Hello again. I don't have much to say today. Review: BLAKE: thank you. Have you ever heard of grammar? Disclaimer: I own nobody except for Jaimie. On with the story.
Jaimie inhaled loudly. "My name is Jaimie Sparx I'm ten years old I live at 84 Flora street I already told you that I ran out of bread I'm here 'cuz I wanna be a titan and I have 22 cats 'cuz I said so." She said at superspeed.
Blink. "Well, okay then." Said Beastboy, slightly dazed by how fast she could talk. Robin snapped back to his senses first. No duh. He began to act responsibly, by asking "uhh, do your parents know you're here?"
Jaimie's hair fell over her face and she looked at her feet, mumbling something that sounded like "donut penny".
That's what Beastboy thought she said. Which caused him to say," DUDE! THERE ARE PENNIES WITH DONUTS ON THEM? WICKED!"
"Huh?" Jaimie said. "Oh! That isn't what I said." A quiet "aww, darn!" from Beastboy was heard. Jaimie said," Anyways, I guess I –"
"Hang on." Robin cut her off this time. It's getting dark, and the city is dangerous for little kids at night. We'll have to take you home." He typed "84 Flora street" into the big computer. It came up with a small box that said: Flora street found. City sector 17.
Robin clicked "ok" and another box popped up. "Error. The following address does not exist: 84 Flora street.
"That's weird", Robin said. "Must be a bug in the system. I guess we'll just go to Flora street then." Jaimie just sort of whimpered so that nobody could hear. Then she realized something. "HEY! IT'S NOT GETTING DARK! IT'S NOT EVEN NOON!" Robin turned to face her and gave her a weird look. The others started to giggle. Robin was wearing big, black sunglasses over his mask! "what?" he asked. Raven, who WASN'T giggling of course, gestured to her eyes.
"Gah!" Robin exclaimed, pulling them off and stuffing them in his belt. Between laughs, Beastboy said, "What were you doing, playing spies?"
Turning red, Robin said" Anyway…now let's go and find 84 flora street!"
There ya have it, folks. Next chapter will be delayed a bit more, because it's not written yet. R&R!
smart one
There's the second chapter of smart one's fic. R&R! -RL#3
