"WHAT!?" Natsu immediately stood up from his seat to look at Wendy with a shocked, yet slight angry face.
"What do you mean!?" Erza asked with a worried face.
"What happened to Lucy!?" Gray asked with also a worried expression.
Everyone was completely shocked at what they just heard. They just talked about Lucy, and now something has happened to her!? Whoa, talk about a coincidence.
More like freaky….
"Lu-chan!" Levy said her best friend's name in shock, while covering her mouth with her hands.
Wendy looked worn out. Her hair was a mess, her clothes were slightly torn, and sweating a lot too.
"I…Lucy-san's house…" Wendy tried to begin while still trying to catch her breath.
"Calm down, Wendy. Pushing yourself too hard wont help us find Lucy." Makarov said, as he walked over to Wendy. He seemed calm, but was clearly bothered by the situation.
"I went over to Lucy-san's house to give back her hair tie she let me borrowed…" Wendy began, after finally catching her breath.
"And…" She continued. "When I got there, her apartment was a mess, and she was missing! I tried looking for her, but instead, I found this." The little dragon slayer handed Makarov an envelope. The envelope had a guild stamp on top of it. It looked like a hollow's mask, or a skull with horns on the side. Makarov gave one look at the stamp, and put it in his pocket without saying a word.
"Gramps, we have to find her." Natsu said to Makarov.
"I know, Natsu. I was getting to that." Makarov replied.
"We don't know who or what caused Lucy to disappear, and we don't know how strong our enemies will be this time. And, I don't want everyone in the guild to leave, tearing Magnolia apart to find Lucy, so I will send three people." Makarov added as he held three fingers up.
"Gray" He pointed to the ice mage. "Erza" he pointed to the scarlet haired mage. "And Natsu." He pointed lastly to the salamander, who was probably the most worried one here.
"Wait a sec, Master." Gildarts said as he stood up.
"I'll go too. It's been a while since I've kicked some ass." He finished.
"Fine, check with the people around Magnolia, and ask if they've seen anyone or anything suspicious. The rest of you, check to see if you can find anything at Lucy's apartment that may lead to her location." Makarov said.
"Please wait Master!" Levy said as she stood her way out of the crowd so she could see Makarov.
"Please let me go too! Lu-chan needs all of over help!" Levy begged.
"Yeah, Master! Let the Shadow Gear look for Lucy too! She's our friend too!" Jet and Droy said.
"They're right! We can't just sit here and wait for something to happen!" Cana said, agreeing with the Shadow Gear.
Soon enough, everyone else in the guild were saying the same thing. They were crowding Makarov, and he was having an impatient look on his face until..
"SILENCE!" Makarov commanded as he banged his mug on the tap.
"You must stop thinking of yourselves like this…If we start a commotion around the city, our enemy or whoever took Lucy will notice and we may lose our chance of saving her for good." He added, as everyone got a sad look on their faces,
realizing he was right.
Natsu punched the palm of his fist in flames, "I don't care who the hell it is. Anyone that hurts my nakamas is my enemy." Natsu said with a determined look.
Makarov nodded as the three mages, Natsu, Gray, and Erza ran straight out of the door.
While the three mages began their way to Lucy's apartment, a woman who looks like the age of 23, black hair, red eyes, stood outside of what looks like a giant space ship.
"The Curse of the Abyss, eh?" the mysterious woman said to herself. "I wonder,...how long you'll be able to entertain me,…Lucy Heartfiia." She added with a slight grin.
"Master Abyss," a young man called her name, whose face was hidden.
"What is it now, Aoi?" She asked
"The Abyss Merge Operation is ready for use." He answered when he bowed.
A grin crept up on the dark black-haired woman's face.
"Perfect, we'll leave within an hour." She said lastly.
Meanwhile at Lucy's apartment, it was getting even more wrecked up than it already needs to be.
The look on Lucy's face when she ever comes home and see's this…Poor Natsu.
"Lucy!" Erza tried to call out to her blonde friend in the living room.
No Lucy or clues in here…
"Damn, she isn't in here." Erza cursed under her breath.
"Natsu, Gray! Find anything yet?" she asked.
"Nope, nothing!" Natsu answered, opening the fridge in the kitchen.
Gray checked under the bed, but ended up completely ignoring it due to Natsu's stupidity. "What exactly did you expect to find in there!?" Gray asked annoyed.
