Ok so I re-read my story and I realized it sucks, it totally blows sooo this is my complete re-write, im contemplating changing the entire story line but I probably wont, ohwell I hope y'all enjoy :)
"Harry are you ready sweetheart?" I heard my wife Ginny call from downstairs. Almost just one more thing I thought grabbing my wedding band and putting it on before grabbing both mine and Ginny's suitcase.
"All ready and packed away." I said smiling at my beautiful wife, goodness she is stunning, no matter what she wears.
"What's that look for?" She said blushing, god do I love her blush.
"Nothing love, are you ready to go? The train leaves in an hour, we should go." I said picking up the suitcases again and going out the door. After putting all of the suitcases and whatever else Ginny may think we needed into the car I was finally ready to start my new life with my new wife.
We were both going to be professors at Hogwarts, even though were both very young and just newly married but we both want to devote our lives to our favorite things, magic and children. Since Ginny can't have children we figured the children at hogwarts was good enough. Since Dumbeldore died Professor McGonagle has stepped up as the new headmaster. Ginny will be teaching herbology and i'll be teaching defense against the dark arts.
"What's going on inside that pretty head of yours?" My wife asked placing her hand on my thigh.
"Nothing just thinking about you and us and our life." I said picking up her hand and kissing it, causing her to blush even more. "Ahhh finally, were here." I said pulling up to the train station. After I got all of our trunks and things onto a trolley we set out for platform 9 3/4.
"You know, i've never done this without my parents, i wish they would just get off their high horses and try to make an effort, I really miss them Harry." My wife said, her eyes filling with sadness, I would do anything, die or kill just so that my beautiful wife would never have to feel that kind of pain ever agian.
"Love they just need some time to get used to things, they just recently lost your brother and now it's kind of like they're loosing you but dont worry they'll come around. How could they not? Your beautiful, smart, funny and their only daughter." I said kissing her atop the head.
"Thank you Harry." She said looking up at me.
"Anytime, now are you ready to go back?" I said smiling and pointing to the platform.
Ok so this isnt much but this is kinda like a pilot episode but in chapter form, tell me what y'all think if you like my writing style now, if you like how it's going now. Should i include other POVs? please review