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CHAPTER 2
As I awoke from my painful fall in the street I tried to notice where I was and hoping it was mostly a bad dream. But when I opened my eyes I knew it wasn't and I had to live this life out. As I sat up I felt an intense stabbing pain in my chest and ribs and as I grasped my rib cage I felt a linen cloth around my chest. I pulled the wool covers off my body to see I was bandaged up and I don't remember if I saw anyone grabbed me off the street so they must have done it while I was out. Then I realized that I am in trouble. My basic rule is to not be in an unfamiliar environment with people you don't know who can attack at any moment.
As soon as I got up I felt dizzy but a very intense warm sensation filled my body. I started to fill up with rage as I knew the outcome of my weakened state was going to be the death of me. As I reached for the night table I found a bowl of water and I washed the dirt and dried blood from my hands and what i could feel on my face then I looked around for a weapon of some sort. I saw the doorway covered with a sheet and I saw shadows so I started to hide in the corner and attack because the act of surprise was on my side.
I leaned up on the wall as they stepped through the doorway and I threw a punch with any energy I could muster up. To my dismay they moved and they thrusted a powerful palm strike to my chest and all I could do is fall to my knees and hold my chest and as I look up there is this cocky looking guy. He said to me "you think your sneaky I am a master assassin and I could hear you breathing heavy. Don't try to do that again or I will end your life. But you're welcome because I and my family saved your life." And with that I passed out yet again from the pain.
When I regained consciousness I saw this girl she looked like she was young maybe a teen like me. She grabbed a wash cloth and dipped it in cold water and put it on my forehead and said "I am sorry for my brother he is stubborn and kind of full of himself. Try not to mind him though he always means well. By the way my name is kiko." I lean up and just looked at her she seems to look the same age as me which I was 16. I took a deep painful breath "yeah he probably does but he is just arrogant and ignorant.
I have a few questions for you because I am confused and a little hazy on the details of the past night." She nodded in approval to answering them and then I went bat crazy asking them. "Who found me? How did I get here? What happened to me? Where are we? Do your parents know that you're taking in a stranger like this?" she just looked at me stunned and took a minute to process all my questions. She looked at me calmly and answered all my questions but hesitated on one.
"I found you on the side walk and I was worried. My brother picked you up and we both carried you here. As of what happened to you we are not sure but you were very injured. We are in the spare room of my hut which is in the fire nation." She looked down and I saw a tear fall from her eye. "My parents were killed in a raid and I and my brother have been scavenging around to survive." She wiped the tear away and got up to get another blanket and she walked back to my bed.
"I am sorry I didn't know about your parents." She looked at me "its ok I didn't expect you to but we are slowly getting over it but it's still hard to cope with." She sat on my bed and wrapped herself in the extra blanket and looked at me. "I hope you don't mind right now I am lonely and hiro went to go search for food." I looked at her "so hiro is your brother." She giggled "no it's the three ton platabear under your bed of course it's my brother." I laughed and then stopped to analyze what she just said to know either she was kidding or being serious about a three ton platabear living here. So I just stayed quiet and watched her drift off to sleep.
Then I laid back and stared out the window and looked at the moon. I wondered if this life would work out for me. Maybe it would maybe it wouldn't but they always said you only live once. So I think I am going to live this life out. As I closed my eyes I felt kiko crawl up to me and lay beside me. I knew she had a hard life and so did I maybe we can help each other out. I closed my eyes and drifted off to sleep.
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