Ok here's the next chapter! This probably answers a few questions from my last chapter. I'm going to try to make my chapters longer but I can't make it to long or else they'll take longer to post. Another story I've got has really long chapter and my Beta's had the next chapter since February and not working on it because its so long.
Some questions I got:
myrthill : Yes she really does hold ALL of the nine bijuu, and yes she is better than all the Kages combined. But she's not that strong yet because she's eleven. And her going back is actually going to be very interesting. However no one will recognize her for a while because she doesn't have Hyuga eyes and doesn't actually use byakugan because she's only fighting at Genin level so there's no reason for her to bring out her version of byakugan. I loved your review!
Translations:
Aoi-byakugan – blue byakugan.
Naruto returned home to see nine faces looking at him expectedly. Knowing what they wanted to hear he simply shrugged "I let her go."
"What do you mean you let her go?!" a girl with feline features sporting a purple jacket with a number two on the back.
"Are you sure that was the wisest idea Onikage-sama?" an elder mad said ignoring the first girls comment. The man was older than the rest wearing a brown jacket with the kanji for "four" on his back.
"I think it was for the best. She needed to learn about the rest of the world somehow. She has more than enough power and control the make sure nothing bad happens. If I think it's time for her to return I have a plan set to do so." Naruto said simply before going over to peck a worried looking Hinata on the cheek "She'll be fine love."
"I know" Hinata sighed "She's just never been anywhere besides this village before."
"She has a point Naruto-san." Gaara stated
"I see no problem with it. If you all can remember correctly the Bijuu have taken a liking to her. They will tell her if she's gone astray." A woman wearing the kanji for "eight" said.
The others pondered this for a minute before Gaara spoke again "She is your child Naruto. Able to make friends with the most powerful demons in our world." He shook his head "She'll be fine."
The others nodded in agreement before Two spoke again "I suppose if one of them is here we might as well still have a party." with that eight of the people poofed from the room.
Hinata sat down at the table and put her head on her hands. "Do you think anyone will recognize her? She has your looks and her aoi-byakugan."
"She's smart. She's young but she's smart." Naruto replied.
"I never wanted her to go there." Hinata said meekly looking at her husband "All the pain they caused you that day."
"If I remember correctly it wasn't everyone."
:Flash Back:
Naruto and Sasuke trekked back to the village trying to support the others weight.
About 10 KM away from the village Sasuke muttered "Sorry dobe, I can't move anymore." He said before collapsing onto Naruto "I'll buy you some ramen later." He mumbled before passing out.
"Stupid teme, always leaving all the work to me" Naruto said though you could see a smile on his face. He had miraculously been able to convince Sasuke to return with him…after getting a whole blown through his chest by chidori and having to use a large amount of Kyubi's chakra that is. But it didn't really matter to him at the moment, all he wanted to do was get home and make sure all his friends were ok. He even had the surprising urge to see Hinata; he didn't know why he just did.
Naruto managed to hoist Sasuke up and drag him the remaining way to the gate. Sakura was there and she looked angry. Why would she be angry with him? Naruto thought as he got closer only to have Sakura punch him and pull Sasuke away from him and kicking him again.
"What the hell is wrong with you!" She yelled cradling Sasuke closer to her.
"B-but I brought him back." Naruto managed weakly only to be punched again. He didn't have the strength to get up so he just stared in horror at his teammate.
"I told you to bring him back! Not to almost kill him! I bet you enjoyed it didn't you? Being able to beat him up when he was obviously going through something bad. You're a fucking monster Naruto. Stay away form me and my Sasuke-kun!" she said before turning around only to see a very angry looking Tsunade and Jeraiya. "Thank goodness you're here Hokage-same. I can't beat up this worthless piece of trash by myself."
Sakura was sent flying back by one of Tsunade's punches. She held her now broken nose as blood came gushing out of it "Haruno Sakura, from this day forward you are relieved form further ninja duties. You are a disgrace to this village."
"What about him?" Sakura said pointing Naruto "He deserves to be put to sleep like the animal he is!"
This time it was Jeraiya who gave a blow to the girl and ripped off her headband. He said nothing just walked and stood over Sasuke studying him.
"Don't hurt him ero-sennin." He looked over to see Naruto smiling weakly at him "He came back on his our accord." Jeraiya nodded before picking Sasuke up off the ground while Tsunade rushed to grab Naruto as they ran to the hospital.
Two hours later
Tsunade walked into Naruto's room with a tired look on her face, her eyes red and puffy as if she had been crying. Naruto looked up from his bandaged hands. His eyes matched Tsunade's, for he hadn't been able to get what Sakura said out of his mind. He had considered her one of his precious people and she had betrayed him.
Tsunade walked up and pulled Naruto to her and started crying on his shoulder. "I'm so sorry Naruto! So, so sorry!" Naruto returned the embrace waiting for his mother figure to compose herself or continue "It was either this or death. And if I said no they would've taken it into their own hands!"
