a human. You're just a thing."
"NEVER FUCK WITH ME, LITTLE BITCH! I AM STILL FUCKING ALIVE. STOP THIS BULLSHIT AND GET THE FF-"
"Urusai! Urusai! Urusai!"
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The man took his shotgun, and shot towards the girl. The girl was not a mere girl. She suddenly opened her flaming wings, and flew, dodging the attack. With her long katana, she threw fireballs at the man. The man shot his RPG towards the fireball, and it exploded – the shockwave knocked the man and the girl to the ground.
"This thing could prove a trouble. What a stupid torch.. HHRRAAH !"
She punched the man with her flaming hands.
"Ouch! I give up, I give up. Just tell me what the fuck has happened to Liberty City?" asked the Serbian man.
"Stop swearing rude words, man!"she answered.
"Fine! Just tell me."
"The crimson denizens have found this city, and because of its crowded situation, it fed upon the city. By devouring men, it will gain their Power of Existence. You are only hit, fortunately, before I came to rescue you. You're a torch. You're just a thing. No longer a human. One day, your flame will burnt up, and you will disappear permanently – with your body. So you better shut up shut up shut up! And wait for your time to come." the little girl answered ignorantly.
"Excuse me, but what on earth are you talking about? Why I am the only man who can move while the others can't? And who the fuck are you?" the man asked.
"He is a mystes, I guess. Just like Yuji Sakai.." a voice said.
"Who's there?" the man took his gun and looked around.
"I am here, on this necklace." the voice answered.
This is my first fanfic.. Review it, please, so I can learn from you guys professional writers. Any suggestion to the story?