The Rise of Ash
orginal concecpt by Zyonzillia
rewritten by ShiningShadow1965
all the characters belong to Hasbro,Nintendo,Gamefreak etc. The artwork on the cover belongs to AmeUchikina-Chanof Deviantart check out his website for more of his art.
Chapter 2
The darkness surrounds me as I was trying in desperation to find my Pikachu I was feeling around in the pitch black of the darkness, in hoping to find my loyal friend to protect him and make him feel I didn't abandon him. For everything I hope for it was to no avail I can't find him, I'm losing everything in my grasp my pokemons, my friends, and even my faith within my self as a confident trainer. What should I do at this point give up? Maybe those three are right I'm nothing but a nobody in everyone's eyes as I sink further and further into the abyss of darkness and I hope my death in this unknown world I'm going to will help me make my death a quick and painless one. As this is happening my body was feeling very funny at first I didn't react to it then as I go deeper and deeper in the portal that tingling was getting worse by the seconds and that sensation was getting worse on my arms and legs when a sudden pain shoots through my legs I fell to my knees as the pain was going through every inch of my body as I scream in agony the clothing on my body was ripping apart and I hear my bones are snapping apart and reforming in several places. I continue to scream and was tearing up in my eyes and starting to cry for the first time I was crying for someone to comfort me to hold me and tell me everything will be fine I promise you this Ash, but as I feel it i don't feel it in my heart after all was done to me I'm lost, alone, hurt, suffering, so many questions for myself and the world I'm going to, to understand where am I?, and what am I?
As I see the light at the end of the portal I smiled a bit at the whole ordeal that I'm finally come toward this strange new world in front of me and the one thought I whispered,
"Pikachu I'm coming, just hold on..."
as the darkness takes a hold on me as I passed out going through the light of the portal. As a new day is already starting in Ponyville as all the ponies are starting their morning routines by opening up their shops and getting their colts and fillies to school and getting the sky's more clearer for this morning as a rainbow colored trail was faintly seen as another cloud burst from the sky,
"Ten seconds flat oh yeah!." As the pony that we all know and loved in Ponyville Rainbow Dash was doing her job on this morning schedule clearing the sky's of clouds and being very awesome as Dash was doing her job with glee at the outskirts of the town we see our resident animal caretaker and element of kindness Fluttershy attending to her chickens feeding them with the rest of the animals waiting for their turn to be feed as Fluttershy was talking to them,
"Yay you being extra good today, I'm so happy for all of you including you Angel." As the fluffly white eared bunny acknowledged her with a thumbs up. All is going so well even at the crystal castle in the center of town was humming with activity, as the rest of the elements was taking care of things in the castle,
"I say since we put that root in the middle of the throne room the room has that ambiance of being safe at home." Rarity says,
"I'm so glad that we git this root here and as the rest of you girls who helped out made Twi very happy." Applejack says, as this conversation was going on we see Twilight Sparkle Princess of Friendship reading a book, and scroll, and writing some notes all at the same time when she got interrupted by,
"SURPRISE!" as a pink blur that popped from Twilight's tail, with streamers and all.
"PINKIE! stop scaring me like that." As she dropped her stuff that held in her lavender grasp, at that same time we see Pinkie Pie have a good laugh doing these things that Pinkie does. Anyway as things were going on in the castle there was an interruption from the pink party planner,
"Twitchy, twitch, twitch, huh? My tail is twitching why is it doing that? Is something is going to fall far from here? I wonder what my twitchy tail is telling me, something big is going to fall in the Everfree forest nearby Fluttershy's cottage I got to tell the girls." Pinkie thought,
"Girls we have a situation here the rest in the castle throne room looked at Pinkie and Twilight spoke,
"What is the problem Pinkie?"
"Twitchy tail." responded Pinkie
"Where and when Pinkie?" Asked Twilight,
"Everfree forest nearby Fluttershy's cottage, sometime later this morning." Responded Pinkie,
"Girls! You heard Pinkie lets go to the forest and find out what is going to fall there." Asked Twilight, as the girls left the castle they nearly crashed into Rainbow Dash as she was about to get in the castle and she said
"Hey!? Watch were you going and where are you going in such of a hurry?"
"One thing I tell you Dash twitchy twitch tail from Pinkie." Applejack responded, as Dash figured out the twitchy tail she smiled like a whole squadron of changeling drones invading Ponyville after that she said,
"ALL RIGHT! A fight to keep me up to standards with the Wonderbolts, where are they so I could kick their flanks." As she flew off in he same direction of the Everfree Forest with her friends.
