Hey!! I didn't get any reviews for my last capter but I'm going to go ahead and write the next chapter (partly because I simply can't find the edit button ).
The title of this chapter spoils the whole chapter. But it will be longer... yes, definitely longer... -evil laughter-... Oh! I forgot, I do not own any of the Naruto characters... or do I? Nah, It would be NaruHina paradise if I did!!!!!! Anyways, enjoy!
Previously...
As they were talking, Naruto interrupted Hinata-- and just as she was about to confess her love for him-- because he saw the new ride at the park was finally set up. She decided to have a little fun for herself; but she had to stay close to Naruto to watch for the perfect timing.
Hinata saw Naruto get into the line for the brand-new ride. Why did he like it so much? Because it was said to make even the toughest of ninja keel over like rubber and hurl. Plus, if you weren't a ninja, it would probably be life-threatening.
That's when Hinata came up with her plan.
It had only been a little while after Naruto got in line, so he was still the last one (considering that everyone else was already in line). He was so excited about the ride that he didn't even bother to look and see that Hinata had come up behind him in line.
After 30 agonizing minutes, they were finally up. And just as Hinata had hoped, they were seated together. As soon as they got on, Naruto flashed his big, foxy grin.
"Hey! Isn't this exciting?? I can't beleive that I'm finally on..."
He paused as soon as he saw Hinata sitting right beside him, especially after all that about following him earlier. "Hinata? Are you still following me?" He asked suspiciously.
"Oh, n-n-no! I-it's just that I w-wanted to r-ride this, too! P-plus, you were th-the last in line, y-you know..." She imagined she must have looked weird about now. She just hoped Naruto, being his moronic self, would fall for it.
"Oh, okay, then!" He grinned again, gripping the safety bar, "I hope you're ready for the grea-" Whooooosh!!!!! They had totally ignored the rollar coaster assistant announcing their depart from the station, and screamed at the top of their lungs as they were flung at who-knows-how-many miles per hour on the ride.
Naruto screeched and squealed excitedly with utter joy because of the surprise. But Hinata was screaming bloody murder, and too distracted by the ride to realize she was clutching Naruto for dear life.
Almost as a reflex, Naruto clamped back. Hinata's grip loosed ever so slightly as she peeked to check if the slowing down meant a stop-- but still catious for her life. She blushed at least ten shades of red realizing what she had grabbed in order to stay in her seat. But her eyes nearly popped out of her sockets when she saw that they hadn't even gone down yet, and a HUMONGOUS hill was yet to come.
She wanted to jump out and hope something soft and squishy was awaiting her arrival below. Naruto actually noticed her expression and held her comfortably enough to make her relax, but firm enough to hold her still. (Wow, he did something right...)
"Don't worry Hinata-chan, It'll be alright." Hinata's blush darkened at the suffix. Hinata-chan, she thought.
"Y-y-yeah, o-okay," She said with bated breath. She was still scared out of her pants-- like a new kitten, plummeting from a 24-story building with the only hope of a thin, white, cotton pillow waiting on the concrete sidewalk below.
Once they got to the top of the hill, Hinata held her breath, just waiting to scream, while Naruto had his hands in the air...but thinking about it, he quickly wrapped himself around Hinata. Naruto quietly counted down... three... two... one... DATTEBAYOOOOU!!!! He screamed the last words as they fell, and a gust of wind chipped through their hair and face. It felt nice at first, but then everyone saw the bottom and desperately rummaged for a way to cushion themselves before they impacted the curve.
As if it were planned, Naruto and Hinata both hugged tight, waiting for the bottom. Hinata was actually enjoying herself for once, and hopefully when they went back up it would be really slow. But unfortunately, it was just as fast as when they were going down. And unlike most rides, this one lasted for about 6 minutes instead of 30 seconds. Six WHOLE minutes of creeping (or zooming) up mountains and rocketing down through curves, loops and twists. After the ride, everyone felt a strange combination of shock and joy as they lifted the safety bar, peeled themselves from the seats and wobbled their way out.
"THAT WAS AWSOME!!!!!" Yelled Naruto, waving his hands in the air. He quickly noticed a ramen stand and seemingly floated to it.
"Some miso pork ramen, please." Naruto said.
"Naruto-Kun? D-do you think I-I could talk to you far a-a little while? Hinata said stuttering just a little less.
"Hm?" Was all Naruto could get out while eating a mouthful of ramen. He quickly gulped It down and said "Sure, Hinata-Chan." He was smiling his biggest smile at her, which nearly covered his face.
Hinata still couldn't help but to blush whenever he said CHAN to her. Even though it's only the second time, she loved it when he said that.
"Ok, how about over there?" Hinata said pointing to a place no-one ever went to, Kinda like a messed up fun house.
"But isn't that the place that no-one likes anymore?" Naruto asked, giving Hinata a blank stare.
"Well, I h-have to t-tell you a s-secret." She was blushing madly whenever she thought about telling him.
"Ooooh, I get it." Naruto said teasingly. He nudged her. Hinata was still blushing uncontrollably, Naruto thought it was because of what he said.
"I'm sorry, Hinata-Chan, I was kidding." This time he sounded worried. "Maybe we should just go there now." He said while taking Hinata by the hand and pulled her over to the place. "So, what's your secret?" Naruto asked curiously.
"I-I, w-well s-sort of like, I-I-" Naruto for the second time interrupted her when she was about to confess.
"Wait, I have to tell you something first." Naruto was blushing a little now.
"Hinata-Chan...I love you." He had a hint of worry in his voice. "It's okay if you dont... you know, love me back."
The boy of her dreams was standing in front of her, telling her he loved her, and all she could do was stand there in shock. Hinata was telling herself this, and trying to use it to start moving and tell him she loved her too.
'Come on, Hinata, MOVE!! He's confessing his love for you and you're not even moving?!?! TELL HIM YOU LOVE HIM TOO!!!!!!'
"N-Naruto-Kun, I-I-I l-love y-you, t-too."
"Really?! This IS the best day ever!!!" Naruto said with pure happiness and joy... and happiness.
Naruto hugged Hinata tight, moving his hand in circles on her back. Comforting every pat of her body, forcing her to relax, talk more, and move more.
"Well, Hinata-Chan, It's pretty late, want me to take you home?"
"If you don't mind, do you think I could come over to y-your house?" Hinata said, choking on the next-to-last word.
"Well, If you dont mind living in the equivalent of a cardboardbox." They both laughed and walked to Naruto's house, as happy as they could be.
Yessss! Naruto and Hinata now love each other, but what will happen at Naruto's house? Well, you will just have to read the next chapter. And I would like to thank my sister, for checking over my story and spicing it up a bit. Thank you all! And I still haven't gotten any reviews, but I will keep writing!!