"I've been exiled haven't I?" Naruto asked quietly. This only caused Tsunade to cry harder.
"All of us tried to help! The Inuzaka's, Nara's, Aburame's, Akimichi's, Yamanaka's, and even the Hyuga's representative tried to stop it! But the council heads swore that you attacked a loyal member of Konoha and committed treason. The villagers will back up their statements." She sobbed uncontrollably.
Naruto smiled slightly at the fact that all of his friend's families tried to help. His eyes darkened again and then his face became emotionless.
"Then I will leave quietly."
Tsunade's tears stopped and she looked up at her son "N-naruto?"
Naruto looked at her and nodded "There is no reason to put up a fight. It will only cause trouble for you. So I will go." Tsunade didn't even try to argue with Naruto. She could tell by the low, formal way he spoke that it was final.
"Then let me come with you." She started but Naruto immediately shook his head.
"You need to stay here and watch over the village my father worked so hard to protect." Tsunade looked at the blonde in shock "I've know for a while now. Kyubi told me."
"I'll miss you Oba-chan. I'll see you again." And with that Naruto disappeared leaving his forehead protector on the desk beside him, for his injuries had healed already so there was no reason for him to stay. He wished he could say goodbye to his friends but it would only cause trouble if a villager saw him.
Naruto ran to his apartment and gathered all of his positions before heading out and appearing next to the west gate. He looked towards the Hokage Monument and eyed the Fourth as a single tear escaped his eye "Bye Tou-san. I hope you forgive the village, I have no qualms except for having to leave my precious people."
"NARUTO-KUN!" a soft voice yelled. He turned to see Hinata running towards him with tears in her eyes.
She ran up to Naruto and flung herself on him in a hug that sent both of them crashing to the ground. She cried and held onto him for dear life, not caring how compromising the position they were in was.
Her father had come home with a sad look on his face and brought her to the living room. He sat her down "Hinata, Naruto has returned from the mission with only minor damage and is now in the hospital recovering."
Hinata let out a sigh of relief but wondered why her father was talking to her about such matters. "Hinata the boy has been exiled."
Hinata's eyes widened. She had looked at her father begging for it to be a joke but he just shook his head. "Hinata you are my daughter. My only concern is for your happiness though I realize this has not appeared so in the past. If he makes you happy I will not stop you."
With that Hisashi gave his daughter a hug and walked out of the room, doing the right thing for his daughter for the first time in her life.
And now here she was, holding onto her most precious person as if he was her lifeline.
"Hi-Hinata-chan?" Naruto stuttered as he picked himself up and Hinata off the ground.
"I'm coming with you" Hinata finally managed to get out after a while. Naruto finally noticed the backpack on her back.
"Hinata, it will be dangerous and-"
"I don't care!" Naruto was taken aback by her sudden outburst "A-as long as I know y-you're ok. I w-would hate to be a-away from you. You're my most precious person and I've admired you for some time now. I'm not going to let you be alone anymore. You're to kind and caring. You deserve a family that will stay with you and I have nothing left here if you leave. Let me be your family from now on Naruto-kun."
Naruto pulled Hinata into a hug "Arigato Hinata-chan"
"Looks like you've found a mate, kit." Kyubi's voice said from inside his head.
"Are you ok Kyubi? I used a bit of your chakra back there."
"I'm getting there, kit. But that's not the reason I'm communicating. We need to talk about your future from this point. I know for the next few years I want to train you. Make you my apprentice you could call it. But after that what do you want to do?"
"Well…I was thinking about that to and well…I wanted to create someplace. Someplace that outcasts and runaways can go and live together and start families without being judged."
"That's….wonderful. I guess I could even say I'm proud of you. So how would you like to start?"
"Well why don't we start with the training then I can figure out what to do from there. However I'm going to pay you back for this somehow Kyubi."
"I think I've got an idea of how you can do that kit. This will help with your little mission there also."
"What?"
"Who are the people who are rejected most in society?"
Naruto thought about this for a minute before his head snapped up in realization "Jinchuriki."
"Excactly. And which people have my only remaining demon kin left?"
"The other jinchuriki...Gaara."
"I think we know what we're going to do next." Naruto said coming back to earth. Hinata just looked at him in confusion. Naruto realized he was going to have to tell her about Kyubi so he led her into the forest beyond the gate and did just that.
To his surprise she had embraced him in a hug crying on his shoulder. "Those bastards! How dare they do that to you. I always knew you were hurt but for something that you can't control."
Naruto sat stunned at hearing Hinata cuss. "It's ok. I think I turned out alright."
Hinata nodded in agreement. "So where are we off to now?"
"Suna. We're going to find Gaara and have him join us. Then we're going to go find seven more people and have them join us as well."
:End:
"You know I have been thinking lately and I think our village genin might just be joining Konoha for their next chunin exams." Naruto said to his wife.
