Only two people told me what they thought of this story. What do you think of the story?
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The next morning, Jade and Beck were still in bed, they were awake laying in each other's arms.
Beck: Do you regret last night?
Jade: No.
Jade looked up at Beck and kissed him.
Jade: That was the best we ever had.
Beck: (chuckles) I'm just that good huh?
Jade: Shut up Beck.
Beck: So, do you think it worked?
Jade: I don't know Beck, maybe.
Beck: When will you know?
Jade: I have to wait until I get my period.
Jade unwrapped herself from Beck's arms getting out of bed.
Beck: Where are you going?
Jade: To shower.
Beck: Am I invited?
Jade: You had your fun last night.
Beck: Aw, come on babe. I need to shower too.
Jade: I'm going solo today.
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A month later, Tuesday morning, Jade woke up and went to the bathroom and became excited to see a surprise.
Jade: (yells) Beck! Beck babe! Get in here!
Beck woke up and quickly walked to the bathroom.
Beck: What's wrong Jade?
Jade: (smiling) It's been two weeks.
Beck: Um, okay. That's great, I guess. But why the excitement?
Jade: I'm two weeks late Beck!
Beck became excited and spun Jade around.
Beck: I can't believe this is actually happening. A kid of our own.
Jade: I know.
Beck: So what do we do?
Jade: We have to be sure. I'll pick up a pregnancy test on my way home later.
Beck: (hugs Jade) We've come a long way.
Jade: Yeah. Now get out so I can shower.
Beck: (chuckles) Okay, I'm leaving. Please don't hurt me.
Later that day:
Jade met up with her best friend Jenny for lunch.
Jenny: I can't believe it. Jade West is having a baby.
Jade: That's Jade Oliver to you.
Jenny: (smiles) I'm going to be an auntie.
Jade: I'm not one hundred percent sure if I'm pregnant.
Jenny: You're two weeks late.
Jade: I know, but I have to be sure.
Jenny: If the baby is a girl she'll be so cute! If it's a boy he'll look just like Beck!
Jade laughed at Jenny's excitement.
Jade: You're more excited than I am.
Jenny: I'm just so happy for you and Beck. Do his parents know?
Jade: (shakes her head) We want to be sure first. So, don't tell anyone.
Jenny: I won't. But I want you to call me after you take the test.
Later that day,
Jade was home before Beck. When Beck walked in the door Jade jumped up from the couch.
Jade: What took you so long?
Beck: (chuckles) I always get home at this time.
Jade: You couldn't drive any faster?
Beck: Did you get a test?
Jade: (nods) I got two.
Jade and Beck walked to their bathroom. Jade opened a pregnancy test looking at it.
Beck: Well?
Jade: I haven't peed on it yet Beck. What do you mean, well?
After peeing on the stick, Jade was pacing around the bathroom. It's been five minutes since she's peed.
Jade: I can't look at it. You do it.
Beck grabbed the test from the sink studying the results.
Beck: Jade, it, it says negative.
Jade: What? You're probably reading it wrong. Let me see.
Jade grabbed the test from Beck.
Jade: It is negative. But how?
Beck: Just take the other test, maybe something is wrong with this one.
Jade: Okay. Maybe you're right.
Jade threw the stick into the waste basket, Beck handed her the other test.
Jade: This is it.
Twenty minutes later after Jade took the second test, her and Beck were in their bedroom sitting on their bed.
Beck: Jade it's okay. We can always try again.
Jade: I don't care anymore.
Beck: What do you mean?
Jade: This was just a sign to tell us we don't need a baby right now.
Beck: But, you, you finally agreed to have a baby.
Jade: Yeah, well, now I changed my mind. I don't want a kid.
Jade got up walking out the bedroom, Beck followed after her.
Beck: Where are you going?
Beck stood confused watching Jade as she slipped on her shoes and grabbed her car keys.
Jade: I'm going to Jenny's.
A few hours later, Jade finally returned home. She was greeted by the smell of burgers. Beck walked from the kitchen and kissed Jade.
Beck: Hey babe, I made dinner. Cheeseburgers and fries.
Jade: Smells great. Let me use the bathroom first.
Beck: (smiles) I'll have your food sitting on the table waiting for you.
After using the bathroom Jade met Beck at the dining room table.
Beck: Are you okay? Still thinking about earlier?
Jade: I'm fine Beck. Trust me.
Jade took a bite of her burger and stuffed some fries in her mouth.
Beck: Do you like it?
Jade: I love it.
Beck: Thanks. I marinated the beef in barbeque sauce.
Jade: It's missing something.
Jade stood up from the table and walked to the kitchen, seconds later she came back holding a condiment.
Beck: Sour cream?
Jade: Duh.
Beck watched as Jade squeezed the sour cream onto her burger and fries.
Beck: But, you hate sour cream.
Jade took a huge bite of her burger rolling her eyes back in delight.
Jade: Not today I don't.
Beck sat back and watched Jade eat her dinner, finishing her meal in less than ten minutes. She noticed him staring.
Jade: What?
Beck: Was your burger that good?
Jade: I was just hungry Beck. I ate a light lunch.
Beck: I'm not trying to upset you Jade.
Jade: Well you're doing a lousy job.
Beck: When I'm finished, do you want to watch a movie?
Jade: No. I'm going to bed.
Jade got up and walked away.
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A couple days later, Friday morning, Jade felt nauseous . She quietly got out of bed and rushed to the bathroom. Beck woke up hearing Jade.
Beck: Babe?
Beck walked to the bathroom opening the closed door. Jade sat on her knees as she puked into the toilet. Beck walked over to her and held her hair back.
Jade: I think I'm done.
Jade flushed the toilet, Beck helped her up.
Beck: You okay?
Jade nodded walking past Beck to brush her teeth.
Jade: Sorry, I woke you up.
Beck: It's cool. It's only ten minutes before my alarm is set.
Jade finished brushing her teeth and held her head.
Beck: What's wrong babe?
Jade: I don't think I can make it to work today.
Beck: Stay home.
Jade: I am. I think I have food poisoning or something.
Beck walked Jade to their bed helping in.
Beck: Want me to make you some coffee?
Jade: Would you?
Beck: (kisses Jade) It would be my pleasure.
Beck made Jade a cup of coffee, he walked to their bedroom to give it to her.
Jade: Thanks.
Jade took a drink and turned her head spitting out the coffee.
Beck: What's wrong? Is it too hot?
Jade: No. This taste awful! What did you put in it?
Beck: Your usual, black with just two sugars.
Jade: Well it tastes like shit.
Jade sat the coffee on the table next to her as she covered her mouth.
Jade: Bathroom.
Jade jumped out of bed running to the bathroom.
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I am going to try to post as many updates before Thursday. Due to the high views and low reviews I take it that no one is interested. It's cool my spirit isn't broken. I'll keep updating for the three reviewers.
Kaitlyn Nicole C: Why would u re write the whole story?
Me: Hi, I'm not rewriting the whole story. I'm just rewriting the beginning to add things in and to improve. As I explained, the story seemed rushed and sloppy to me. I am only rewriting the beginning. When I'm finished of course I'll add the later chapters in and continue from there.