My second chapter!! Woohoo!! Thanks for all the reviews and alerts! Thanks a bunch! Anyway, onwards to the chapter! For Narnia… And for Aslaaaannnn!!

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Disclaimer: I don't own Narnia but I own Arrieanne!


Trudging down the road, the Pevensie's were completely dumbstruck by the ruins that they were seeing.

"How come this is Cair Paravel? I-It's impossible!", Peter said shaking his head in disbelief.

"Take a look so you'll believe", Arrieanne said in a matter-of-fact tone.

"I think it is", Susan said taking an object from the ground when the other three came to their sister's side.

"Hey, that's mine! From my chess set", Edmund said taking hold of the object Susan was holding. It was a centaur carved in gold (A/N: But I'm not sure XD).

"Which chess set?", Peter asked.

"Well, I didn't exactly have a solid gold chess set in Finchley didn't I?", he said as Lucy's eye's widened.

"It can't be!", she muttered running to the other part of the ruin where four pillars stood followed by her siblings.

"Imagine a glass roof", the youngest said arranging Peter on the first pillar.

"And columns there", she continued now arranging Susan.

"That four slope", she said now positioning her self on the last pillar. There was complete silence though Arrieanne swear she heard a music playing.

"Cair Paravel", Peter said eyeing her while she crossed her arms and leaned on a wall.

"Told you so", Arrieanne said now going to the other part of the ruin. They all followed Arrieanne to see a big rocks buried. Edmund crouched to examine one of them.

"Catapults!", Edmund exclaimed taking the others by surprise.

"What?", Peter asked now looking completely puzzled.

"This didn't just happen. Cair Paravel was attack!", Edmund said standing up.

"King Edmund is right. Cair Paravel was attacked", Arrieanne said throwing a rock at a far end of the wall.

"But who?", Susan asked. Arrieanne was about to tell it when she remembered the story line.

"If I tell them, how about the suspense?"

"You'll know it soon enough.", she answered. Peter then walk into a certain wall which surprisingly still not crumbled into pieces and began to pull out vines. Helped by Edmund, they both moved the wall aside to reveal an old wooden door. Peter was about to punch it when Arrieanne took hold of his hand. He looked at her with a perplexed look.

"Let me handle it, Your Majesty", she said pushing Peter aside.

"I thought you still don't believe us in being the King's and Queen's?", Susan asked raising her eyebrow.

"I easily trust people but I don't believe easily", she answered giving them a cheeky grin while Lucy and Peter let out a laugh.

"At least she's opening up to us", Edmund whispered to Susan. Suddenly, Arrieanne punched the door and it was quickly followed by a kick and it opened. Her feet was in a perfect vertical line when suddenly..

"Ow!!", she moaned holding her foot while the other four burst into fits of laughter.

"You didn't have to do it", Peter said holding his stomach.

"And I thought you four are compassionate!", she snapped back clearly offended.

"Sheesh... Me and my clumsiness. I'll hate those Kung-Fu movies from now on"

"Sorry, can't help it", Edmund said grinning.

"Sorry my ass…"

"If only Queen Lucy's cordial is here", Arrieanne muttered after recovering from her sore foot. Peter then began to cut some part of his uniform.

"Do you have any matches, Your Majesty?", he asked when Edmund rummaged in his bag.

"I suppose… Will this help?", he asked holding out a flashlight.

"You should have said that a bit sooner!", Peter laughed.

"Don't use the battery too much. We might need it", Arrieanne informed. Edmund then turned it on and lead the way. There were flights of stairs and they saw statues with trunks in front of it.

"Just like the movie!"

"I can't believe it! It's all still here!", Peter cried after they all got to the bottom. Immediately, Lucy, Susan and Edmund went to their respective trunks and opened it. Peter was busy blowing some dust on a shield while Arrieanne was examining the room.

"Look how tall I was!", Lucy giggled holding out a big dress.

"You were older then", Susan chuckled.

"As opposed to hundreds of years later, when you're younger", Edmund said, an over sized helmet lay on his head and Arrieanne fought the urge to laugh.

"My horn!", Susan said catching the attention of all of them.