"I was looking for Lucy!" Natsu shouted.
"Dumbass! She was kidnapped!" Gray threw an insult at him.
"You're the one who looked under her bed!" Natsu said back.
"SHE COULD'VE BEEN IN THERE!" Gray yelled his words at Natsu's face, once they entered the same room.
So now those two idiots have X-ray vision? Or they probably just know each other that good.
"Knock it off already!" Erza dashed into the kitchen and smashed their heads against eachother with a very pissed off look.
"Choose another day to fight! We don't have enough time for you guys toargue!" She said, as the two were rubbing the side of their heads while giving each other dirty looks. "Master Makarov handed his trust to US, don't waste your time trying to bite each other's heads off!" Erza finished with her hands on her hips.
Natsu and Gray walked away from each other, like they were dizzy. "Gomenasaii~~" They said in unison.
"Puuuuun~" Plue walked towards Natsu and poked his pointy nose into his foot while having a flat, circle shaped device in his mouth.
Damn, that flame-for-brains was wearing open toed shoes. Ouch.
Natsu's dizziness had been replaced by pain. "EH-OWW! WHAT WAS TH-" The fire mage stopped his words in their tracks as he saw a flat, circle shaped object with a green button on it. It looked like whoever came here, forgot to take it with them.
"PuuPuun~!" The little guy was shaking, like he'd always do, as he dropped the mysterious object in the palm of Natsu's hand.
"Ehh…" he looked at Plue, then at the object. "Erza! Found something!" He called.
"Well, what is it?" The scarlet mage asked as she entered the kitchen.
"Come look at it!" He had a curious look on his face as he examined it.
"Puuuun~!" Plue used his nose to press down on the green button. A holographic image of a blonde haired female with blue eyes, and wearing some sort of dragon-like armor.
"AHH…Err.. Is this damn thing even on!? …AH-! AHAH! YEAH! I FIXED IT! Haaahaha! I. Am. Awesome." The blonde said proudly, feeling awesome of herself.
"I was beginning to wonder when you were going to call." Another female voice was heard, but not seen.
"A message between two people?" Erza asked herself, looking at the strange blonde woman.
Gray stared straight at the holographic picture with his hand on his chin, like he was thinking. "Hmm..maybe it's a recorded message?"
"Puuun~!" Plue said as he nodded, still shaking as usual. He thought so too.
"Do you have the girl?" The voice asked the blonde.
"Ah…maybe Vivi, just maybe…" The female would scratch her head as she continued.
"I told you to call me Master Abyss. Did I not tell you that over a thousand of times alredy?" Master Abyss said with a slighty annoyed tone.
"Ahh..Yeah! I know that! Durr." The female answered childishly.
"Did you not hear my first question, 12th division Captain Zue, number 3!?" Master Abyss began with slight rage. "Did you capture Lucy Heartfilia, or not!? Or did you only call just to waste my time?" She asked, seeming pissed off.
"Alright, ALRIGHT! SHEEEEEESH…You don't hafta give me such a scary look Q_Q" The blonde said, slightly in fear.
"AAHAHHH! Look, Look! I got her, kay!?" The blonde picked the poor stellar mage who was tied up and hanging by her neck.
"Good. Bring her to the ship so we may leave." Master Abyss said, and boy, did she sound pleased.
"Aye, aye.." The blonde was just about to turn off the device, but the stellar mage bit her finger.
What. It's not like she can use her keys being tied up like that.
"OUCCHEEEHH! LITTLE SHITHEAD BIT MEEEE." Saki thre Lucy against the wall, making her body slam create many large cracks around the house. Lucy started coughing as she coughed up blood.
….Harsh way to tell someone to not bite you finger, eh?
Natsu has a surprised, but angry look on his face. "Lucy!" He called her name after she was thrown like a baseball bat.
"We have to save her!" Gray said shirtless.
"Now go to sleep Lucy~" Saki walked over to Lucy and picked her up by the head. Lucy screamed in agonizing pain. Saki would make an insane, horrifying grin.
Whoa, creepy much?
"Don't kill her, Saki." Master Abyss ordered, but clearing sounded like she was enjoying the celestial mage's pain.
"Don't worreh about it, aight? Look, I'll bring her to the ship, and you give me mah sake, aight?" The blonde said as Lucy continued to scream in agonizing pain as she started to feel her skull crack.
"Do whatever." The voice said lastly before the message ended.
