Here is chapter 2 and yes i did say that it was going to be longer but i changed my mind but i hope you like it so far for my first story hehehe
Chapter 2
-After morning broke I left towards the south hearing rumors of a group of people in that direction think:"maybe it's the new hide out for the akastuki so ill kill my brother and avenge my clan and family" as I got closer I stopped senseing strong chakra I manged to sense 6 but none of them was that of my brothers I then created a shadow clone and sent towards the hideout as it passed in the tree ino was on and got closer to the hideout-
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-I felt his chakra presence and got to my knees in an instant but then i noticed that there was his chakra coming from two directions and i figured the one that was going closer to the Akatsuki was a clone and the real Sasuke was in the other direction-
"I'm going after the clone"
-I start to run and i catch up to him some how but i stay behind him and hind my chakra so he doesn't notice-
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-my clone then gets as close at it can to the akastukis hideout as he focused chakra in his ear to hear from far he then heard them talking:"Itachi hasn't reported back" another voice is heard "I guess he's having trouble getting the nine tail fox either way soon he catch him but for now he's off going to the 3 tail beast" the clone stops listening in and starts to return back to me as I reached me I told me everything it hE heard as it dissappeared-
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-I felt th clone stop for a bit then turn the other way totally passing me up-
"God that damn Sasuke....You know I'm just ganna find him and confront him. It's really pissing me off even his clone does not notice me"
-I go in the direction of the real Sasuke and i find him just in time he clone had just poofed away. I poped in front of you-
"You have really gotten cold Sasuke-Kun you know that even your clone passed me up it's really sad"
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-I looked up to ino as she should up infront of me and spoke as I heard you I then grinned- "well if it isn't ino I have been sensing you but I've been ignoring you becuase you just another worthless leaf ninja that is going to fail in taking me back so don't waste my time" -I turn my back to you as I begin to walk away and then began to spring down the forest avoiding every tree ahead of me with a fast speed-
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-I started to run right after you and catch up-
"Well Well Well no surprise that you new why i was here and still very smart but there is one thing you are wrong about"
-I would run faster than you and stop right in front of you tackling you to the ground-
"I am not worthless far from it actually. Let me give you a tip Uchiha i am stronger than any Konoichi in Konoha. Even Tsunade admitted it. but hey your also right about the other leaf ninja being worthless i would leave but i have no where to go. I wanted to go to the sound village to be with someone who is still special to me but now that place is bye bye hehe"
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-I hear when you speak and then see how you get infront of me as you tackle me down and speak once again,I then push you off as you hit the ground and I get up- "you leave the leaf village and join the sound why should I even belive you your just saying things so I can lower my guard or until you can find a way to capture me and take me back to the leaf village" -I once again start to leave as I drop a paper bomb on the ground next to you as the tag begins to burn-
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"FUCK"
-I use a medic jutsu to immediately heal all the wounds from the bomb and i get up do some hand sign and point then to Sasuke-
"Mind freeze Jutsu"
-I freeze your brain to where your brain cannot function any body parts of you and as i stay in the position i say-
"Okay Sasuke you wanna be a bitch and not believe me well then i will let you go and get killed by your brother because i know you can't do it alone and i also wanna leave that place"
-I start to cry but not make it noticable-
"Because I'm the last one of my kind,I'm stronger then anyone else there,and everyone pretty much hates me because I'm still in love with a traitor,I'm no longer considered a Yamanaka,and i'm surprised they havn't kicked me out yet,and the only reason they put me on this mission was to get me to leave the village and they gave me no time limit because they know you won't come back and since i can't go back until i get you to come back that means i will never step once back into that village and i know all this because i read tsunades mind when she put me on this mission"
-I stop crying-
"And this is all true and if you still dont believe me then your an ass and your just going to get yourself killed"
-I release the jutsu and just stand there-
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-I hear all the things you say and think really quick as you tell me at last to forget it and to go get myself killed becuase I wouldn't stand a match to itachi I then once again think and decide to ask you some questions to see if it is true and by your hesitating answers would tell if your lying or not-"ok then you say they don't want you back then tell me what happened to those of the yamanka clan,why aren't you considered one of them since you still care their blood and last If I asked you to offer yourself to me and by offer I mean give me your body would you accept it and do as I asked" -the last question was met as a test if you said yes then that means there's a chance your telling the truth if you said no then you had been lying to me
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Thats chapter two thanks for reading please Review