Starkit's prophecy Commentary

by MoonlightSpirits

I know, I know this has been done but it's still funny. This is not a hate fic. Follow Starkit on a wild, Mary sueish, badly spelt adventure. Rated T for the occasional accidental swear.

2. Chapter 2

Chpater oen prouloge

The cats gathered around a pool. They all looked into it eagerly. A dark shape appeared on the surface. A blue she cat looked up. Her eyes were bright. I thought she was purple?

"There is a prophecy!" She said. "out of the darkness, stars will come and get rid of the evil tiger and holly." I wonder who they are *Sarcasm*

"Its about StarKit!"No duh A white tom said. "Shes going to save the forest," He looked at a gold tom by BlueStar. "she has powers nobody dreamed of." *Cough* Mary Sue *Cough* Said the gold tom. "Should we tell JayFeather?" He asked. "Yes." Said BlueStar. "he needs to know."

She walked away from the pool to tell JayFeather about the prophcy. Jayfeather: Nuuuu dun bring me into this!

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