I do not own Naruto I do own Thorin I made him fot my firends story fot class I just change thing fot this story hair used to be black.
I want people to write what they think so I can get better. This one will be longer I just wanted to get the first chapter out hope you in joy.
"Hokage the nine tail jinchuuriki has been taken by a red-headed swordsman" said a man in a sparrow mask.
"What wait did this happen order a full scale search of the surrounding area," order the Hokage. The sparrow disappear in a flash soon as he was gone the Hokage let out a sigh looking out over the village. 'I hope Naruto okay I knew this would happen just not so soon. I could go out and look for him myself but the civil council would say if it needed a Hokage he should be put to death for the protect shin of the village.
A few hours later "Hokage we check a ten mile radius outside the village there was no sign of them, but with the help of the Inuzuka clan we might be able to find the them."
"Tell them to prepare a search team of their best trackers," said the Hokage.
"Yes sir" disappearing in a flash once again. The Hokage looked over the village once again thinking 'I should tell the few people who really care for Naruto about what happened.' He thought as he walks out of his offices heading for the two people who didn't care what people said about the boy.
As a sign come in to view (Ichiraku's ramen) 'that boy really did clean out my pocket each time I came here with him' he thought sadly as he walked up to the ramen shop. But stop when he heard laughter
"How in the hell can you eat so much dam it Naruto you could clean me out." Rushing over to see what happen when he pulls back the curtain to see a stack of twenty bowls. There was a red-head who appeared to have face palm the counter and Ichiraku with dollar signs in his eyes. But when he seen Naruto with a smile on his face he couldn't help but smile.
"There you are Naruto what you doing here?" ask the Hokage as he gave a look at the red-head. Seeing that this man was the kidnapper from the reports he got from sparrow.
Naruto turn and look right at the red –head "he helped me then offer the take me out to eat." There was a small sign of pain that went though his eyes and at the same time the red-heads hand stared rubbing his hair and giving him a smile. "If I knew how much you could eat I wouldn't have offered."
'Those villager attack him again and this stranger saw and help him thinking they where attack a normal child,' Thought the Hokage. "And who would he be?" ask the Hokage.
Naruto having a look of confusion looking at the red-head "hey what your name?" he asked
"What you didn't even ask him his name," said the Hokage as he face palm
Chuckling "my name is Thorin but what is yours?" ask Thorin turning to look at the Hokage.
Shaking his head at Naruto "My name is Hiruzen Sarutobi the third Hokage" said Sarutobi as he set down ordering a bowel. They talk in to the night the Hokage seeing that Thorin meant no harm he was just protecting Naruto. Thorin found out where he was far from home in a new land he also ask why Naruto was attack. Sarutobi knew why but didn't say it. Naruto fell asleep leaning on Thorin.
Sarutobi wasn't surprise when Thorin move his arm around Naruto and held him close to his chest Ayame said it was cute and that Thorin was too young to be so fatherly. He laughs at that one for some reason around this time Sarutobi remember something. "Hokage we have the Inuzuka clan ready to help in the search of Naruto,"
"There is no need for that he right here," said Sarutobi. Every one there wanted a camera when cracks appear at the bottom of his mask when his jaw drops.
"Hokage he a kidnaper he attack a ninja of the village," said sparrow watching Thorin as if he would jump up and attack them right there.
"No he protect Naruto from him and he lie in his report also attack a citizen of the leaf," said Sarutobi giving a look that said it was final. "But I do need you to give a report Thorin why don't you come to my office?" ask Sarutobi.
"Sure I don't want to cause you to much of a problem," said Thorin. As he put Naruto's arms around his neck holding him with one didn't seem to notice only held on tighter. As he got up and turn around sparrow reach to take Naruto.
"Leave the boy alone he fine with Thorin," said Sarutobi.
"But Hokage this man not even of the village and you're letting him get hold of our jinchuuriki," said sparrow. Right there a mad ideal when thought Sarutobi head.
"This here is Thorin Uzumaki a lost member of the Uzumaki clan that there is Naruto Uzumaki. They are family I doubt he would hurt him!" yelled Sarutobi. Thorin even thought he knew that Sarutobi was doing something that involved him but didn't care he seen the way the villagers look at Naruto when he was dragged him to Ichiraku's ramen. With hatred that no child should see but Naruto didn't care he looked right back at them with his eyes saying one word why.
"What he an Uzumaki," looking right at Thorin.
"Yes I am Thorin Uzumaki," said Thorin not knowing who the Uzumakis where. Sarutobi couldn't help but smile 'it looks like he caught on.'
As they were turning to go "hey your bill," said Ichiraku with the dollar signs still firmly held in place. Reaching into his pocket and pulling out a gold coin and tossing it to Ichiraku. 'Good thing I made the bet with Dark to bad I only pickpocket a four of the nobles. Too bad I only got ten gold three slivers. I was going to give it all back after the coronation, but ending up in a new world, land, or dimension. Knowing my luck it's the last one.'
