an I know my writing is crap, the first chapter took me two days to write and you saw how that turned out so if someone would like to better my writing by becoming a beta reader I would much appreciate it, I'm also new to using fan fiction besides just reading posted fics so if you could pm and help me out that would be nice
"I'll kill you." Zero growls as he finally breaks the chains as well as Kid Flashes grip, before charging at batman. Superman blocks the path. Zero reacts to this by punching Superman causing him to fly into Batman.
"Alright that's enough." Green Lantern states creating a barrier around Zero to stop him from doing any more harm. Zero tries to break out but the barrier turns into chains around is wrist and legs.
"Yeah we haven't been able to reach him him since we've he doesn't understand us." Kid Flash over complicates.
"I think I might be able to help but first we need to get him to a secure location." J'ohn Jonzz states in his flat Martian voice.
Half hour later at a secure Arkham Cell.
"Kill." Zero growls struggling with his restraints and the medication in his system.
"That's all he has said, it's disturbing." J'ohn states calmly.
"Are you ready? Batman responds.
"Yes." He says entering the cell. Before he enters Zero's mind he takes a good look at him, and what he sees frightens him. Short black messy hair, black heartless eyes, muscles tensing up like a caught animal. The appearance of a wild beast with no fear to kill. J'ohn stares at Zero as he enters his mind.
J'ohn looks around and sees a circle of mirrors, cracked mirrors. He sees two paths, one to the left, the other to the right. He decides to take the right path leading him to hit his face on a pane of invisible glass. He goes to take the other path and he notices a red zero in front of it. The path leads him into another ring of mirrors. This time the cracked mirrors show an image besides J'ohns reflection. It shows Black Canary using her sonic scream. There are four paths this time including the one J'ohn entered from. The path he takes is the one in front of him, which is marked with another red zero. This takes him to yet another circle of mirrors this one showing Icicle Jr. using some of his ice powers. He continues like this following the paths marked with the red zeroes, each chamber of mirrors revealing another meta-human. He must've pat through at least fifteen chambers before hearing a weak voice cry out, "Help me..please." J'ohn quickly passes onto the last chamber which hols a eek shaggy hared, starved looking, wide eye boy. "I'll help you, I'll try to fix your mind." J'ohn tells the boy.
"You can't repair what was never there." The boy returns.
"But I can try, I'll make a construct to hold your mind together."
"It won't solve the problem just lesson it."
"It's a start." J'ohn states as the mirrors of this chamber shatter, the ground collapsing underneath the boy. "No." J'ohn screams as he uses his mental powers to hold the boy's mind together. The mind repairs itself and is restored to a point that is a little more stable than what it was at the start of J'ohn's journey.
J'ohn then returns to his body.
"Thank...you...J'ohn." Zero states roughly before losing consciousness.
"It looks like you did it." Batman says calmly.
"No, I just built a temporary support system. It won't last forever, and it didn't completely fix his mind, it only made it a tad bit stable." J'ohn returns slightly distracted.
"What's distracting you?"
"Cadmus has made the ultimate abomination, he's just a collection of meta-human genes they didn't even give him a proper mind or brain, he was an animal, my construct is the only thing giving him the ability to form a remotely human thought."
"So a close eye will need to be kept on him, preferably someone with the power of mind control, suggestion, or psychic powers." Batman states before J'ohn leaves, but he himself stays looking into Zero's cell.