Meanwhile at Fluttershy's cottage
While Fluttershy was feeding the last of her animals when she heard a shimmering sound from all around her cottage the animals heard it to and got really scared and ran off in different directions leaving poor Fluttershy all alone. She was shaking very nervously on the shimmering sound that was getting louder and louder Fluttershy did what she always do in these situations curl up into a ball and cower in fear at that same moment a bright light from above and away from the cottage flashed for a few seconds before it disappears at that same moment a body fell from the portal going straight down to the forest below, as the pony in question that is falling is an earth pony with a black spiky mane and tail with a cap on its head that is red on the back and on the brim with white in the front with a strange symbol on the from of the cap his light tan fur on his body his golden honey eyes that is there where his eyes are closed at this point and on his flank is a cutie mark of a Pikachu holding to a pokeball. As this pony was free falling really fast Ash still unconscious not knowing what form he has taken and what is this place he getting himself into, the velocity was picking up more and more and finally a loud boom was heard as Fluttershy still curled up in a ball felt the wind and dirt rushed past her. Her eyes still closed hoping this will pass very soon when she heard in the distance voices that she is glad to hear,
"FLUTTERSHY!" came from Rainbow Dash in the distance and then there were more voices,
"Fluttershy!" came Pinkie Pie after Dash made the shout towards her,
"Over here girls." Fluttershy waved to them with her butterscotch hoof as the rest of the mane 5 gather around their meek friend and asked her is she is alright, in which she nod and told them about this strange noise that scared away the animals.
"Shy do you know where the sound came from or what direction that loud boom came from." Asked Twilight,
"Uh,uh I don't know exactly but I think I came a few hundred yards or more inside the forest." Replied Fluttershy,
"Then that's where we going right now." said Twilight,
"What!? Are you crazy to go in that scary foreboding forest to look for something in there for what reason?" Asked Fluttershy,
"My twitchy twitchy tail told me to." Replied a overly hyper pink pony with a huge smile on her face, and bouncing up and down in place,
"Oh.," replied Fluttershy,
"well there is no time to waste. Let's go girls and find out what caused that boom." Twilight responded,
As Twilight and company was heading deeper in the forest a groan from further away from the cottage it was Ash and he is hurt badly as he try to stand up the pain in his head neck and chest were overwhelming making Ash fall back down in the ground grimmacing in pain. He opened his eyes and scanned around the forest looking for something nearby and he seen his favorite jacket torn to shreds, normally Ash will be livid with anger over his precious jacket and hunt down those responsible a good ass kicking, but that was the least of his problem he feels warm liquid on his head he put his hoof "hoof? Now its not the time for that I need to know how badly i'm injured and look for Pikachu right away." Ash thought and his fears are confirmed that his head is bleeding profusely and he is starting to see spots, and becoming very dizzy at this point when darkness overtook me and as I fell on the ground I could of sworn I heard voices in the distance, as Twilight and her friends found the colt on the ground bleeding they went to overdrive to save this mysterious colt as Fluttershy made a makeshift bandage for Ash's head and Dash and Twilight with the help of her magic encased Ash in a bubble to be transported to Ponyville General by both as they arrived in the hospital Nurse Redheart and the other nurses and doctors attended to Ash's injuries immediately and admitted him to a room where Ash rested and still hearing the voices,
"Is he alright?" one voice sounded female in nature,
"I don't know he seems fine but he does not wake up." Dash reacted after looking very closely at the earth pony called Ash Ketchum invading his personal space.
"Dash give him some space." Twilight reacted to Dash intrusion to his personal space,
"Give him time he just had a harrowing experience the doctors says he will wake up anytime soon." Twilight said,
"Hope its sooner I'm waiting for it right now than the later." Dash impatiently spoke, as this was going on Ash's eyes where fluttering a bit and started to open them and when he opened them he got a shock of his life,
"Twilight the colt is awake." Dash stated, Twilight headed over to the bed and looked into his golden honey eyes in which she was distracted for a brief moment before she asked the colt,
"Sir can you hear us?"
"I don't thin he can Twi." from a voice that has a country accent to it, As I looked around the room I kind of figured out I'm in the hospital of sorts and in front of me were six ponyta's and they are not on fire speaking to me, I looked at the purple one who is trying to communicate me as I looked at her she was saying something,
"Oh hello there are you ok?" As I looked at the purple ponyta I just nodded my head and spoke,
"what are you?"
Alright chapter 2 is done and I hope you will like it just read it and leave a review thank you again and also check out my other stories Rays of Hope, and Options in which a new chapter will be uploaded soon.