"Dammit," Erza cursed as she slammed her fist at the holographic device. "And we don't even know where the hell their ship is!" She said in her frustration.
"E-What if Gramps knows something? He has that envelope that Wendy found... " Natsu asked.
"If it was that important, I'm sure he would've shared it with us." The scarlet mage answered to Natsu.
Gray nodded. "Maybe we could get something from the Landlady as well."
After a moment of thinking, they hear something move in the closet. Natsu rushed over to the closet, in small hope it was Lucy.
Well, he was damn wrong.
A girl, about the age of 17, fell out. She had the same guildmark that Makarov saw on the envelope back at the guild. "FINALLYYY! Don't push me into a crappy closet Sach—Huh? Captain Zue? Hey—you guys ain't from Vasto Lorde….Oh—shiet." The young girl tried to escape, after realizing the situation she was in. But, she immediately stopped with her forehead turned to a dark shade of blue once Erza's blade crossed her face.
"You ain't going nowhere." Erza said with a deadly voice.
"Eh-ah-hah-ha—…EYAAAAAAAA!" The girl screamed with horror in fear of the scarlet mage's wrath.
5 minutes later, the poor girl was tied to a chair.
"Sigh, the master's gunna skin me…" the girl said, with a fountain of tears down her face.
"You know where the ship is, don't you?" Erza said as she began cracking her knuckles.
A smirked came from the teenage girl,"HAH! If you think I'm going to spill the beans, you're crazy!" Said the girl trying to act tough.
Not a good idea with these guys, kid.
"Oh really~?" Natsu smiled evilly.
"…hah? O_O" The young female tilted her head with her mouth slightly opened.
Gray looked at the girl with the same look on Natsu's face.
"Want to test us?" He said, as he punched his fist against the palm of his other hand.
Natsu and Gray repeated, "Interrogation time~!" In unison, and slowly walked toward the young girl.
"AA-AHH…" The nervous girl leaned back further enough to fall backwards. The next thing she knew, the tip of Erza's blade was at her neck. She gulped when she looked up and saw what evil looked down on her.
"Tell us where your Master is, and we'll let you escape your head still attach to your neck." Erza said with a deadly tone and a dark face.
"Eiiii!...Y-you got to be bluffing!" The young girl said, trying to act tough.
Natsu's hand flared up. "Try us!" he said in an evil but playful tone.
A large hammer was created after Gray yelled "Ice make-hammer!" and he aimed it straight for the girl's head.
"EYYAAAAA! ALRIGHT, ALRIGHT! …I giiive!" She said, finally cooperating.
5 minutes later, Natsu and Gray were running next to eachother while Erza, ran behind them dragging the girl.
"The ship where they are keeping Lucy, is behind that tall mountain!" Erza informed the fire mage and the ice mage.
Natsu and Gray both had the same determined expression on their faces.
Natsu yelled, "Race you there!" to Gray.
Gray smirked and replied, "You're on!"
The both of them ran up ahead past Erza and left them in a cloud of dust.
"Wait for me, Luucyy!" Natsu yelled as he and Gray were racing towards their destination.
"Ah-HEY! We must go together!" Erza yelled, then ran at the same speed, still dragging the girl behind her.
Erza soon caught up with the two who were a couple of meters away from the ship.
Errr—sorry, this GIANT SPACE SHIP, it said Asmoiv on it.
"Holy crap! Are you guys some sort of aliens!?" The three mages asked, slightly in awe due to the size of the ship.
"N-…NO! We are not!" the girl argued.
"Then what are you?" Erza asked as she cocked up an eyebrow.
"HAH!" The girl smirked, "Why should someone like ME answer to people like you!?"
"HEY!" The four of them heard, thinking someone already spotted them.
"Shit! Did they already sense our presence!?" Gray asked after he cursed.
"WHERE'D YOU GET THAT MEAT AND SAKE!?" Saki yelled at the guards goofing off near the front of the ship, without noticing any of the Fairy's presence. She asked with a 'big head' that made the guards shudder.
"Uhh-…In the caf…?" One of them answered.
"O_O WE HAVE A CAFÉ!? DIS. !" She ran straight back into the ship while cheering like a 5 year old.
"Ahh,…You go do that…" all four of the guards had a blu sweat drop on the back of their heads.
"HEY! THAT WAS THE CHICK FROM THE VIDEO THINGY!" Natsu yelled out of his own realization.
