I hope you all liked my first chapter.
I got six reviews from my last chapter which im very grateful and i did get some people pointing it out some of my grammar and spelling I need work on. I completely understand and thank you all for being nice about it and thank you for likeing my first fan-fiction. Anyway hope you all like chapter two.. a new offer.
The kyuubi was carring naruto unconscious body on his back and was running out of the land of rivers. he was heading to the abandon land the kyuubi had to pass through a few other lands and villages to get there. Luck was on the kyuubi side not getting spotted by any human, last thing he need to do now was to swim to the land. he was taking naruto to the abandoned land. when he got there it was a big long field of green grass. there were some hills.. there were some big forests.. the kyuubi was looking to get some were to rest. the kyuubi found a new cave that will be his new home.
Naruto has been unconscious for two weeks now..he started to wake up and see he was in a cave that is dark but warm.
"Am i dead? is this hell or someing?" naruto says to himself.
"NOPE YOUR STILL AILVE KID." kyuubi said behind him.
Naruto turned his head around and gasped to here and see the kyuubi voice telling him he is still ailve.
"What going on im still alive? i thought i was going to die after eating that cursed fruit you gave me." naruto said calmly he was still exhausted.
"KID IM EVEN MORE SURPRISED YOU ARE ALIVE AS WELL. TO HAVE NINE TAIL'S LIKE MINE. Kyuubi said he trying to see if naruto knows or not that he has nine tails.
Naruto sat up and looked at the kyuubi confused.
"What are you talking about i dont hav…" naruto stopped talking when he look down to his feet and saw that there were yellow nine tails. naruto was starting to freak out he was about to scream and immediately put both hands on the sides of his head and felt something long and furry he realised his ears got longer.
"wh...WHAT DID YOU DO TO ME?" naruto screams out.
"KID KID CALM DOWN AND SHUT UP SO CAN I EXPLAIN EVERY THING TO YOU." kyuubi yelled at him trying to get him calm down.
Naruto still cant get over that he still has fox ears and tails on his body.
"WHAT DID YOU DO TO ME., TELL ME!" naruto screams even more louder then before.
"KID IF YOU DONT CALM DOWN I WILL KNOCK YOU OUT! SO CALM DAWN KNOW." kyuubi yelled at him again.
Naruto took a deep breath trying to relax.
"Ok ok what is it you need to tell me?" naruto said while trying to get himself to be calm down and trying to get up.
The kyuubi explained everything to him up to when he brought him to his new home. "ANYWAY KID YOU WERE OUT FOR TWO WEEKS BEFORE YOU DECIDED TO SCREAM IN MY EARS ABOUT YOUR NEW FOX TAILS AND EARS." kyuubi yelled at him again.
"Ok OK im sorry." naruto said.
"NOW THEN TH.. WAIT DID YOU SAY SORRY TO ME." kyuubi said looking confused at him for a moment.
"Yes i did not know you have such strong hearing." naruto said.
"WELL KID I DID NOT EXPECT THAT FOR A HUMAN TO SAY TO ME." kyuubi said.
"Ok now thats over what about you telling me why did i get fox ears and tails from eating that?
"OK THEN LETS GET STARED WITH THE DISCUSSION OF YOUR NEW BLOODLINE THEN." KYUUBI SAID.
"New bloodline?" naruto said confused.
"WELL KID SINCE YOU SOME HOW SURVIVED EATING MY TAIL BEAST FRUIT I WILL TELL YOU.. BUT I THINK YOU NEED TO KNOW FIRST HOW ALL TAIL BEAST DEMONS CAME TO BE. ONE THOUSAND YEARS AGO THE MAN KNOWN AS THE SAGE OF SIX PATHS. HE BEGAN THE SHINOBI WORLD. GIVING CHAKRA TO MANY PEOPLE AND TEACHING THEM HOW TO USE IT. HOWEVER THE SAGE OF SIX PATHS GOT ALL THE CHAKRA FROM THE MOST POWERFUL DEMON KNOW AS THE DIVINE TREE HE TURNED INTO THE JUUBI DEMON OR AS THE TEN TAIL DEMON. HE WAS ABLE TO SEAL IT INTO HIMSELF MAKING HIM THE FIRST JINCHUURIKI OF THE JUUBI AND SOO…" KYUUBI WAS TRYING TO FINALY FINISH THE STORY BUT WAS INTERRUPTED BY NARUTO.
"OK BUT WHAT DOES ALL OF THAT HAVE TO DO WITH ME? WHERE ARE WE NOW KYUUBI? WHEN ARE WE GOING TO THE PART WHERE YOU CAME FROM AND MY NEW BLOODLINE YOU MENTIONED?" naruto yells out.
"KID SHUT UP I WAS JUST GETTING INTO ALL OF THAT NOW WILL YOU LET ME FINISH THE STORY?" kyuubi said.
