Hey guys thank you for reading my first chapter you guys are all so nice for actually taking the time to read it. I know it is not that great but I have a good plot I just have a feeling that I am rushing this a bit. Please let me know if I am rushing anything at all thank you.
Chapter 2- Rose Riddle
A small girl with black hair and bright purple hair was walking around the house; her father was out with her mother. She hated her natural hair color so she used a potion to make her hair black so her father was getting more ingredients for the potion. Her natural hair color is neon blue. She always wondered why she never looked like her mother or father but she never questioned it.
She never really had a normal life. Her father was hated; of course he was the dark lord and all. She never knew why people hated him though. He was kind to her and sweet and she was spoiled. She sits down near a lake. She knew she was powerful, she asked her father if she could go to Hogwarts this school year and he had said no. Never. But that didn't change that she really wanted to go to Hogwarts. And her mother had said yes. "Rose Amber Riddle where are you?" her mother was calling for her
"I'm over here mother by the lake" Her mother came into view. Black long curly hair that always seemed to get in the way, her mother might not be the most beautiful woman but her mother was beautiful to her. Brown cold looking eyes "Rose dear please do tell one of the death eaters where you are going. I get worried." Her mother walked over to her running her fingers through her hair. "I'm sorry mother I wasn't thinking." Rose always admired her mother. "Mother why don't I look like you or father?" Rose had to know why. She just had to.
"Because, you are special Rose."
"How am I special mom?" Bellatrix sighs "you are a very strong wizard rose you took this form when you were a child and have stayed like that. Your father and I have no idea what you actually look like. You have always been in this form." Rose nods "Thank you mother."
"You're welcome daughter." There was no way Bellatrix was going to tell Rose that her parents had abandoned her because they could only take care of one twin. Bellatrix had been watching rose's twin Kira.
Kira was turning into a well-rounded kid except for that time 3 years ago when Draco and she were 16. Now Kira was with that red haired twin. What was his name? Oh yes Fred. If she told Rose she had a twin sister she would hate her twin. But if Rose found out for herself she would hate her twin sister even more because their parents abandoned her. 'Perfect' Bellatrix thought to herself. 'Let the twin take out the other twin.'