talking "hello"

Thinking 'what the fuck'

demon/summon/ talking "what happened"

demon/summon/ thinking 'strange'

kido/jutsu "shadow clone jutsu" "hado #4. pale lightning"

Author notes will be in parentheses (hi) and location will be in an ampersand * konoha*

*This is my first time writing so don't be surprised that it's bad or I mess up on anything. Also, some characters will behave differently and the uchiha massacre never took place along with obito being dead. Also I'm american so I'm putting most things down in English. *


The scene the third hokage hiruzen sarutobi arrived on was not a pleasant one. At least 10 people on the ground with thousands of cuts on them along with one naruto uzumaki staring at him with cold, calculating eyes. "Naruto what happened here, and where did you get a sword?" he asks the young boy as he notices the sword strapped on his back. "They attacked me so I killed them and the sword came from my soul, I will explain in privet." naruto answers.

"Anbu, get this mess cleaned up, I want no evidence of it being here." hiruzen tells his anbu before grabbing naruto and body flickering to his office. After they arrived the third starts weaving hand signs and puts up a silencing seal. "Ok naruto no one can hear us so explain what happened." The third asks. "Of course"

*one explanation letter*

"So you mean to tell me that you have a sword with a spirit in it, can use techniques similar to jutsu but by chanting, you can have your sword turn into millions of blade fragments that look like sakura petals, can teleport similar to the flying thunder god technique, and walk on air. Did i miss anything?" asks one dumbfounded hiruzen sarutobi. "Well I also met the nine tails, but don't worry, he's fine. He was being controlled by someone with a sharingan on the last attack. He's actually willing to help me as long as I share my senses with him, for example, he can see what I see, and hear what I hear." naruto finishes."Ok as long as you trust him then i guess it's fine" the third says."Thanks gramps." "No problem naruto"

*six years later*

Today was an important day. It was the day of the genin exams. Naruto uzumaki looks over at the ones that might have a chance in the ninja world. (note all characters except naruto, he is wearing what byakuya kuchiki where's, will be wearing their pre shippuden clothes)These people are shikamaru nara, a smart but lazy kid, choji akimichi, a kind kid who loves to eat, shino aburame, a silent guy, kiba inuzuka with his partner akamaru, who is loud and rash, hinata hyuga, a girl who looks as if her own shadow scares her, sasuke uchiha, an emo type, sakura haruno, and ino yamanaka, both are fangirls to sasuke.(I'm too lazy to give a description of them, look them up if you don't know.)

All of a sudden the door opens and iruka umino walks in and tells the class to be silent. When the class ignores him besides a few, he decides to use the big head jutsu and yell "SHUT UP AND SIT DOWN" iruka yells. After a few seconds the class is quiet. "Ok i'm going to pass out the test for you to start you have forty five minutes. When you are finished hand me your test and head outside where mizuki is waiting for you fore the kunai and shuriken test." iruka explained

*five minutes later*

Naruto stands up and turns in his paper and heads outside while thinking 'that test was way to easy, the civilian council needs to allow the shinobi council to control the academy again.' "I agree kit, that was way to easy." the nine tailed fox, aka kurma says. 'Hey kurama, it's nice to see you awake.' naruto thinks to his furry companion. "Yeah well i hope you get to do something interesting soon, it's boring here." kurama complained. "Yeah yeah I know I know."

*forty minutes later*

"Ok to pass this test you have to hit 7/10 kunai and 14/20 shuriken." mizuki explained. "First will be shino" after almost of everyone is done with just me and sasuke left, mizuki calls sasuke up to go. "Ok sasuke take your time, you can start whenever your ready." mizuki tells the raven haired boy. *thunk* "9/10, good job sasuke, now for the shurikens." mizuki tells sasuke. Sasuke just nods and throughs the shuriken. One by one, occasionally doing three at a time. *thunk* *thunk* *thunk**thunk* "good job sasuke, you got 18/20 shuriken. In total you hit the targets ninety percent of the time."

"Naruto it's your turn."mizuki calls. "Lets see you beat what I got dobe." sasuke calls out to me as I walk past. "Maybe I will sasuke, maybe I will." I say as i pick up all the kunai and throwing all ten at once, hitting all of them dead center. I repeat the same with the twenty shuriken. "I believe i beat your score sasuke." naruto taunts. "Perfect score naruto good job." mizuki says through clenched teeth. "It's time for the final test, you have to perform the transformation technique, substitution, and five clones." iruka tells us after we arrive inside.

"Naruto please come in here" iruka calls me when it's my turn. As i walk into the room Inotes four logs in the corner, and a spider web on them. "Naruto please perform the transformation technique." iruka asks. I decide to transform into the last person that had senbonzakura. Byakuya Kuchiki. After undoing the transformation iruka asks "naruto who was that?" "that iruka was byakuya kuchiki, the last person to wield the zanpakuto that i have." naruto responds. After substituting with a log, and back, i make five shadow clones. "Do i pass iruka?" naruto asks. "Yes you do congradulations." iruka tells me.

*in the forest, midnight*

We find mizuki and iruka locked in combat. "Why mizuki, why are you betraying konoha?" iruka asks. "Why, because iruka, this place is week and is only holding me back, my master, orochimaru, can give me unimaginable power. Now say good bye." mizuki says as he removes a demon wind shuriken from his back and prepares to trough it. 'I guess this is it goodbye everyone' iruka thinks before he hears mizuki gasp out in pain. "Naruto what are you doing here?" iruka yells out after seeing naruto. "I'm stopping a traitor, what does it look like." naruto responds.

"Naruto do you want to know why everyone hates you?" mizuki asks. "I already know why." naruto answers. Naruto then points two fingers at mizuki and says "Hado #4. Pale lightning" then a bolt of lightning burst out of naruto's fingers and pierces through mizuki's heart, killing him instantly. "You alright iruka?" naruto askes. "Yeah i'm alright, how about i treat you to some ramen?" iruka asks naruto. "Sure if your buying." naruto responds, but before they leave a anbu shows up.

"Naruto uzumaki and iruka umino. Would you please explain what happened here?" naruto responds by saying "mizuki here was attempting to steal the forbidden scroll of sealing to give to his master, orochimaru, and attempted to kill iruka and myself." "understood, thank you both for stopping, the hokage wanted me to give you this." the anbu says while handing naruto an envelope. He then picks up the scroll and disappears in a swirl of leaves. Naruto then looks in the envelope and sees a note with a lot of dollars (I am using american dollars but no cents keep in mind) naruto reads the note aloud. "Dear naruto and iruka, for stopping a traiter, you are both being rewarded with an A-rank pay. Sincerely the third hokage hiruzen sarutobi." "well then, now let's go get food, except, im paying iruka." naruto tells the scarred teacher