"Ok fine but you dont have to yell the story in my ears and you have been yelling since i woke up." naruto said."
"KID I TALK LOUD WHAT DO EXPECT FROM ME BRAT." KYUUBI SAID TO HIM.
"Allright fine i get it." naruto said.
"TO MAKE SURE THE JUUBI WOULD NEVER COME BACK HAGOROMO USED THE CREATIONS OF ALL THINGS TECHNIQUE TO SPLIT THE JUUBI CHARKA INTO NINE VERSIONS OF TAIL BEAST DEMONS AND ONE OF THEM WAS ME KID. THE NINE TAIL FOX KING OF FOXES. I WAS KNOWN AS AND THE OTHER EIGHT TAIL BEAST ARE MY BROTHERS AND SISTERS HAGOROMO THE ONE WHO MADE US AND TAUGHT US. MANY THINGS LIKE THE TAIL BEAST BOMB JUTSU. AND TOLD US STORYS ABOUT HIS LIFE AND ALL OF HAS ONE SPECIAL JUTSU EVEN THOUGH WE ARE NOT JUUBI NO MORE. WE ARE STILL APART THE DIVINE TREE ROOTS. SO WE CAN STILL MAKE ITS FRUIT. WE ALL CAN MAKE A TAIL BEAST FRUIT THAT CAN BE GIVEN TO A HUMAN. IT WILL TURN THEM INTO THE MOST POWFRFUL AND DANGEROUS WARRIOR'S THAT CAN KILL ANYTHING IN SIGHT. BUT THE CHARKA IN THERE BODIES WILL BECOMES TO MUCH FOR THEM TO HANDLE AND IT WELL KILL THEM IN A FEW MOMENTS BUT HE TOLD US.. IF A HUMAN SURVIVED EATING ONE THEY WILL BECOME HALF HUMAN AND HALF TAIL BEAST DEMON. SO DO YOU GOT ALL OF THIS KID?" kyuubi said.
"Yes i think i do but what about my new bloodline you keep talking about?" naruto said.
"NOW YOU ARE A TAIL BEAST HYBRID.. NOW WHAT THAT OLD MAN SAID TO ME IS.. THE FIRST THING IS YOU HAVE TO UNLOCK IS A NEW KEKKEI GENKAIS AND HAVE YIN AND YANG ABILITIES. AND CAN USE THE TAIL BEAST BOMB JUSTU LIKE THE REST OF US TAIL BEAST CAN DO. THE NEW LOOK WHICH IS THE NEW EARS AND TAILS. FINALLY IF YOU HAVE KIDS THEY MIGHT HAVE CREATED THERE OWN KEKKEI GENKAIS OR MIGHT GET ONE THAT ALREADY EXISTS." kyuubi said.
"Well this is a lot to take in. i must admit i did not expect this." naruto said.
"Yes now that it's over do you have any questions?" kyuubi said.
"Well i didnt know why you would be telling me all of this and i dont know why you would bring me here. im just curious." naruto said while looking at him."
"LOOK KID YOU SURVIVED SOMETHING THAT SHOULD HAVE KILLED YOU. I MEAN THIS KID.. YOU HAVE BECOME VERY INTERESTING TO ME. kyuubi said.
'Im am just shocked that he said that about me' naruto thought to himself.
"NOT IN ANY OF ALL THE TIMES I HAVE BEEN AROUND.. EVEN WHEN I LOST THAT OLD MAN, I HAVE NEVER SEEN A HUMAN SURVIVE AND BECOME A NEW DEMON FOX. I BROUGHT YOU HERE TO OFFER YOU TRAINING FROM ME." KYUUBI SAID.
"I dont know about this." naruto said as he was nervous about this offer.
"KID I KNOW LITERALLY EVERY THING ABOUT YOU. I HAVE SEEN THROUGH YOUR EYES, I KNOW WHAT YOU THINK AND DO. I KNOW WHAT YOUR QUESTIONS ARE, YOU WANT TO KNOW WHO YOUR PARENTS ARE.. AND WHY DID THE FORTH OHKAGE MAKE YOU MY NEW JINCHUURIKI WHEN YOU WERE A NEW BORN THAT'S WHEN THIS ALL STARTED" kyuubi said.
Naruto finally stands up and looked at him and said "How do i know you're not lying to me about this?" naruto said wondering if he is telling the truth what the kyuubi just said.
"KID QUESTIONS AND MORE QUESTIONS AFTER I THOUGHT IT WAS JUST TWO? LOOK IM NOT A DEMON THAT TELLS LIES AND TRIES TO GET INTO YOUR HEAD. IM JUST GIVING YOU A OFFER. IF YOU WANT IT.. GREAT IF NOT THEN GO AND SEE WHAT YOU CAN BE WITH OUT MY HELP. THERE IS A LOT I CAN TEACH YOU.. BUT IF YOU DONT WANT THIS OFFER OF MINE THEN YOU WILL NEVER FIND OUT MANY THINGS I CAN TEACH YOU. kyuuby said.
