OMG! GoHaNViDeLSoN commented on my fanfic. Also I forgot to mention that Goku is alive in this story.

Comments :) :
victor0606 - That is a lot of information, very accurate, how do they know all that? Capsule Corp was hacked? this is very suspicious, by the way, interesting version :).

GoHaNViDeLSoN if you're reading this... Hello amigo xD.

Me: The world may never know...I was going to explain that in this chapter and he did read this XD.

GoHaNViDeLSoN - WoW! I'm humbled. Honestly, I'm new to writing and I definitely like the fact that somebody considers my fic good enough to do a re-model of it.

I, guess it was a nice start to the story. Really , liked it. And I would like to follow it to see as to how it proceeds.

And about my fic, I will update very soon. No worries , I have not dropped them. And thank you once again! I feel so honoured.

Good day to you,
~GoHaNViDeLSoN

Me: Thank you for following and you do write good fanfictions so I'm glad you haven't dropped them ;)

I was going to finish chapter 2 for my other story but I decided to do this instead.


Chapter 2: Insane Videl and ChiChi

"I will pay you to not show that video to that class." ChiChi said. "I'm sorry mam but we can not do that." A teacher said. "It's part of my curriculum now" "I'll pay you double the money! No, triple!" ChiChi screamed. "Sorry but I already told you that I can't do that." The teacher said in fear. At that time Goku appeared and stopped ChiChi from attacking the teacher. "Let me go!" ChiChi yelled. Goku used instant transmission to go home instantly.

"What was that for?! We need to keep our son in school!" ChiChi yelled. "I know but you were taking it too far." Goku said. "How else would this be solved?" ChiChi asked. "That brat should be proud of himself knowing that his school knows he is a Saiyan." A man with spiky hair, a blue spandex, and gloves said. "When did you get here Vegeta?" Goku asked. "I was here the whole time." Vegeta said. "He should let people know." ChiChi was furious and exploded. "YOU DON'T TELL MY SON WHAT TO DO!" ChiChi Screamed at the top of her lungs. "Where is he anyways? Trunks wanted to play with him and the other brat." Vegeta asked.

Flashback 30 minutes ago.

"Dad I'm bored! Can I play with Gohan and Goten?" A young boy drinking soda on a couch said. "Sure whatever." Vegeta said. "Dad! Can you go get them? I don't want to get up." The boy said. "Why do I have to do it? There your friends, little brat!" Vegeta yelled. "I don't want to get up, like I said." The boy said as he took a sip of soda. "If you want to have your little play time with Kakarot's little brat and his brother, then you go get them!" Vegeta yelled. "What if I said please?" The boy said with a smirk.

"You do it!" Vegeta yelled.
"No, you do it!" The boy yelled.
"No, you do it!" Vegeta yelled.
"No, you do it!" The boy yelled.
"No, you do it!" Vegeta yelled.
"No, you do it!" The boy yelled.
"No, you do it!" Vegeta yelled.
"No, you do it!" The boy yelled.
"No, you do it!"Vegeta yelled.
"No, you do it!" The boy yelled.
"AHHHHHHHHH!" Vegeta yelled.

Flashback end.

"Damn brat drove me insane." Vegeta said. "So where are they?" *cricket sounds*
"I think Gohan is doing his crime fighting...thing." Goku said "I thought Goten was at your house already." ChiChi said.
*cricket sounds*
"AHHHHHHHHH!" Vegeta yelled.

Mean while in the city...

"I am the voice of justice. Evil's worst nightmare. Savior of the streets of Satan City. I am Great Saiyaman!" Gohan said proudly. The criminals just laughed. "Don't make me use my power." Gohan warned. The criminals looked at eachother for a few seconds and laughed even harder. "That is it! I'll show you evil-doors what for!" Gohan yelled. "Whatever Great Loserman." The boss said. The criminals laughed unbelievably loud. Gohan was about to rush them when suddebly..."Hiya!" The boss went down like a pile of bricks. "It's Videl! We're sorry, we'll be taking him and we'll be gone!" The criminals said. "Hey! I had them right where I wanted them!" Gohan yelled. "Not you again!" Videl yelled.

And here ladies and gentlemen, is where my laptop crashed and I lost hundreds of words...Dammit Kami! *Random person: It's Dende now and it's been like that for so long!* At least I still have some of the writing. *sign* that is the sole reason why I stopped for so long. Not only did it happen once, it happened 500 thousand times. I calmed down enough so let the story continue!

"I'm just trying to do the right thimg Ms. Videl. I don't mean to interfere." Gohan said. "Of coarse you don't mean to! You never mean to!" Videl screamed. "You don't need to get mad about it." Gohan said. "Don't 'You don't need to get mad about it' me! Stop stealing my job!" Videl yelled. "Well, okay. I'll be on my way." Gohan stated as he flew off.

At the Son house.

"Gohan!" ChiChi screamed as loud as she could. 'Why is everyone yelling at me today?' Gohan thought. "Yes mom?" Gohan asked. "We are going to C.C. to get an explaination for all of this." ChiChi said. "I just got home..." Gohan was saying as he got hit with a frying pan. "Of coarse! My education always comes before everything else including fighting." Gohan said sadly. "Correct! Now let's go." ChiChi said. she grabbed Gohan and drove off.

