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Hall Of Fame
1) hailstar9090
2) Melanlolo (slytherin's girl)
I thank thee listed reviewers they gave me hope and fueled this chapter.
(Oh and to the anonymous person who corrected me of Eragon and Murtagh's brothership, thank you, and if I want them to have sex, I can make them have sex! If you don't like it, too bad!)
Oh yeah I'll be changing chapter 1 so leave me alooooooooone! lol
Hot Passion
Murtagh turned over, and put his arm over a surprised Eragon, "Murtagh," said Eragon, his heart beating faster, was what happening, what he thought was happening? "Ummmm, Murtagh, what are you…" He was cut off because, at that abrupt moment, Murtagh had kissed him. Eragon's heart started to pound his chest. Soon Eragon felt Murtagh's tongue urge his lips open. Eragon couldn't resist the temptation and allowed entrance. Upon entrance Murtagh's tong swarmed in, exploring all of Eragon's mouth that he could. Eragon couldn't help playing with Murtagh's tongue using his own after a full minute; they broke apart gasping for air. Then they looked at each other starring in frozen silence.
Murtagh made the first move he leaned in for another kiss but Eragon suddenly spoke, "Why did you kiss me?"
"Why you kiss me back?" Murtagh countered. Eragon seemed at a lost for words then he said, "Because I love you," That seemed like music to Murtagh's ears. And he said the words he'd been dreaming of replying Eragon for a very long time "I love you too, Eragon, more than anything in the whole world," He struggled to remember the words he'd practiced. Then he dove in for another kiss praying Eragon didn't stop him this time.
Eragon allowed Murtagh the liberty to explore his tongue in his mouth. Murtagh sure was straight forward, horny bastard. They soon started to take off each others clothes, till they both stood there naked, Eragon allowed his eyes to look over nude Murtagh, they're cocks were almost the same size though Murtagh's was a little bigger, (but he was older after all). Eragon looked at the person he loved more than anything, "Go easy Murtagh, this is my first time, O.K.?" Murtagh gave a smile, "I'm a virgin too, at least on the male sex side." He gave a smug smile, "But I'll be gentle, now turn around babe'," Eragon did as he was told, more than reluctantly.
Murtagh placed his penis in position to Eragon's butt hole, it was all he could do not to shove it in there,(for his over-erect penis was begging him to) but he went in slowly, Eragon gave a passionate moan as he did so. Soon Murtagh started going faster as Eragon's moans grew louder, till Murtagh picked up his lover and tuned him around on his back, "Open your legs," He said kissing him, Eragon did so as Murtagh started fucking him again.
"Oh, it feels so GOOD!" said Eragon as Murtagh fucked and masturbated him at the same time. He arched his back and put his legs around Murtagh's waste. "Yes!" he exclaimed, "Faster, OH, OH, YESSSSSSSSSS!"Than, Eragon said closing his eyes, "M-Murtagh! I'm Cuming!'' Eragon's hot seamen spread all over Murtagh, he took his penis out and returned the favor. Then they started licking it off each other. "That was wonderful!" said Eragon dropping his head on the pillow as Murtagh laid down on him. They then went to sleep in naked slumber.
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