Took him damn long enough.
"You're slow… =_=" Erza and Gray said together in unison.
Yelling probably wasn't much of a good idea…
"o-OYE! There's people over there!" One of the guards said, after he dropped his sake.
"They're from Fairy Tail! Get'em!" the other guard said with meat in his mouth.
Natsu, Gray, and Erza all stood there like they were ready to beat these guys to a pulp.
Erza, who magically equipped into her Heaven's Wheel Armor, made a path clear enough for Natsu and Gray to infiltrate the ship. Natsu and Gray have parted with Erza, who decided to stay outside drawing more attention away from them. Now, there are two paths in their way when they found themselves deeper inside the looked at Gray, and both nodded. The split ways, both going into a separate hall. He had been following his heightened senses, and rand down the
hall, following what seemed like the scent of Lucy. Gray was following near a dark, narrow hallway. It seemed endless, until he heard footsteps. Using his quick thinking, he hid himself behind a pillar
attached to the wall.
"Did you find them!?" One of the guards said to the others. Gray listened closely, while trying not to expose himself. There seemed to be 4-6 guards together.
"No, we have not!" They answered.
"Well keep searching for them! There's said to be two males that broke inside
the ship!"
"Aaaaaagh!" The first man facepalmed. "The master wants more security on the
girl!"
"Oh, the room on this floor!?" He asked surprisingly.
"Shut up! What if the intruders heard that!? Get moving!" The guards ran up ahead, not noticing Gray.
"More security, eh…?" The ice mage smirked. "That just means more fun for me." He ran silently behind the guards, following them while being careful not to get noticed.
"So, who the Master take now?" The guard on the left asked as he turned his head towards the guard on the right.
"Ahhh.. Some busty blonde mage from Fairy Tail… No one special." The right guard answered.
"Yeah, but, damn. The Master hardly tells us anything or WHY we do this crap." The guard in the middle said with slightly annoyed tone.
"I dunno either. We just HAVE to follow her orders. But, I have a feeling it has something to do with Master Kurushimeru." The left guard replied to the middle.
"Kuru-who?" The middle guard and the right asked.
Dafuq is that?... ._.
"You haven't heard? He's the guildmaster of our rival guild, Dark Eclipse. Some say his power is just like our master's!" He answered.
"Really? That's fucking incredible. What the hell happened between those two?" The middle guy who showed a bit of his dark hair color, more black.
"How the hell am I supposed to know, eh!? We're just soldiers. We couldn't even make it into the guild's rank." The left guard said.
"You don't have to remind us! Btw- which room is that Lucy in…?" The dark haired guard asked randomly, completely out of the topic.
"Agh, 134-OB! I keep tellin' ya that to you over again, you asshead!" The red-haired guard shouted as he took off his helmet, who was on the right.
Gray kept following the guards. "134-OB, eh?"He kept following them, and when he thought it was a good time, he grabbed one, beat him up, took his outfit, and caught up with the other guards. "Hey guys…Where's 134-OB again?"
"You goddamn son-of-a-bitch! I just told you a second ago!" the red-haired one said as he whacked Gray on the back of his head.
"Dude, go easy on him. Master Abyss gave him long-term memory loss for being an asshole." The guy on the left said as he took off his helmet, his hair was spiky blonde.
" I still think that's just a bunch of bullshit." The red-haired cursed back.
"No one cares what you think, dumbass." A random guard insulted the red-head, who was in front of them and next to another guard with a buzz cut.
"YOU WANNA PLAY JACKASS!? He barked out in anger due to the insult.
"YEAH, I'LL BUST YO FACE UP, MOTHAFUCKA!"
"MY MOM AIN'T NO WHORE, YOU DICKHEAD!"
The two guards ended up creating their own cloud of fighting, while the other one with the buzz cut just stood off to the side.
"Dafuq is wrong with you newbies. Damn, you're all attention whores." The buzz cut one said.
Gray facepalmed, and went up to the one guy with the buzz cut. "What about you? Be a tour guide for a newbie, will ya?"
"Hey…Everyone on this ship is a newbie, except for one of the Captains and the guildmaster, of course. Need I explain further? ¬_¬"
The ice-make mage was getting upset and impatient. "Would ya just take me there already!?"
"Well, at least you remember how to act like an asshole." The guard insulted him. "I'll get you there, depending on your rank. What soldier rank are you?" He asked.