Before naruto could say anything the kyuubi had one more thing left to say..
"IF YOU WANT PROOF THAT IM NOT LYING ABOUT SEEING THOUGH YOUR EYES.. I CAN SAY A FEW PEOPLE'S NAMES THAT YOU KNOW BACK AT THE CURSED VILLAGE .THAT OLD HAG NAMED TSUNADE WHO BANISHED YOU AND THAT IRUKA WHO SAVED YOUR LIFE FROM BEING TRICKED IN TO STEALING THAT FORBIDDEN SCROLL. SASUKE THE ONE YOU FAILED TO BRING BACK TO THE VILLAGE THAT GOT YOU BANISHED FROM THE LAND OF FIRE. SHOULD I GO ON?" kyuubi finally finished what he was saying.
Naruto eyes widen in shock. naruto knew there was know way he could know all about that, but this got naruto to think about this offer now.
'What can this fox teach me that i dont know with out his help?' naruto thought.
Naruto can see the kyuubi was waiting for a answer.
"WELL KID WHAT IS IT GOING TO BE." kyuubi said.
Naruto looked down and thought about this offer for a few moments and looked back at him and said to him " i still need a little more time.
"VERY WELL KID I CAN WAIT FOR YOUR ANSWER BUT RIGHT NOW IM GOING TO SLEEP. COME BACK TELL ME WHAT YOUR YOUR ANSWER IS IN THE MORNING." last thing the kyuubi said befor going to lay down to sleep.
Naruto saw a way out of the cave and naruto eyes widen to see a big long field of green grass as far as the eye can see.
'Were is this place.' naruto thought.
Naruto sat down andwatched a beautiful sunset. he was more relaxed from eveything that the kyuubi told him.
Naruto lay down on the grass and closed his eyes and stared to think about the kyuubi offer.
'Should i or not?' naruto thought about this offer.
Naruto stared to remember back at the time when kids made fun of him for being dead last or a weak.
"Why do you think you can be a ninja? your worthless and a weak loser."
"Ha ha ha just try it loser you cant beat any of us."
"You know i bet your family left you just because they knew you were nothing but worthless to them and thats all you will ever be..a loser so get lost!"
"JUST SHUT UP." naruto yells out.
Every kid was just laughing at him.
'Why am i remebering these times.' naruto thought.
Naruto just started to remember why he was banished.
"naruto you are hereby banished from the land of fire for failing to bring our beloved last uchina back in our village. i dont know why we let you be a ninja to think you being a hokage? your nothing and worthless to this village now go and never come back you pest." eveyone shunned him in the village. Naruto kept hearing the same stuff.. what they said about him over and over and louder and louder. DEMON FREAK.. LOSER, MONSTER, WEAK, WORTHLESS DEMON and finally hearing to him self.. YOUR NOTHING he just collapsed on to the ground and stared to scream so loud he woke up and realizing he most have fallen asleep and saw the sun was risng up.
"You have got to be kidding me.. another nightmare again about my horrible life in that village." naruto said to himseft as he dropped his head back to the ground.
Dream or not what he was remembering and he thought of things in the past of all the pain he went through and realised this offer might be his only chance he has of making a real name for himseft in this world.
'I cant believe im going do this.' naruto thought to himself..
"Well better do it this now then never." naruto thought.
Naruto got back up and walked back in to the cave to find the kyuubi was waking up naruto was coming up in front of him and stopped a few feet from the kyuubi.
"SO KID HAVE YOU MADE YOUR DECISION YET." KYUUBI SAID.
"Yes." naruto said.
"WELL THEN WHAT IS IT." kyuubi said.
"Yes i want this offer i want to see what you can teach me." naruto said while looking at the kyuubi eyes.
"KID IM GRATEFUL YOU ACCEPTED MY OFFER." kyuubi said with a small grin on his face.
"Kyuubi will you stop calling me kid? its geting really annoying and just call me naruto you know."
The kyuubi rolled his eyes over and looked back at him and said "WELL FINE IF YOU AGREE TO STOP CALLING ME KYUUBI AND CALL ME BY MY NAME KURAMA FOR NOW ON CAN WE AGREE ON THAT?" kyuubi said.
"Very well sensei kurama when do we start training then?" naruto said trying to sound smart.
"Soon." kurama said something quietly for once.
Naruto for some reason in the back of his head starting to get excited for this new life of his.
For the next three years this world will soon know the golden fox demon.
The end.
I hope you all enjoyed chapter two. I was struggling with this chapter there were a lot of ideas swirling in my head. Lol
Ps I just started deviant art. that shows the golden fox demon fanfiction name to find my art work on my user name on the sight is hgbbhim.
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