"Is this is this gold" screamed Ichiraku the dollar signs double in size and turnning yellow.
"Yes" said Thorin he watch the coin disappear in Ichiraku pocket.
"Can't wait to see you next time Thorin-san" said Ichiraku has his eyes went back to normal. After a few stares and words said like gold and weird eyes. They left for the Hokage's tower.
Naruto was put in the room next the Hokage's office to sleep. Thorin and Sarutobi talk in the Hokage's office.
"So what an Uzumaki?" ask Thorin why looking around the room.
"An Uzumaki is a clan of people Naruto is one of them." Giving a sigh "it's a dead clan there aren't many of them left."
"So Naruto is alone."
"Yes he is the only one in the village."
"Why did you say I was an Uzumaki?"
"Do to reason I can't say Naruto is hate by the village. There are few who care for him you being one. I want you to take care of Naruto. I said you're an Uzumaki do to your hair most Uzumaki have red hair."
"Why can't you take care of him?"
"There are people won't let me for the same reason the villager hate him."
"Ok I will but only if you help me find out if I can get home."
Letting out a sigh 'at less now Naruto will have some sort of family' thought Sarutobi. There is Some money left in the Uzumaki account to help you out as there is no longer an Uzumaki clan compound do it being a a dead clan."
"Good I have very little gold and sliver left to my name," said Thorin with a relax smile.
"We don't use gold or sliver coins here,"
"Wait what then way did Ichiraku take it as payment."
"You gave a man gold who would say no,"said Sarutobi face palming at the red-head. "You
can sale off the gold for a good price that should help.
"Good now is there any thing I need to know about Uzumakis?"
"Uzumaki are master at the sealing art they also have a large life force, longevity, high stamina, chakra reserves."
"What are sealing art and chakra."said Thorin with a look of confusion.
"What you how you not know about chakra," yelled Sarutobi
"I do not come from this would how am I to know the way of it,"said Thorin
"Come here I see if you are even able to use chakra,"said Sarutobi as Thorin got up and move to stand in front of him. Sarutobi putting his hand on Thorin belly then forcing his chakra to find Thorin's tenketsus glad when he did and also giving them a jump start.
"What did you just do?" asked Thorin feeling some thing in his body.
"I jump started your chakra system you have one but you haven't used it before. You will need to build and it if you want to pass as an Uzumaki. I will also be giving you sealing jutsu scrolls to help with that."said Sarutobi
"Thinks is that all you need for to night?' ask Thorin.
"There one more thing," said Sarutobi as he got up and grab so papers held them to Thorin. This are citizenship paper of the village hidden in the Leaves. Sighing as he reached over grab and signed them. "welcome to Konoha," said Sarutobi with a smile holding out a another paper."
"What those ones for" ask Thorin
"Those are adoption papers for Naruto this isn't allow often for some one your age, but seeing as how Naruto only six and your what 18-20 but being that your of the same clan." he couldn't help it he smile at the last part.
"I'am eighteen" said Thorin with a smile as he signed the adoption papers after a minute of signing and reading he was done.
"Good now all we need is for Naruto to sign the paper," said Sarutobi
"before that I have a question that I been wondering about," the temp when down in the room Thorin giving Sarutobi a cold stare the affect amplified do to one ice cold blue eye. "Why did you allow the beatings the villagers where giving Naruto."
For the first time that night a pain look I his eye. I sorry but I ca-BAM a fist nail the Hokage right in his face over his desk and out of his chair and on to the floor.
Still giving him a cold stare " I know you won't tell me but when I find out why if it isn't a good reason. I will kick your ass so hard that your stone face will crack. As he point at the Hokage faces and turn out op the room to go get Naruto.
'He a good choice if he hit a man who's face hang over his village hard might I add"'as he rubbed his face. 'He be good for Naruto he.' Waited a minute as a sleep Naruto walk into the room.
"What is it Ji-san?" Naruto ask rub his eyes as Thorin came in the room.
"I need you to to sign here," he said as as he pointed at a line on the paper.
"What is it?" he ask looking sleepy at the paper.
"Its adoption papers for Thorin to adopt you," replied Sarutobi. Naruto eyes snap wide open he looked at Sarutobi then at Thorin then Back at Sarutobi. "Well are you going to sign?" asked Sarutobi once again . Naruto turn and looked Thorin right in the eye.
Thorin saw a pair of big blue eyes looking at filled with hope,joy and fear thinking it was to good to be true. All he could do was give Naruto a big smile and put his hand on his head.
_ I hope you liked it it took me some time I had to write half of on word pad because I don't have word at home. please review and ask questions I need feed back.