Gray was suddenly surprised. "Soldier rank..? Umm, A?" he guessed out for pure luck.
"You dimwit! Your brain really is screwed up! That ain't a rank!" He forced Gray to show him his back, which had the word, 'Adept', written on the back.
"An adept!?" The buzz-cut guard was shocked. That's the closet rank to an S-Class!
Lucky for Gray, huh?
"The hell is a bigshot like you doing on this floor!? Master Abyss sent ya, didn't she?" He asked.
Gray saw his chance "I said 'A' for adept, idiot! No shit the master sent me. She wanted Lucy to be moved to a new location." He lied, faking an act.
"Terribly sorry, sir. Bahwah..? A new location!? But- she's in the middle of the Abyss Merge Operation!" he said with slight shock.
"Yeah, the intercoms went down in that area. They wanted me to inform them that the girl needs to be moved to a different area." Gray said with a straight face.
Can that perverted iceboy act, or what!?
"You frickin' kiddin' me, right? Damn, Master Abyss is crazy. Alright, follow me." He said as he began walking again.
The guard began "refreshing" Gray's memories that there are 14 squads and 14 Captains that have a number indicating their strength. Whichever Captain has the number '1' somewhere on their body, means they are the strongest captain out of the 14. Therefore; is the strongest member throughout the entire guild. He also mentions that each captain has a lieutenant to help support the squad to whichever one they've been assigned to. He said that only S-Class members and above can enter a squad. The rest, like him, are just soldiers who are sent into battle who will probably never make it
back alive. Lastly, he said there are a group of members with strength similar to the Captains known as General, which don't belong to a squad, but does personal quest asked by the guildmaster.
Simple enough, right?
"Well, this is the place. If you forget where the Master told you to put the girl, she's supposed to be in the ship's main control room, which is a couple miles from this point, and then there's the exit at the opposite end. Oh, and
my name's Levi." He said.
"You mean…She sent me all the way around this ship …when there's a straight , Levi." Gray thanked Levi, who saluted the ice mage and left.
Gray pressed the green button on the door and it opened sideways. As soon as the ice mage stepped into the room, he couldn't believe what he had seen. Lucy's body was stuck to what looks like, a darker version of the infinity
clock. But, it was the Abyss Merge that Levi talked about. There was a strange symbol in her left eye, while her other eye was a deep red color. The right side of her face was covered by a strange, scary tattoo.
"L-Lucy!" Gray shouted her name as his eyes widened. The Abyss Merge seemed like it had a barrier protecting itself, and preventing Lucy from leaving or anyone else getting near her. Gray learned this the hard way. He ended up running into the Abyss Merge 3 times before he realized it. "Gahh…No use. Dammit, where the hell is that flame-head when you need him!?"
While running, Natsu must have passed countless rooms with the same smell, but it smelled the strongest at the end of the hall. "Wait for me, Lucy! I'll find you and get you out of here, I promise!"
A small grin formed on Happy's face, he flew next to Natsu and said, "You liiiiiiike her~!"
The salamander blushed with an embarrassed, but annoyed face, "Shaddap, Happy!"
Exactly a half a second later, a female mage ran into the fire mage and spilled a bunch of sake and meat everywhere. It was Saki. The Captain of the 12th squad, number 3. Given what Levi told Gray, the lower numbers are the strongest.
The blonde captain sat straight up on top of Natsu. Her boobs jiggle as she waved her arms up and down fast. "Who da hell is touching meeeeee!?"
Natsu shoved Saki off of him. "You're so heavy!"
Well, no duh. She's been having those huge "dumplings", or so she calls, on her chest!
"H-Hey…YOU'RE THE ONE WHO TOOK LUCY!" Natsu pointed his finger at the blonde mage before him.
"O_O" There was silence between them, until Saki pointed her finger at him and said, " HOLY SHIT YOUR HAIR'S PINK!"
That was totally unexpected.
"That's what you get out of this!? Pink hair- Hey! Its a rosy-red color!" Natsu argured.
"Nawman, Its pink. B|" Saki blinked after her sudden realization. She pointed at him again with her hair sticking up straight. "WHAT THE- WHO THE HELL ARE YOU!?"
Took her damn long enough…
"Can it ya damn narrator!" Saki yelled the narrator.
Rude…
"You're that chick from the video!" Natsu exclaimed. "Where's Lucy!?" he demanded.