"What about it?", Lucy asked.

"I think I left it in my saddle, the day we went back", Susan replied. Peter then opened his trunk and took a sword, un-sheathing it and looking at it. They were talking about something when Lucy spoke up.

"So that mean.. That everyone we knew, Mr. Tumnus and the beavers.. Gone…", she said, her eyes beginning to water. Immediately, Arrieanne was on her side and was putting a comforting hand on her shoulder, a rare smile on her face.

"I understand", she said smiling while Lucy smiled back.

"Thanks, Arrieanne", she said and Arrieanne nodded.

"I thinks it's about time we know what is going on", Peter began.

"And time to change our clothes", Edmund said pointing to all of us.

"This should fit you, I kept it since it's one of my favorites", Susan said giving a blue dress at Arrieanne.

"Thank you, Your Majesty", she said taking the dress.

"And please, call us by our name's", Lucy said giving her one of her bright smiles.

"It's an honor, Lucy", Arrieanne grinned and began to change. After a few minutes, they were all done and we were heading out of the ruins. Lucy headed to Arrieanne and struck a conversation.

"Hey!", Lucy said.

"Hello", Arrieanne answered back.

"Why are you here all by yourself? Are your parents in Archenland?", she asked when Arrieanne visibly paled and stopped walking.

"Arrieanne?", Edmund called also halting his steps followed by Susan and Peter.

"M-My parents… Are dead...", she said while Lucy gasped.

"I'm sorry I asked! I-", Lucy began but Arrieanne cut her off.

"It's okay. I'm used to it", she said forcing out a smile. Arrieanne quickly changed the topic when she saw a boat with Telmarines in it.

"Finally! Trumpkin is here!"

"Look!", Arrieanne said pointing to a boat. Everyone looked to see the boat had stopped and two men were going to throw a dwarf at the river. Immediately, Susan sprung into action and fired an arrow while Peter, Edmund and Arrieanne un-sheathed their swords.

"Drop him!", Susan yelled, another arrow threatening to strike. The soldiers quickly threw the dwarf in the river and one of them made a move to get his bow when Susan fired another arrow at them making the two fall of the boat. With them gone, Peter and Edmund took their move, Peter saving the dwarf and Edmund taking the abandoned boat. After swimming up to the shore, Lucy took her dagger and cut the ropes on the dwarf's hand. The dwarf then coughed some water.

"Drop him?! That's the best you can come up with", the dwarf spat looking at us fiercely.

"A simple thank you is fine", Susan said.

"I was doing fine without your help", the dwarf smugly said when Arrieanne rolled her eyes.

"Talk about gratefulness"

"Maybe we should have let them", Peter said.

"Why would they want to kill you anyway?", Lucy asked.

"The Telmarines, that's what they do", the dwarf answered.

"Telmarines? In Narnia?", Edmund asked puzzled.

"Where have you been in the last hundred years?", the dwarf asked shaking out some water off his shoes.

"It's a long story", Lucy said. When the dwarf was able to take a good look at them, his jaw dropped.

"Oh you God's got to be kidding. You're the King's and Queen's of old!", the dwarf exclaimed.

"High King Peter the Magnificent", Peter said reaching his hand for a shake though the dwarf only stared at it.

"You should have left the last part", Susan and Arrieanne chorused, grinned and laughed.

"Probably", the dwarf chuckled.

"How about a spar?", Peter asked, annoyed .

"You don't want to do that boy"

"Not me, him", Peter said pointing at Edmund who, in turn, un-sheath his sword and got in a stance. Arrieanne offered her sword at the dwarf and he took it. Then, he was swinging his sword back and forth, luckily not touching Edmund. They began it again, the sound of metal to metal was heard in the air. Hitting a strong slash, Edmund disarmed the dwarf and put the blades tip at the dwarf's neck.

"Maybe the horn worked after all", was all the dwarf could say.

"What horn?", Susan asked while Arrieanne took her fallen sword.

"Your horn", Arrieanne replied putting her sword in its scabbard.


I'm done!! Hope you all like it!!
I hope I made Arrieanne less Mary Sue-ish. I did the best I could do!!
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