Hello my faithful readers! You don't know just how much I love your reviews. Some people have asked me to continue this story. I originally wrote it as a one shot, but I have put it under consideration. If anyone has any ideas of how I should continue this story, let me know. You can let me know by reviewing this story or sending me a private message from my profile.
Now to reply to a review. I would normally reply to reviews privately; however with this particular review I have been unable to do so. So here we go.
I really like this, TRULY. But i have a small problem, you rushed it, now don't think I'm flaming, but slow down! Your story is REALLY, REALLY, REALLY good and i want to savour it! So, slow down and work on describing thoughts feelings, the WAY the characters say things. The beauty of J.K. Rowling's Harry Potter is the attention to detail, so that we can begin to understand the characters!
But honestly, this is good it's just on reflection you could add some more detail!
Good Luck in the future with writing,
Alex
I thank you for the review. I am planning on fixing the things you have mentioned, except that I will not go into as much detail as J.K. Rowling. I'm not the biggest fan of a ton of details. I mean, you need detail, and I do have a tendency to write too fast and put in a minimal amount of detail, but if I actually stop and put details in it I put way too many. I will try to put more in. I'll put it up as a new chapter and people can compare them if they want.
If anyone else has any other constructive criticism, then please, I beg of you, tell me!
Thank you.
Your ever faithful author,
Breanna