"Ah? Ahshiet! I forgot the damn BS thingy!?" Saki completely ignored Natsu's question as she began freaking out over exaggeratedly.
"HEY!" Natsu yelled after the female completely dodge the question.
"No! No you cannot! This meat and sake is mine! Mine I saaayyy!" Saki would say as she grabbed what was dropped on the ground. "…How'd ya get in here..?" She randomly asked.
"Ehhh…The front door was ope- HEY! I ASKED YOU A QUESTION!" He said to Saki who was hugging her sake and meat.
"…You did? o_O" Saki asked Natsu like an idiot. "Hey! Who're callin' an idiot!?"
"OYE! Quit talking to yourself!" Natsu yelled at Saki, who's apparently talking to herself.
"Where's Lucy!?" he asked again, getting even more pissed off by her stalling.
"Uhh..Lucy? HAH? The hell is a Lucy!? I dunno whadafack that is!" Saki honestly said, yes she was being honest.
Natsu's reaction was not enough for words. His face just dropped. "…the girl you kidnapped earlier? Blond hair..Stellar mage…"He paused. "Big Ol' titties…"
"OHHHHH... That Lucy! Yeah, I know where she is." Saki admitted.
"Tell me!" He demanded, again.
"Nahman, If I tell you, I'd get my ass kicked." Saki said, rejecting his demand.
"Ah c'mon! I answered your question! How's that fair!?" Natsu complained and argued with the blonde mage.
"Bleeeeh! Can't get meeee!" Saki teased as she started running down the hall.
"HEY! Get back here, dammit!" Natsu ran after Saki very pissed off.
"Bleeeh! You're slow!" She teased again.
"They're like two of the same kind." Happy said, flying next to Natsu chasing after the female mage.
Natsu was getting even more pissed off by this chicks childish behavior. But, it did remind him of someone…
Jee, wonder who…
"I'll kick your ass if you don't answer me seriously!" Natsu threatened as he lit his hand up in flames, seeing Saki stopped randomly.
No, it wasn't just a random stop. He triggered something in her. There was a sudden change of character in Saki. "Heeeh? Is that so?" A wicked smile appeared on her face.
Natsu's fist was an inch away from Saki's face. Within a half of a second, Saki caught his wrist, having a tight grip on it. Her hair was covering her eyes as she shows that creepy-ass smile. "Ohh, what was that again? I didn't quite hear you." That wicked smile formed into an insane grin. It was like a cross between Zancrow's and Grimmjow's sinister grin.(Bleach reference, sorreh.)
"E-eh?" Natsu said in surprised. That had been the first time someone had grabbed his hand in the middle of an attack, completely stopping a flaming arm in its track. "How did you—". He paused, still in shock.
"How 'bout I show you the difference between the Dragon Titan Slayer and a puny dragon slayer like you?" She said as she activated her magic aura, which was mixed with spiritual pressure. She was covered in white fire, it was more than the area could handle! It pierced through the walls, the ground, even the ceiling, creating large, wide, deep cracks surrounding the two slayers. Her eyes were revealed, they were blue, and her pupils were the shape of a dragon's.
Who is she? The Dragon Titan Slayer? As in, the only one?
Thanks again for keeping up with the story! ^_^ Woah, The Dragon Titan Slayer, huh!? Neat. To make something clear, I came up with that BEFORE Attack On Titan was aired. So, AOT has no reference in this story, as far as I know. I made that up through the Greek Titan-Gods in mythology.
If you want to see what Saki looks like, look up Saki Zue on FaceBook or check on my DeviantART (ViviNeoAbyss). There should be a link in the description of Chapter 2. What she exactly looks like is her icon picture, and you can see what the guild mark actually looks like on her thigh-or leg..xD
And, if you would like to see the size of the spaceship, its also in the description of the same chapter on my DA. As for Vivi, the guildmaster, what she looks like is the same as my icon on her and on DA.
Thanks for reading again! Keep up with the story, tell me what you think, suggest any ideas, and I'll gladly see what I can do with them! Right now, chapter 3 is running a bit late, as I am still writing it down in my book. xD I ask that you all wait patiently. :) I promise I won't have you wait too long. ;)
And, from the part I put in when Saki was talking to the narrator...I saw it from an anime, and I thought it be funny if I tried it. xD I'm trying to work on my descriptive words better. So for now, you'll just have to bare with me.