I think I may have accidentally deleted something and saved but I don't know what's missing or if I deleted anything at all. Well SH...

Back at C.C.

"Trunks you little..." Vegeta was saying as he got hit with a frying pan. "Wow, ChiChi was right. This thing really does work." Bulma said. Bulma heard knocking on the door. Bulma went to open the door as Trunks and Goten laughed at Vegeta getting knocked out. "Hello ChiChi, hello Gohan." Bulma greeted with her frying pan still inher hand. 'Now everyone is getting hit with frying pans?' Gohan thought. "Bulma, why is Gohan's class in Orange Star High School watching a Saiyan documentary?" ChiChi asked. "Orange Star contacted me and asked for some footage of other forms of life." Bulma answered. "So you picked Saiyans?!" ChiChi yelled. "Think about it ChiChi. People won't know that..."

"Gohan is a Saiyan." Videl told Erasa. "That's silly Videl. Gohan isn't a Saiyan." Erasa said.

Erasa was Videl's friend. Best Friend. Erasa also attends Orange Star High School. They always study together and get good grades together. Currently they are at Videl's mansion.

"Think about it Erasa. Saiyans can go Super Saiyan. It changes their hair golden or blonde. The Golden Warrior not only looks like Gohan but has gold hair and the name "Saiyaman" has the word Saiyan in it." Videl said. "Wow...those butterflies on TV look amazing!" Erasa said. "Erasa, did you hear anything I just said?" Videl asked. "Huh? What was that Videl?" Erasa asked. 'Note to self, don't try to tell Erasa anything important, she won't listen.' Videl thought. "Videl, maybe Gohan is a Saiyan. It seems far fetched but he looks like the Golden Warrior and he could possibly change his hair gold." Erasa said. 'Note to self, when you think Erasa isn't listening, she will steal your ideas.' Videl thought.

Back at C.C.

"Bulma? Why did you stop talking mid sentence?" ChiChi asked. "Huh? Oh sorry about that. I was going to say that, People won't know that Gohan is a Saiyan. Gohan hasn't gone Super Saiyan in public since the Cell Games." Bulma said. 'I really don't want to be reminded of that right now' Gohan thought. "I guess you're right Bulma." ChiChi said. "Well, I'll see you around." "Bye ChiChi, bye Gohan."

Gohan went home and did his normal day activities.

The next day.

"Gohan wake up." Goten said. "I'm up squirt." Gohan said sleepily. Gohan got up and did his morning routine. Eat, brush his teeth, not notice his regrown tail, put on clothes. Then of coarse, get yelled at because he was going to be late. Gohan changed into his Saiyaman outfit and flew to school. He landed on the roof top and changed out of his Saiyaman outfit. He walked down the stairs and went to his classroom. Gohan was on time to class by 1 nanosecond.

"Ni Hao (Hello) class." The teacher said. "Today we will be continuing the video from yesterday. Does anyone remember where we left off?" The teacher asked. "We are in the second chapter of this fanfiction and we still don't know your name!" A random student shouted. "It's Mr. Jack but that is irrelevent right now." The teacher said. "We left off on the part where the Saiyans were going to overthrow Frieza." Videl said. "Thank you."

"The Saiyans would eventually try to overthrow Frieza starting with one brave soul who warned everyone about Frieza. Eventually, his elite class squadron was wiped out by Frieza's soldiers. Bardock killed the attackers and was the last of his squad Saiyan was known as Bardock. No one would listen to him. When the time came, the other Saiyans realized that Bardock wasn't lying. They formed a rebellion and Bardock was their leader."

'This Bardock looks like someone I've seen before...' Gohan thought. As the video was playing, Gohan was thinking about the mystery person who he met before. Videl started to spy on Gohan to see if he would do anything to give up his secrets.

'Who was that person?' Gohan thought. It bothered him that he didn't know. Bardock and Goku looked alike. Of coarse! 'If Goku my dad...Bardock...is my grandpa!.' Gohan thought.

"Frieza lifted one finger and launched a ki blast which destroyed Planet Vegeta without trying. Most of the Saiyans were wiped out. Only two full-blooded Saiyans and three hybrids remain."

The video ended and the bell rung. "Class we will have normal days tommorow so bring your normal school supplies." The teacher said. Gohan ran FTL: Faster Than Light and was gone in .00005 nanoseconds.

Videl tried to find Gohan but couldn't find him anywhere. "GOHAN!" Videl screamed so loud that the school shuck like an earthquake happened.


Well I hope you enjoyed his chapter because I worked on it for somewhere in between 3 hours and 4 hours. I had to write things, delete things, add other things where things needed to be. Also In these first 2 chapters Bulma tricked the school having 1 period school days just to watch a 2 minute long video. I forgot to add in the other periods so I decided to make that statement true. Also I'm too lazy to add it in.

Have a wonderful day and if you need anything I'll be at the newly built Jucy Phat in my area. Wow, 3 references in this chapter.

Reference List:
1. Stopping mid sentence and someone continues it somewhere else.
2. Mr. Jack 3. Jucy Phat

If you can tell me where all 3 of those came from I'll give you a special present. Some of them are probably references to a million different things but I'm thinking of certain ones.

Good luck ;)