"Cool! Tou-san we could have a whole big thing! Kinda like an official introduction to Oni thing. We could make a big deal out of it and bring everyone to Konoha!" Takeru said excitedly forgetting that he was supposed to be hiding.
"Takeru!" Hinata said harshly.
"What have I taught you about spying?" Naruto said as Takeru hung his head and Hinata looked proud at her husband for scolding his child. "Stay hidden! And for the love of Kami boy! You have byakugan! You shouldn't even have to be in the same room to spy on us!"
Hinata sweat dropped and smacked her head as she watched her sons eyes go wide as he put his father's advice to memory.
Giving Naruto a smack over the head Hinata walked over and gave her son a warm hug. "Happy birthday Takeru." She held him at arms length to exam him. She nodded approvingly "Looks older, doesn't he Naruto?"
Naruto looked over his son "Son, are you shorter than you were yesterday?"
Hinata frowned "Don't listen to your tou-san. If I remember correctly enough he was shorter than me until we were fifteen."
Takeru looked up at his father, who had to be a good six feet two inches. "R-really?"
"It's the sad truth. Don't worry; you'll probably sprout up in a few years." Naruto assured his son.
"Takeru, what's around your neck?" Hinata asked her son, noticing the hitate on his neck.
"Houtaru gave it to me as a present." He said "So I guess she went to Fire County?"
"Yes. But I'm glad she gave you that. That was part of your surprise today. Uzumaki Takeru, today I am officially making you a member of Onigakure's Shinobi's Ranks as a genin." Naruto said in an official voice he had acquired over the years.
"T-tou-san." Takeru managed to stutter "ArigatoTou-san!"
He got up and hugged his father. "What about the academy?" He knew most kids had to go to the academy to become shinobi.
"By the time we started the academy you were already more advanced in your training than the other children. Besides, for the sake of the teachers we decided to keep Houtaru out of the academy." Hinata explained. Takeru nodded knowing very well that his mother wasn't referring to the fact that his twin sister was the container of nine bijuu but the fact that she was the known prankster of the village and would probably cause any teacher to go legally insane.
"Tou-san, aren't I supposed to have a team." Takeru asked.
"Why yes, actually you're going to be on a team with your sister, but she'll have to join you after she returns. You're sensei will be your uncle Gaara and you're third member will be-" Naruto was abruptly interrupted by the sound of the front door opening to reveal a girl with short red hair and teal eyes the same age as the twins.
She smiled and walked over to Takeru and gave him a warm hug. "Happy birthday Takeru-kun" She said quietly and calmly. She tried to pull away but noticed Takeru had gone limp, his faced turned a beet red.
Naruto laughed outloud at the confused look on the young girls face "Don't worry Nozomi, it's his way of saying he likes you." He then turned to Hinata "He may have gotten my height issues but that he inherited that form you."
The road to Konoha
"We're walking, we're walking……we're walking some more."
"Shut it you senile raccoon!"
"What? I'm bored!"
"We're almost there."
"Kit, I would like it if you summoned one of us. You're father wasn't treated right the earlier years of his life and I don't want to think you might be treated the same way."
"Arigato Kyu-chan. You're always looking out for me and since you know the village the best why don't you come out with me?"
Houtaru stopped and preformed a few hand seals, bit her thumb and preformed a summoning seal. Once the smoke cleared she kneeled down next to Kyubi at pet the top of his head. "You're so cute!"
And he was. Instead of the giant nine-tailed demon there stood a cute little one-tailed fox cub with big red eyes.
"….you turned me into a living stuffed animal!" Kyubi yelled.
"Hey! You have to look innocent and I haven't managed to figure out how to make you look like a adult fox yet! It was either you in you're full form or this." Houtaru said before continuing on down the road.
The little fox followed behind muttering something about how eating people is better than being eaten by little girls.
"You might want to take you're hitate off." She said referring to the hitate that all the Bijuu now wore showing alliance with Oni. "And no speaking when we're in public." Kyubi nodded removing the piece of cloth from his neck and giving it to Houtaru.
They stayed quiet for most of the rest of the journey occasionally stopping for some water. Finally Houtaru laughed and picked up the little fox with a giggle.
"May I ask what you are doing?" The all powerful bijuu asked.
"One: this makes you look more like my pet which is the role you're going to play while we're in Konoha. Two: you're just so darn cute!" Houtaru explained.
Houtaru stopped and looked up at the giant wall ahead of them with the fire symbol on the top. "It's not as big as the wall around Oni but it's still pretty magnificent." Kyubi nodded in response knowing glaring at the guards who were posted at the top of the wall. Ironically enough this was the very wall that her parents had left from.
"Halt! State your name and business in Konoha." Houtaru took a deep breath and turned around. "Here goes nothing."
I'm not going to elaborate anymore on the council in Oni. For now I'm just going to call them names like "Four" and "Two" ect.
Ok so here's the second chapter and like I said before sorry about any mistakes I made. If you have any comments or questions I will answer them.