I got some kind of response to this so here the next chapter.
The Ender Flower
Chapter 2
A Walk Home
At the bottom of the mountain was a forest. As soon as he came up to the entrance of the forest he noticed it was mid-day. He would get home by night fall if everything went good. The young man started to walk in to the dark dense forest.
Walking thought the forest in the mud covered ground, he remembered being a little boy. His brother and him were running thought the same forest, it was raining hard but they didn't seem to care. They were play tag, but then his brother fell into a wet pile of mud. The mud stained his white shirt to a dirty brown. "Notch are you ok!?." "Ya, dude" his brother said as he grabbed his leg and made his fall back in to the mud, too; also getting his clothes stain as well. "You little idoit!" They laughe little like what he sayed never came out of his mouth. The man smiled at his memory of his childhood.
The smell changed from sweet pine of the forest, to the smell of burning wood. Soon the lush forest turned into a feild of burt wood and carocoal covered ground, making the grass gray.
He hanged his head to the ground at the signt of the horrable sight in frount of him. With eah step a cloud of ashes would follow behind. For miles there was burt trees and death. No animal, no creatures was seen or heard. You would think this place was abandon long ago. The truth is that is was abandon long ago. Spider made their house in the tree, creeper keep to their caves never exploding. Zombie and skeletons safe under the dense trees. Cows, chickens, and sheep grazed on the wet dew drop covered grass everyday. A place where he never needed to care about anything. Just a place to relax and enjoyed yourself. All like this until the fire happened.
The fire came because one day the rivers and ponds started to dry up. Rain never came for weeks. The sun cooked some dry grass on to fire and it took the whole forest with it, or everyone say how the forest fire started. But he know how the forest really started. Looking back at it was never easy.
After walking for hours he arrive at the entrance to a cave. His home. The sun was at sunset. Mobs would be coming out soon. Walking in he saw his friend Mike. A young man dress in a black jacket, grey shirt, white pants, and gold shoes. The hood of the jacket was on his head where his black hair hanged over his face. Eyes where red and under them a streak of red of red makeup.
Looking down to the floor. He had his glaze in the fire burning in the middle as he led agaist the wall of the cave. The man sat on the oppist side from his friend before taking some fish out and placing it on the fire. "Welcome back, Brine," Mike mange to say from his weak voice. "Hey Mike," he replied.
To be honest I have to chapter 4 all written out I'm just going to make you guy what because I don't give a fuck.